SAT Writing : Identifying Sentence Errors

Study concepts, example questions & explanations for SAT Writing

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Example Questions

Example Question #741 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Sonya was in complete agreement with everything the speaker had said; if there is to be change, and someone must step up and be the leader. No error

Possible Answers:

everything the speaker

No error

was in complete agreement

and someone must

to be change

Correct answer:

and someone must

Explanation:

When using a correlative conjunction pair, the use of the word "if" signals the coming of the word "then." This means that the sentence should read "if there is to be change, then someone must step up and be the leader," making the correct selection "and someone must."

Example Question #742 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

John enjoys foods from many different culinary backgrounds, so it will be difficult for him to choose which dish he likes better between the Japanese sushi rolls or the Thai curry. No error

Possible Answers:

from

or

so it will

No error

which dish

Correct answer:

or

Explanation:

Given that John is choosing between two different options and the sentence uses the word "between" to describe his choosing between these options, "and" should be used to describe his selection of options, not "or."

Example Question #71 : Identifying Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors

Select the underlined portion of the sentence below that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Neither come with me, sir, or you're going to spend your evening in jail. No error

Possible Answers:

Neither

evening in jail.

No error

you're going

me, sir,

Correct answer:

Neither

Explanation:

Whenever you see the conjunction "either," it must always be followed by the correlative conjunction "or." As such, the "Neither" in the sentence above should be changed to "Either."

Example Question #72 : Identifying Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors

Select the underlined portion of the sentence below that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Neither the Duke or the Baron had anticipated that their liege lord was going to be present at the Summer Palace. No error

Possible Answers:

Baron had

the Summer Palace.

the Duke or

No error

that their liege

Correct answer:

the Duke or

Explanation:

Whenever you see the conjunction "neither," it must always be followed by the correlative conjunction "nor."  As such, the "or" in the sentence above should be changed to "nor."

Example Question #73 : Identifying Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors

Select the underlined portion of the sentence below that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Either the Mongols nor the Huns were the best horseman in history, but it's hard to choose between the two of them. No error

Possible Answers:

between the two

in history,

Mongols nor

No error

were the best

Correct answer:

Mongols nor

Explanation:

Whenever you see the conjunction "either," it must always be followed by the correlative conjunction "or."  As such, the "nor" in the sentence above should be changed to "or."

Example Question #74 : Identifying Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors

Select the underlined portion of the sentence below that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Not only have you failed your class, but you've disappointed Father as wellNo error

Possible Answers:

Father as well.

No error

your

you failed

but you've

Correct answer:

but you've

Explanation:

Whenever you see the conjunction "not only," it must always be followed by the correlative conjunction "but also." As such, the "but" in the sentence above should be changed to "but also."

Example Question #743 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Vincent van Gogh sold only a few paintings during his lifetime, but yet he is considered one of the greatest painters of all timeNo error

Possible Answers:

of all time

sold

but yet

greatest

No error

Correct answer:

but yet

Explanation:

This sentence contains a redundancy error. The conjunctions "but" and "yet" are synonyms; they mean the same thing, so only one or the other is necessary to convey the intended meaning of the sentence.

The answer choice "sold" is correct because it contains the simple past tense, which is correct for events that happened in the past and don't continue into the present.

The answer choice "greatest" is correct because it uses the superlative form (the "-est" form) of the adjective great, which is appropriate for comparisons involving more than two items.

The answer choice "of all time" is a perfectly correct use of an idiomatic expression.

Example Question #2 : Identifying Subordinate Conjunction Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Once I learned how to swim, I would never go in the water for fear of drowning. No error

Possible Answers:

I would never

No error

swim,

Once

for fear of

Correct answer:

Once

Explanation:

“Once” is the incorrect subordinate conjunction; it should be replaced by “until,” which is the only logical conjunction for the sentence.

Example Question #3 : Identifying Subordinate Conjunction Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Whether or nor they were in love, John decided he needed to break up with his long-distance girlfriend; the time apart was just too difficult. No error

Possible Answers:

No error

love,

break up

Whether or nor

girlfriend;

Correct answer:

Whether or nor

Explanation:

The proper form of the subordinating conjunction is “whether or not,” not “whether or nor.”

Example Question #44 : Identifying Conjunction Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed in order to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all. 

Anna is an amazing lawyer, but however she has many personal issues that often get in the way of her professional work. No error

Possible Answers:

No error

often get

of her

has many

but however

Correct answer:

but however

Explanation:

The sentence features a redundancy error—since "but" comes first in the sentence, there is no need to include the synonym "however."

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