SAT Writing : Identifying Sentence Errors

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Example Questions

Example Question #731 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

By the time her mother came home from work, Cecilia had not only cleaned her room, also taken out the trash and walked the dog. No error

Possible Answers:

,also

and walked the dog

By the time

work, Cecilia

No error

Correct answer:

,also

Explanation:

This question is checking for understanding of the correlative conjunction "not only . . . but also." The mistake in the sentence is the missing "but" in "but also." When using this construction, sometimes the "also" can be taken out but the "but" can never be since it changes the meaning. A corrected sentence reads "By the time her mother came home from work, Cecilia had not only cleaned her room, but also taken out the trash and walked the dog."

Example Question #732 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

After she came home exhausted from the soccer match, Tabatha had to decide whether she wanted to go to Sarah's birthday party nor just stay home. No error

Possible Answers:

decide

No error

to go

exhausted from

nor

Correct answer:

nor

Explanation:

This question is checking for an understanding of the correlative conjunction "whether . . . or." The trick is that the error—"nor"—brings up another correlative conjunction: "neither . . . nor." The difference between the two is that "whether . . . or" presents an option between two choices (staying home and going to the birthday party), whereas "neither . . . nor" rejects both of the things referenced. The corrected sentence would read "After she came home exhausted from the soccer match, Tabatha had to decide whether she wanted to go to Sarah's birthday party or just stay home."

Example Question #733 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Whether you intend to marry Eliza and not, you must start treating her with respect. No error

Possible Answers:

intend

her

must start

No error

and

Correct answer:

and

Explanation:

Whenever you see the word "whether," it must always be followed by the correlative conjunction "or." As such, the "and" in the sentence above should be changed to "or." This makes the correct sentence "Whether you intend to marry Eliza or not, you must start treating her with respect."

Example Question #734 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all. 

Phillip wanted neither to clean his room or to babysit his younger brother. No error

Possible Answers:

No error

or

brother.

wanted

to 

Correct answer:

or

Explanation:

Since Phillip wanted "neither" option, the word "or" must be replaced with "nor" to agree with "neither."

Example Question #735 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Not only have you failed to heed my advice, but you have done the worst thing imaginable, given the situation. No error

Possible Answers:

to heed

No error

Not only

imaginable, given

but you

Correct answer:

but you

Explanation:

Whenever you see the conjunction "not only," it must always be followed by the correlative conjunction "but also." As such, the "but" in the sentence above should be changed to "but you have also."

Example Question #736 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Whether you want to be a fitness nut nor not, you must eat fewer french friesNo error

Possible Answers:

Whether

want

No error

french fries

nor

Correct answer:

nor

Explanation:

Whenever you see the conjunction "whether," it must always be followed by the correlative conjunction "or." As such, the "nor" in the sentence above should be changed to "or." "Nor" is a correlative conjunction used with "neither."

Example Question #737 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Both Suzannah or Adrienne were excellent children; they always did as they were told. No error

 

Possible Answers:

excellent children;

always did

were told.

Both Suzannah or Adrienne

No error

Correct answer:

Both Suzannah or Adrienne

Explanation:

Whenever you see the conjunction "both," and it is followed by a conjunction, it must always be followed by the correlative conjunction "and." As such, the "or" in the sentence above should be changed to "and." "Or" is a correlative conjunction used with "either."

Example Question #738 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Both the Supreme Court nor the Senate are venerable political institutions in the United States of AmericaNo error

Possible Answers:

United States of America

No error

the Supreme Court

nor

venerable political institutions

Correct answer:

nor

Explanation:

Whenever you see the word "both" used as a conjunction, it must always be followed by the correlative conjunction "and." As such, the "nor" in the sentence above should be changed to "and."

Example Question #739 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

It was hard for the children to make the choice their parents had set before them; on their day off, they could either go to the new movie they'd been anticipating but they could invite their friends over for a pool party. No error

Possible Answers:

their parents had set

No error

go to the new movie

for the children to make

but they could invite

Correct answer:

but they could invite

Explanation:

The use of the word "either" implies that a choice must be made, and signals the coming of the word "or." The correct sentence would read "It was hard for the children to make the choice their parents had set before them; on their day off, they could either go to the new movie they'd been anticipating or they could invite their friends over for a pool party." This makes the correct selection "but they could invite."

Example Question #740 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

There was no way out of this sticky situation; the administration was stuck between a rock or a hard place. No error

Possible Answers:

the administration was

or a hard place

a rock

way out of

No error

Correct answer:

or a hard place

Explanation:

When using a correlative conjunction pair, the use of the word "between" signals the coming use of the word "and." This means that the phrase in the sentence should read "between a rock and a hard place," and makes the correct selection "or a hard place."

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