SAT Writing : Identifying Punctuation Errors

Study concepts, example questions & explanations for SAT Writing

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Example Questions

Example Question #81 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

As she was packing for college, Jenna made a list of items to take that included the following things; alarm clock, trash can, and pillows. No error

Possible Answers:

No error

to take

was

made

things;

Correct answer:

things;

Explanation:

When introducing a list of items following an independent clause a colon should be used, not a semicolon. Semicolons combine two independent clauses, or two sentences that could each stand alone. This is not the case here since "alarm clock, trash can, and pillows" cannot be its own sentence.

Example Question #82 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

We had several snacks to choose from; popcorn, chips, chocolate, and ice cream. No error

Possible Answers:

had

to choose

several

No error

from; 

Correct answer:

from; 

Explanation:

When beginning a list of three or more items following an independent clause, a colon should be used not a semicolon. Semicolons are only used to combine two independent clauses into one sentence.

Example Question #83 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Cindy is generally an outgoing person, however, tonight she hardly said a word. No error

Possible Answers:

No error

word

generally

person,

she

Correct answer:

person,

Explanation:

There should be a semicolon after "person" because the sentence includes two independent clauses. Separating two independent clauses with just a comma creates a comma splice error. Comma splice errors can be fixed by inserting a coordinating conjunction after the comma, replacing the comma with a semicolon, or replacing the comma with a period.

Example Question #84 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

The professor was not only known for her oratorical skills; but also for her compassion for students. No error

Possible Answers:

No error

students

her

skills;

was

Correct answer:

skills;

Explanation:

There should be a comma after skills, not a semicolon. A semicolon connects two independent clauses into one sentence. "But also for her compassion for students" cannot stand alone as a sentence.

Example Question #85 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

When I visited Spain with my parents, I really wanted to see four cities; Madrid, Barcelona, Valencia, and Sevilla. No error

Possible Answers:

wanted

visited

cities;

No error

When

Correct answer:

cities;

Explanation:

At the introduction of a list following an independent clause, a colon should be used, not a semicolon. The items in this list do not form an independent clause, and therefore should not be preceded by a semicolon.

Example Question #86 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Juan's grandmother was becoming frail quickly: she was getting thinner by the second. No error

Possible Answers:

becoming

grandmother

by 

No error

quickly:

Correct answer:

quickly:

Explanation:

There should be a semicolon after quickly rather than a colon, since there are two independent clauses in the sentence. Two independent clauses should be connected into a compound sentence with a semicolon or a comma and a conjunction.

Example Question #87 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Kinjal drives a Mercedes; Michael drives a Toyota. No error

Possible Answers:

Toyota

drives

No error

a

Mercedes;

Correct answer:

No error

Explanation:

The sentence is correct as written. The semicolon is correctly used to connect two independent clauses into one sentence. A comma and a conjunction, or a period would also have been acceptable options here.

Example Question #31 : Identifying Semicolon Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

He ate a large meal at breakfast; since he is so big. No error

Possible Answers:

No error

since

ate

breakfast;

big.

Correct answer:

breakfast;

Explanation:

There should be a comma after breakfast instead of a semicolon. "Since he is so big," is not a complete grammatical clause.

Example Question #32 : Identifying Semicolon Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Kristin despises eating green vegetables; however, her mother keeps insisting they are good for her health. No error

Possible Answers:

however,

No error

vegetables;

keeps

despises

Correct answer:

No error

Explanation:

The sentence is correct and the semicolon is correctly positioned, since it separates two independent clauses. A semicolon is an optional stylistic choice here, separating the clauses with a comma and a coordinating conjunction or a period would be equally correct.

Example Question #33 : Identifying Semicolon Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

She had two choices at that moment; give up or keep running. No error

Possible Answers:

No error

or

choices

had

moment;

Correct answer:

moment;

Explanation:

The word "moment" should be followed by a colon, not a semicolon. This is because semicolons should only be used to separate two independent clauses that could stand alone as two different sentences, which is not the case here. A colon here would correctly grammatically signal the beginning of the list.

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