SAT Writing : Identifying Phrase, Clause, and Sentence Errors

Study concepts, example questions & explanations for SAT Writing

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Example Questions

Example Question #23 : Identifying Correlative Conjunction Errors

Select the underlined portion of the sentence below that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Neither come with me, sir, or you're going to spend your evening in jail. No error

Possible Answers:

evening in jail.

you're going

me, sir,

No error

Neither

Correct answer:

Neither

Explanation:

Whenever you see the conjunction "either," it must always be followed by the correlative conjunction "or." As such, the "Neither" in the sentence above should be changed to "Either."

Example Question #31 : Identifying Correlative Conjunction Errors

Select the underlined portion of the sentence below that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Neither the Duke or the Baron had anticipated that their liege lord was going to be present at the Summer Palace. No error

Possible Answers:

the Duke or

Baron had

the Summer Palace.

that their liege

No error

Correct answer:

the Duke or

Explanation:

Whenever you see the conjunction "neither," it must always be followed by the correlative conjunction "nor."  As such, the "or" in the sentence above should be changed to "nor."

Example Question #32 : Identifying Correlative Conjunction Errors

Select the underlined portion of the sentence below that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Either the Mongols nor the Huns were the best horseman in history, but it's hard to choose between the two of them. No error

Possible Answers:

were the best

in history,

between the two

No error

Mongols nor

Correct answer:

Mongols nor

Explanation:

Whenever you see the conjunction "either," it must always be followed by the correlative conjunction "or."  As such, the "nor" in the sentence above should be changed to "or."

Example Question #33 : Identifying Correlative Conjunction Errors

Select the underlined portion of the sentence below that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Not only have you failed your class, but you've disappointed Father as wellNo error

Possible Answers:

but you've

No error

you failed

Father as well.

your

Correct answer:

but you've

Explanation:

Whenever you see the conjunction "not only," it must always be followed by the correlative conjunction "but also." As such, the "but" in the sentence above should be changed to "but also."

Example Question #71 : Identifying Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Vincent van Gogh sold only a few paintings during his lifetime, but yet he is considered one of the greatest painters of all timeNo error

Possible Answers:

greatest

of all time

No error

sold

but yet

Correct answer:

but yet

Explanation:

This sentence contains a redundancy error. The conjunctions "but" and "yet" are synonyms; they mean the same thing, so only one or the other is necessary to convey the intended meaning of the sentence.

The answer choice "sold" is correct because it contains the simple past tense, which is correct for events that happened in the past and don't continue into the present.

The answer choice "greatest" is correct because it uses the superlative form (the "-est" form) of the adjective great, which is appropriate for comparisons involving more than two items.

The answer choice "of all time" is a perfectly correct use of an idiomatic expression.

Example Question #2 : Identifying Subordinate Conjunction Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Once I learned how to swim, I would never go in the water for fear of drowning. No error

Possible Answers:

I would never

for fear of

swim,

Once

No error

Correct answer:

Once

Explanation:

“Once” is the incorrect subordinate conjunction; it should be replaced by “until,” which is the only logical conjunction for the sentence.

Example Question #1 : Identifying Subordinate Conjunction Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Whether or nor they were in love, John decided he needed to break up with his long-distance girlfriend; the time apart was just too difficult. No error

Possible Answers:

girlfriend;

break up

Whether or nor

No error

love,

Correct answer:

Whether or nor

Explanation:

The proper form of the subordinating conjunction is “whether or not,” not “whether or nor.”

Example Question #1 : Identifying Subordinate Conjunction Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed in order to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all. 

Anna is an amazing lawyer, but however she has many personal issues that often get in the way of her professional work. No error

Possible Answers:

of her

has many

but however

No error

often get

Correct answer:

but however

Explanation:

The sentence features a redundancy error—since "but" comes first in the sentence, there is no need to include the synonym "however."

Example Question #4 : Identifying Subordinate Conjunction Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Until my friends went ice skating, I would always stay at home for fear of falling down on the ice. No error

Possible Answers:

on the ice

No error

would always

for fear of

Until

Correct answer:

Until

Explanation:

The sentences uses the incorrect subordinate conjunction "Until"—"When" or "Whenever" would be better choices for the correct subordinate conjunction.

Example Question #72 : Identifying Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Whether and not the citizens agreed with the final decisions, the politicians felt that it was their responsibility to set laws that were fair for everyone. No error

Possible Answers:

for everyone

Whether and not

the final decisions

No error

it

Correct answer:

Whether and not

Explanation:

The form of the subordinating conjunction used here is incorrect—it should be "Whether or not" instead of "Whether and not."

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