SAT Writing : Identifying Phrase, Clause, and Sentence Errors

Study concepts, example questions & explanations for SAT Writing

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Example Questions

Example Question #3 : Identifying Correlative Conjunction Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

You can either tell him the truth and try to hide your mistake, but you should consider the consequences carefully; if you make the wrong decision, you may lose a friend. No error

Possible Answers:

No error

carefully;

mistake,

decision,

either tell him the truth and try to hide

Correct answer:

either tell him the truth and try to hide

Explanation:

The correlative conjunction “either” must be paired with “or,” not “and.” The sentence is punctuated correctly, with commas separating dependent clauses from independent clauses and a semicolon separating the two independent clauses.

Example Question #1211 : Sat Writing

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Yesterday, I had to decide between the high-paying marketing job or the low-paying freelance gig; I hope I didn’t make a mistake when I turned down the high salary. No error

Possible Answers:

mistake when

Yesterday,

No error

high-paying marketing job or

freelance gig;

Correct answer:

high-paying marketing job or

Explanation:

The correct conjunction to use with the word “between” is “and,” not “or.” You choose between a first option "and" a second option; you don’t choose between a first option "or" a second option.

Example Question #11 : Identifying Correlative Conjunction Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

As the rain poured down, the campers knew that they had to choose between bailing out their tents or packing up and going home. No error

Possible Answers:

poured

had to choose

bailing

No error

or

Correct answer:

or

Explanation:

The correlative conjunction pair "between...and" is used to describe a choice or comparison. In this case, the choice is between "bailing out their tents and packing up," making the error in the sentence as it is written "or."

The full, correct version of this sentence would read: "As the rain poured down, the campers knew they had to choose between bailing out their tents and packing up and going home."

Example Question #12 : Identifying Correlative Conjunction Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

The girls could never make up their minds about which movie to see; either the showing was too late and the theater was too far. No error 

Possible Answers:

and

to see

was

could never

No error

Correct answer:

and

Explanation:

The correlative conjunction pair "either . . . or" is used to show two contrasting options. Either option could be true, but only one can be true at a time. In this case, the word "and" should be replaced by the word "or" to complete the correlative conjunction pair. 

Example Question #21 : Identifying Conjunction Errors

Select the underlined portion of the sentence below that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Neither China nor America is doing enough to fight global warming. NO ERROR

Possible Answers:

NO ERROR

nor

enough

warming.

is

Correct answer:

NO ERROR

Explanation:

Whenever you see the conjunction "neither," it must always be followed by the correlative conjunction "nor." As such, the sentence above is correct as it is written.

Example Question #22 : Identifying Conjunction Errors

Select the underlined portion of the sentence below that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

You either need to start working harder, nor accept the consequences of your laziness. NO ERROR

Possible Answers:

start working

nor

NO ERROR

your

laziness.

Correct answer:

nor

Explanation:

Whenever you see the conjunction "either," it must always be followed by the correlative conjunction "or." As such, the "nor" in the sentence above should be changed to "or."

Example Question #23 : Identifying Conjunction Errors

Select the underlined portion of the sentence below that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Not only is Chicago a great city for restaurants, and it has great live music as well. NO ERROR

 

Possible Answers:

and

restaurants,

NO ERROR

great live

Chicago

Correct answer:

and

Explanation:

Whenever you see the conjunction "not only," it must always be followed by the correlative conjunction "but also." As such, the "and" in the sentence above should be changed to "but also."

Example Question #24 : Identifying Conjunction Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Neither fame or passion drove Kelly to pursue a career in music; she got into the industry solely for the money. No error

Possible Answers:

drove

into

music;

No error

Neither fame or passion

Correct answer:

Neither fame or passion

Explanation:

"Or" is the problematic word here - it should be "nor." "Neither... nor" is the correct pairing, not "Neither... or." "Either... nor" is also incorrect. In all cases it must be "either...or" and "neither...nor."

Example Question #25 : Identifying Conjunction Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

By the time her mother came home from work, Cecilia had not only cleaned her room, also taken out the trash and walked the dog. No error

Possible Answers:

and walked the dog

By the time

work, Cecilia

No error

,also

Correct answer:

,also

Explanation:

This question is checking for understanding of the correlative conjunction "not only . . . but also." The mistake in the sentence is the missing "but" in "but also." When using this construction, sometimes the "also" can be taken out but the "but" can never be since it changes the meaning. A corrected sentence reads "By the time her mother came home from work, Cecilia had not only cleaned her room, but also taken out the trash and walked the dog."

Example Question #26 : Identifying Conjunction Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

After she came home exhausted from the soccer match, Tabatha had to decide whether she wanted to go to Sarah's birthday party nor just stay home. No error

Possible Answers:

No error

exhausted from

nor

decide

to go

Correct answer:

nor

Explanation:

This question is checking for an understanding of the correlative conjunction "whether . . . or." The trick is that the error—"nor"—brings up another correlative conjunction: "neither . . . nor." The difference between the two is that "whether . . . or" presents an option between two choices (staying home and going to the birthday party), whereas "neither . . . nor" rejects both of the things referenced. The corrected sentence would read "After she came home exhausted from the soccer match, Tabatha had to decide whether she wanted to go to Sarah's birthday party or just stay home."

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