SAT Writing : Identifying Punctuation Errors: Other Punctuation

Study concepts, example questions & explanations for SAT Writing

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Example Questions

Example Question #2 : Identifying Quotation Mark Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all. 

"I don't understand this at all!", Jose yelled in frustration as he crumbled up his Chemistry homework. No error

Possible Answers:

in frustration

Chemistry

all!", Jose

No error

crumbled up

Correct answer:

all!", Jose

Explanation:

Jose's direct quote ends with an exclamation point, so the quote does not require a comma to separate it from the rest of the sentence.

Example Question #3 : Identifying Quotation Mark Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all. 

"The Niña, the Pinta, and the Santa Maria were the three ships Columbus used on his voyage to America", Sarah proclaimed confidently. No error

Possible Answers:

were

used

No error

America", Sarah

confidently

Correct answer:

America", Sarah

Explanation:

Placing the comma outside of the end quotation marks in a direct quote is incorrect in American English. The comma should immediately follow "America" in the above sentence. 

Example Question #4 : Identifying Quotation Mark Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

“Did you see where that dog went, and can you help me follow it,” she cried. No error

Possible Answers:

went,

where

it,"

cried.

No error

Correct answer:

it,"

Explanation:

Because the sentence inside the quotation marks is a question, it must be punctuated with a question mark. This question mark should appear inside the quotation marks, as follows: “Did you see where that dog went, and can you help me follow it?”

Example Question #5 : Identifying Quotation Mark Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

“I’d love to go to the game with you,” his girlfriend said, “but first you’ll have to lend me money for the tickets.” No error

Possible Answers:

"but first

No error

said,

you,"

"I'd

Correct answer:

No error

Explanation:

This sentence is perfectly punctuated. Because the sentence of speech is broken up in the middle with a dialogue tag, commas are used after “you” and after “said” to set off that dialogue tag. (If the spoken part was two sentences long, however, you would have to use a period after “said” and a capital B for “but,” since you would be starting a new sentence after the dialogue tag.)

Example Question #1 : Identifying Quotation Mark Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

I’ve told my coworkers over and over that they must “remember to wash their hands” after handling money, but they always seem to forget. No error

Possible Answers:

No error

they

"remember to wash their hands"

over and over

money,

Correct answer:

"remember to wash their hands"

Explanation:

Quotation marks should only be used to set off direct speech from the rest of a sentence. In this case, the speaker is recalling what he or she usually tells his or her coworkers, and he or she is doing so using indirect speech. Indirect speech never requires quotation marks, so there should be no quotation marks in this sentence.

Example Question #2 : Identifying Quotation Mark Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Anna said to her mother, “I wish you’d saved your old wedding dress so I could wear it during my own ceremony.” No error

Possible Answers:

dress so

"I

ceremony."

mother,

No error

Correct answer:

No error

Explanation:

This sentence is properly punctuated and contains no errors. Because the sentence is using direct speech—in other words, it’s recounting exactly what Anna said to her mother—quotation marks and a comma are necessary to offset the direct speech from the rest of the sentence.

Example Question #8 : Identifying Quotation Mark Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Can you tell me where the cupcake shop is?”, she asked the kindly old man, her stomach rumbling with hunger. No error

Possible Answers:

her stomach rumbling with hunger.

No error

Can

kindly

is?",

Correct answer:

is?",

Explanation:

Because the sentence inside the quotation marks is a question and already contains a punctuation mark, the comma that appears immediately after the quotation marks is redundant. Only the question mark (properly placed inside the quotation marks) is necessary.

Example Question #671 : Sat Writing

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

After I heard the police say “they were looking for a man with a rose tattoo and a scar across his face,” I realized I had seen the suspect getting into a red car earlier today. No error

Possible Answers:

had seen

No error

say

“they were looking for a man with a rose tattoo and a scar across his face,”

getting into

Correct answer:

“they were looking for a man with a rose tattoo and a scar across his face,”

Explanation:

Here, the quotation marks are unnecessary. The text inside the quotation marks is indirect speech—that is, it isn’t a direct quote from the police, but rather a paraphrase. Quotation marks are never used for indirect speech, only direct speech.

Example Question #672 : Sat Writing

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

In order to make a perfect pie crust, you need to use plenty of shortening”, the baker told his family. No error

Possible Answers:

plenty of

shortening",

In order to

No error

crust,

Correct answer:

shortening",

Explanation:

The convention in written English is to put the comma inside the quotation marks when separating a line of direct speech from its dialogue tag. In this sentence, the second comma should come between the word “shortening” and the quotation mark.

Example Question #673 : Sat Writing

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

The mating ritual of the Andean flamingo is elaborate, intricate, and a little bit funny”, the biologist told his students. No error

Possible Answers:

the Andean flamingo

The mating ritual

funny",

intricate, and

No error

Correct answer:

funny",

Explanation:

The convention in written English is to put the comma inside the quotation marks when separating a line of direct speech from its dialogue tag. In this sentence, the second comma should come between the word “funny” and the quotation mark.

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