SAT Writing : Correcting Verb Voice Errors

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Example Questions

Example Question #21 : Correcting Verb Voice Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Her homework was cheated on by Caroline.

Possible Answers:

Caroline cheated on her homework.

Her homework was cheated by Caroline.

The homework was cheated on by Caroline.

Her homework was cheated on, by Caroline.

Her homework was cheated on by the girl named Caroline.

Correct answer:

Caroline cheated on her homework.

Explanation:

The example sentence is written in what is called passive voice. Passive voice is an inversion of normal grammar whereby the object of the sentence is transformed into its subject. Instances of passive voice should often (for concision and clarity's sake) be rewritten in active voice. The best way to do so with the sentence above is "Caroline cheated on her homework."

Example Question #22 : Correcting Verb Voice Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

The hospital was went to by the injured man.

Possible Answers:

The hospital was attended by the injured man.

The hospital was went to by the injured man.

The hospital, was went to by the injured man.

The hospital was gone to by the injured man.

The injured man went to the hospital.

Correct answer:

The injured man went to the hospital.

Explanation:

The example sentence is written in what is called passive voice. Passive voice is an inversion of normal grammar whereby the object of the sentence is transformed into its subject. Instances of passive voice should often be changed so that they are written in active voice. Sentences written in active voice are, in general, clearer and more precise than those written in passive voice. The best way to do so with the sentence above is "The injured man went to the hospital."

Example Question #23 : Correcting Verb Voice Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

The wild and untamed plains were roamed by fearsome warriors.

Possible Answers:

Fearsome warriors roamed the wild and untamed plains.

The wild and untamed plains were roamed, by fearsome warriors.

The wild, and untamed plains were roamed by fearsome warriors.

The wild and untamed, plains were roamed by fearsome warriors.

The wild and untamed plains were roamed by fearsome warriors.

Correct answer:

Fearsome warriors roamed the wild and untamed plains.

Explanation:

The sentence above, as written, is in passive voice. Passive voice inverts the object and subject of a sentence, and should usually be changed to active voice. Passive voice often makes sentences overly wordy and confusing. The best way to change the sentence above into active voice is, "Fearsome warriors roamed the wild and untamed plains."

Example Question #24 : Correcting Verb Voice Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

As his owner howled in frustration, the spaghetti was eaten by the naughty dog.

Possible Answers:

As his owner howled in frustration, the naughty dog ate the spaghetti.

As his owner howled with frustration the spaghetti was eaten by the naughty dog.

As his owner howled in frustration, if the spaghetti was eaten by the naughty dog.

As his owner howled in frustration, then the spaghetti was eaten by the naughty dog.

As his owner howled in frustration, the spaghetti was eaten by the naughty dog.

Correct answer:

As his owner howled in frustration, the naughty dog ate the spaghetti.

Explanation:

The sentence above, as written, is in passive voice. Passive voice inverts the object and subject of a sentence, and is often more confusing and less concise than the active voice. In this case, the unnecessary use of the passive voice creates a dangling modifier, "as his" (meaning the dog's) "owner" is used in the first clause, the subject of the second clause must be "the dog." The best way to change the sentence above into active voice is, "As his owner howled with frustration, the naughty dog ate the spaghetti."

Example Question #25 : Correcting Verb Voice Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

The car was repaired by the brilliant mechanic.

Possible Answers:

The car were repaired by the brilliant mechanic.

The car was repaired, by the brilliant mechanic.

The car was repaired by the brilliant mechanic.

The car had been repaired by the brilliant mechanic.

The brilliant mechanic repaired the car.

Correct answer:

The brilliant mechanic repaired the car.

Explanation:

The sentence above, as written, is in passive voice. Passive voice inverts the object and subject of a sentence, and is often overly confusing and wordy. The best way to change the sentence above into active voice is, "The brilliant mechanic repaired the car."

Example Question #241 : Correcting Word Usage Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

The important race was won by the incredibly fast horse, Big Chuck.

Possible Answers:

Big Chuck the incredibly fast horse won the important race.

The important race, was won by the incredibly fast horse, Big Chuck.

The important race was won by the incredibly fast horse, Big Chuck.

The important race was won by the incredibly fast horse, Big Chuck.

Big Chuck, the incredibly fast horse, won the important race.

Correct answer:

Big Chuck, the incredibly fast horse, won the important race.

Explanation:

The sentence above, as written, is in passive voice. Passive voice inverts the object and subject of a sentence, and is often less concise, and more confusing, than sentences framed in a direct, active voice. The best way to change the sentence above into active voice is, "Big Chuck, the incredibly fast horse, won the important race." Note that the correct version of the sentence includes an interrupting phrase, which must be contained within commas.

Example Question #233 : Correcting Word Usage Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Mike and Jonas were asked to spar by the boxing coach, eager to see how they would perform in a simulated match.

Possible Answers:

Mike and Jonas were asked to spar by the boxing coach, eager to see how they would perform in a simulated match.

Mike and Jonas, eager to see how the boxing coach would perform in a simulated match, asked them to spar. 

The boxing coach, eagerly sees how Mike and Jonas would perform in a simulated match, asked them to spar.

Eager to see how they would perform in a simulated match, the boxing coach asked Mike and Jonas to spar.

Mike and Jonas, eager to see how they would perform in a simulated match, were asked to spar by the boxing coach.

Correct answer:

Eager to see how they would perform in a simulated match, the boxing coach asked Mike and Jonas to spar.

Explanation:

The initial independent clause in the sentence, "Mike and Jonas were asked to spar by the boxing coach," uses passive voice ("were asked"); it becomes clearer when we use active voice ("the boxing coach asked Mike and Jonas . . .").

Example Question #26 : Correcting Verb Voice Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Nobody knew why it took so long for Jamel to arrive; he had drove there plenty of times before.

Possible Answers:

had drived

drived

has drove

had drove

had driven

Correct answer:

had driven

Explanation:

Since the sentence is in past tense (indicated by "knew"), "had" is correct. The correct past participle of the verb "drive" is "driven." "Had driven" is the correct pairing and therefore the best improvement in this sentence.

Example Question #11 : Correcting Verb Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices repeats the underlined portion as it is written.

Horses were domesticating by humans thousands of years ago.

Possible Answers:

were domesticating

were domesticated

domesticated taking place

domestication

domesticating

Correct answer:

were domesticated

Explanation:

The sentence describes what humans did to horses in the past, a fact that needs to be reflected in the verb's tense and transitivity. The correct answer must indicate that the domesticating being discussed took place in the past and was done by humans to horses, leading to "were domesticated" as the only possible answer choice.

Example Question #27 : Correcting Verb Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

As the suit was finished quickly, that it still needed alterations did not surprise Henry.

Possible Answers:

it was not surprising to Henry that it still needed alterations.

Henry was not surprised that it still needed alterations.

because it still needed alterations, which surprised Henry.

that it still needed more alterations did not surprise Henry.

it still needed alterations, which did not surprise Henry.

Correct answer:

Henry was not surprised that it still needed alterations.

Explanation:

Avoid the passive voice of the original ("it still needed alterations") and choose the simplest answer which preserves the meaning of the original sentence.

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