SAT Writing : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Other Punctuation

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Example Questions

Example Question #1 : Correcting Quotation Mark Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

"Richard was right to call and tell us you were throwing a party while we were gone," Mom said, "That's why you're grounded for the rest of the week."

Possible Answers:

said "That's why you're grounded for the rest of the week."

said, "That's why you're grounded for the rest of the week."

said. "That's why you're grounded for the rest of the week."

said; "That's why you're grounded for the rest of the week."

said—"That's why you're grounded for the rest of the week."

Correct answer:

said. "That's why you're grounded for the rest of the week."

Explanation:

The current form of the sentence uses incorrect punctuation to separate Mom's first sentence from her second. We can replace the comma with a period to make connection between the sentences grammatically correct ("said. 'That's why you're grounded for the rest of the week.'").

Example Question #4 : Correcting Quotation Mark Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

"Oh, I don't really like the way Tom's been behaving, she sighed. "I wish he would grow up."

Possible Answers:

"Oh, I don't really like the way Tom's been behaving, she sighed!"

Oh, I don't really like the way Tom's been behaving, she sighed.

"Oh, I don't really like the way Tom's been behaving", she sighed.

"Oh, I don't really like the way Tom's been behaving, she sighed.

"Oh, I don't really like the way Tom's been behaving," she sighed.

Correct answer:

"Oh, I don't really like the way Tom's been behaving," she sighed.

Explanation:

With quotation marks, you want to place them before the first word of the quotation, and then immediately after the final punctuation of the quotation. Therefore, the best way to construct the phrase in the first part of the sentence is "'Oh, I don't really like the way Tom's been behaving,' she sighed." Please note that the comma at the end of the phrase "Tom's been behaving," is correctly contained within the quotation marks.

Example Question #5 : Correcting Quotation Mark Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

The child screamed at the top of her lungs, I hate it here and I want to go home.

Possible Answers:

The child screamed at the top of her lungs, "I hate it here and I want to go home!" 

The child screamed at the top of her lungs: I hate it here and I want to go home.

The child screamed at the top of her lungs, "I hate it here" and I want to go home.

The child screamed at the top of her lungs, "I hate it here and I want to go home"

The child screamed at the top of her lungs, I hate it here and I want to go home.

Correct answer:

The child screamed at the top of her lungs, "I hate it here and I want to go home!" 

Explanation:

When quoting speech, the quotation marks should precede the first word of the quotation and also follow the final punctuation of the quotation. Therefore, the correct version of this sentence reads: "The child screamed, at the top of her lungs, 'I hate it here and I want to go home!'" The interrupting phrase "at the top of her lungs" may be confusing, but it does not grammatically alter the sentence.

Example Question #11 : Correcting Quotation Mark Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

"I can't go back to him," cried the Baroness. "he's just too dangerous!" No error

Possible Answers:

"he's just too dangerous!"

'he's just too dangerous!'

"He's just too dangerous!"

No error

He's just too dangerous!"

Correct answer:

"He's just too dangerous!"

Explanation:

Ensure that any quotation is surrounded by quotation marks, with the first set preceding the first letter of the first word of the sentence, and the last set following the final punctuation mark of the sentence. In this case, the second quotation is forming a new sentence, and therefore the entire thing needs to be enclosed in quotation marks. Additionally, because there is a period preceding it, and it needs to be treated as its own sentence, therefore it needs to begin with a capital letter. The best answer here is: "He's just too dangerous!"

Example Question #12 : Correcting Quotation Mark Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Paul said, I hate being stuck out in the woods, it's such a drag. No error

Possible Answers:

"I hate being stuck out in the woods, it's such a drag.

"I hate being stuck out in the woods, it's such a drag."

I hate being stuck out in the woods, it's such a drag."

"I hate being stuck out in the woods, it's such a drag."

No error

Correct answer:

"I hate being stuck out in the woods, it's such a drag."

Explanation:

Ensure that any direct quotation is surrounded by quotation marks, with the first set preceding the first letter of the first word of the sentence, and the last set following the final punctuation mark of the sentence. The best way to write the underlined portion of the sentence is: "I hate being stuck out in the woods, it's such a drag." Note that paraphrase (a summary rephrasing that does not feature the exact same words as the original statement) does not require quotation marks (but may require citation in an academic paper).

Example Question #701 : Correcting Grammatical Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

I told my friends that “I was too tired to go out,” but really I just wanted to catch up on my favorite TV series.

Possible Answers:

I told my friends that I was too tired to go out, but really I just wanted to catch up on my favorite TV series.

I told my friends that, “I was too tired to go out,” but really I just wanted to catch up on my favorite TV series.

I told my friends that “I was too tired to go out,” but really I just wanted to catch up on my favorite TV series.

I told my friends that “I was too tired to go out” but really I just wanted to catch up on my favorite TV series.

I told my friends that I was too tired to go out but really I just wanted to catch up on my favorite TV series.

Correct answer:

I told my friends that I was too tired to go out, but really I just wanted to catch up on my favorite TV series.

Explanation:

“I was too tired to go out” is an indirect quotation; we know this because it’s preceded by the word “that.” Since indirect quotations don’t require quotation marks, and since a comma is needed before the conjunction (“but”) to separate these two independent clauses, the correct answer is “I told my friends that I was too tired to go out, but really I just wanted to catch up on my favorite TV series.”

Example Question #12 : Correcting Quotation Mark Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

"The self-styled "Emperor" has been dealt with, Mr. President," said the General.

Possible Answers:

"The self-styled "Emperor" has been dealt with, Mr. President,"

"The self-styled "'Emperor'" has been dealt with, Mr. President,"

The self-styled 'Emperor' has been dealt with, Mr. President,

"The self-styled 'Emperor' has been dealt with, Mr. President,"

"The self-styled 'Emperor' has been dealt with, Mr. President,

Correct answer:

"The self-styled 'Emperor' has been dealt with, Mr. President,"

Explanation:

When you use quotation marks within another quotation, you must use single quotation marks rather than double quotation marks. Therefore, "The self-styled 'Emperor' has been dealt with, Mr. President," is the correct answer.

Example Question #13 : Correcting Quotation Mark Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Have you heard that John told Marcia "I never want to see you again?"

Possible Answers:

'I never want to see you again'?

"I never want to see you again"?

"I never want to see you again?"?

"I never want to see you again?"

'I never want to see you again?'

Correct answer:

"I never want to see you again"?

Explanation:

The quotation in this sentence is not a question itself, but the sentence overall is a question.  Therefore, the question mark should go outside of the quotation marks.  The best answer is: "I never want to see you again"?

Example Question #14 : Correcting Quotation Mark Errors

Choose the answer below which best replaces the underlined section of the following sentence. This should result in a sentence that meets all of the rules of standard written English.

Mr. Jackson asked the clerk where is the nearest gas station?

Possible Answers:

Mr. Jackson asked the clerk, "Where is the nearest gas station?"

Mr. Jackson asked the clerk, "Where is the nearest gas station?

Mr. Jackson asked the clerk, "Where is the nearest gas station"?

Mr. Jackson asked the clerk, Where is the nearest gas station?"

Mr. Jackson asked the clerk where is the nearest gas station?

Correct answer:

Mr. Jackson asked the clerk, "Where is the nearest gas station?"

Explanation:

Quotation marks should always precede the first word of the quote, and follow the final punctuation mark of the quote; therefore, the best way to write the sentence above is "Mr. Jackson asked the clerk, 'Where is the nearest gas station?'"

Example Question #1581 : Sat Writing

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices repreoduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

The teacher said, everyone needs to turn their homework in on time, or they will not receive full credit."

Possible Answers:

The teacher said, "everyone needs to turn their homework in on time, or they will not receive full credit.

The teacher said, "Everyone needs to turn their homework in on time, or they will not receive full credit."

The teacher said everyone needs to turn their homework in on time, or they will not receive full credit."

The teacher said, "everyone needs to turn their homework in on time, or they will not receive full credit."

The teacher said, everyone needs to turn their homework in on time, or they will not receive full credit."

Correct answer:

The teacher said, "Everyone needs to turn their homework in on time, or they will not receive full credit."

Explanation:

Quotation marks should always precede the first word of the quote, and follow the final punctuation mark of the quote; therefore, the best way to write the sentence above is "The teacher said, 'Everyone needs to turn their homework in on time, or they will not receive full credit.'"

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