SAT Writing : Correcting Other Phrase, Clause, and Sentence Errors

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Example Questions

Example Question #1106 : Improving Sentences

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Thoughts and feelings about faith during the holidays change over time as one grows older and sometimes wiser.

Possible Answers:

Thoughts on faith sometimes change as we grow different and find ourselves changed. 

Our thoughts and feelings on faith sometimes change as we grow older and wiser and find ourselves changed. 

During the holidays, our thoughts and feelings on faith sometimes change as we grow older and wiser and find ourselves changed. 

As we grow older, our thoughts and feelings on faith sometimes change during the holidays.

Faith during the holidays change over time as one grows older and rarely wiser. 

Correct answer:

As we grow older, our thoughts and feelings on faith sometimes change during the holidays.

Explanation:

The option to rewrite this sentence should clarify, but not change, its meaning. The correct answer: "As we grow older, our thoughts and feelings on faith sometimes change during the holidays," allows the ideas to flow more smoothly without altering the content: each fact is still relayed (the time of year; things that are changing, etc.), but the tone is much clearer. 

Example Question #3 : Correcting Other Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Many people have trouble understanding the complexing elements of policy decisions made by elected officials.

Possible Answers:

the complexly elements

a complexing elements

the more complex elements

a complex elements

the complexing elements

Correct answer:

the more complex elements

Explanation:

The main issue with the underlined portion of the sentence is that "complexing" is not actually a word. The correct answer will appropriately change the word into the best form of "complex" to fit the sentence. To describe the elements best involves making the word into the phrase "more complex."

Example Question #1 : Correcting Other Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Coffee can be expensive, however, I need it to stay awake.

Possible Answers:

Coffee can be expensive; to stay awake.

Being expensive, I need coffee to stay awake.

Coffee can be expensive, however, the reason I need it is to stay awake.

Coffee can be expensive, but also needing it to stay awake.

Coffee can be expensive; however, I need it to stay awake.

Correct answer:

Coffee can be expensive; however, I need it to stay awake.

Explanation:

This sentence demonstrates a comma splice, in which a comma connects two complete sentences. Comma splices are incorrect, as the independent clauses should either remain separate and be treated as complete sentences or be linked by a semicolon or a conjunction. "Coffee can be expensive, but also needing it to stay awake" lacks a subject in the second clause. "Coffee can be expensive; to stay awake" illustrates an incorrect use of a semicolon, as the second clause is not a complete sentence. "Coffee can be expensive, however, the reason I need it is to stay awake" repeats the comma splice of the original sentence. "Being expensive, I need coffee to stay awake" is an example of a dangling modifier, where "being expensive" incorrectly modifies "I" instead of "coffee." Therefore, the correct answer must be "Coffee can be expensive; however, I need it to stay awake," which displays the correct use of a semicolon to connect two complete sentences.

Example Question #2 : Correcting Other Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Historians of the colonial Caribbean, who focus on the issue of slavery, being a major theme in the region.

Possible Answers:

Historians of the colonial Caribbean, who focus on the issue of slavery, which continues to be a major theme in the region.

Historians of the colonial Caribbean, who focus on the issue of slavery, the legacy of which continues to be a major theme in the region.

Historians of the colonial Caribbean often focus on the issue of slavery, as its legacy continues to be a major theme in the region.

Focusing on the issue of slavery, which continues to be a major theme in the region, historians of the colonial Caribbean.

The legacy of slavery, being focused on by historians of the colonial Caribbean, because it is a major theme in the region.

Correct answer:

Historians of the colonial Caribbean often focus on the issue of slavery, as its legacy continues to be a major theme in the region.

Explanation:

A complete sentence must include a subject and a main verb. Because the original sentence contains two modifying clauses but no main verb, it is actually a sentence fragment. The incorrect answers all contain modifying clauses but lack a main subject-verb relationship. The correct answer therefore must be, "Historians of the colonial Caribbean often focus on the issue of slavery, as its legacy continues to be a major theme in the region." This sentence contains the subject "Historians" and the main verb "focus," and it is therefore a grammatically complete sentence.

Example Question #3 : Correcting Other Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

During his vacation, Jim spent his time fishing, hiking, and went to the beach.

Possible Answers:

fishing, hiking, and going to the beach. 

fishing, hiking, and is at the beach.

fishing, hiked, and go to the beach.

fishing, hiking, and went to the beach. 

fishing, hiking, and to go to the beach.

Correct answer:

fishing, hiking, and going to the beach. 

Explanation:

In this sentence, the verbs "to fish," "to hike," and "to go" must use parallel structures (the verbs must be in the same tense). The option "fishing, hiking, and going to the beach" is the only one in which all three verbs are in parallel structures, making it the correct choice.

Example Question #7 : Correcting Other Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Having already completed the necessary training, the instructor felt ready to begin her first class.

Possible Answers:

Having already completed the necessary training

Being done with the completed necessary training,

Having already completed the necessary training,

Already completed the necessary training,

Despite that the necessary trying has been completed,

Correct answer:

Having already completed the necessary training,

Explanation:

Because the underlined portion of the sentence is an introductory phrase it must be followed by a comma. The incorrect answer choices omit the comma, change the meaning of the sentence, don't agree with the sentence, or are excessively wordy. Thus, because the given sentence separates the introductory phrase with a comma and is grammatically correct, no change is necessary.

Example Question #1 : Correcting Ambiguity And Redundancy Errors

Inspired by storylines that would come to him in dreams, Lord Bennington would stage one-man plays, his audience enjoying the show. 

Possible Answers:

Lord Bennington would stage one-man plays that were inspired by storylines from his dreams; his audiences would enjoy the shows.

(No changes needed)

Inspired by storylines that would come to him in dreams, Lord Bennington would stage one-man plays; his audiences enjoying the show. 

Inspired of storylines that would come to him in dreams, Lord Bennington would stage one-man plays, his audiences enjoyed the show. 

Inspired by storylines that would come to him in dreams, Lord Bennington would stage one man plays, his audiences enjoying the show. 

Correct answer:

Lord Bennington would stage one-man plays that were inspired by storylines from his dreams; his audiences would enjoy the shows.

Explanation:

The original statement is grammatically incorrect because "audience" and "show" should be plural.  Also, "his audience enjoying the show" makes the sentence into a run-on.  The correct answer is concise and not awkward.  

Example Question #1 : Correcting Ambiguity And Redundancy Errors

Every person in the room appreciating the jokes by the performers.

Possible Answers:

Every person in the room appreciating the jokes by the performers.

Every person in the room has appreciating the jokes by the performers.

Every person in the room appreciated the jokes by the performers.

Every person in the room appreciating the jokes from the performers.

Every person in the room appreciating the jokes of the performers.

Correct answer:

Every person in the room appreciated the jokes by the performers.

Explanation:

The sentence as written is actually a fragment, as it does not contain a proper verb. The word "appreciating" in the sentence is a gerund, or a verb form that can function as anoun. The correct answer will use a full verb form, as "Every person in the room appreciated the jokes by the performers" does.

Example Question #481 : Improving Sentences

Religious texts often appear quite difficult to understand, being contradictions of themselves.

Possible Answers:

being contradicting them.

contradicting them.

contradicting themselves.

being contradictions of themselves.

being contradictions of them.

Correct answer:

contradicting themselves.

Explanation:

The underlined phrase in the sentence is awkwardly worded, which makes the sentence itself difficult to understand. The "religious texts" contain contradictions, a meaning not conveyed properly by the sentence. "Contradicting themselves" is the clearest, most appropriate choice among the answers.

Example Question #131 : Correcting Other Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors

All people choose their own religious denomination when they have been adults.

Possible Answers:

when they have been adults.

when adults they have been.

when they are adults.

they have been adults.

when being adults.

Correct answer:

when they are adults.

Explanation:

The underlined phrase is very awkwardly worded, and the use of the past perfect form "have been" is confusing. The phrase needs to be cleaned up for better clarity of meaning. "When they are adults" is the best choice among the answers.

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