SAT Writing : Correcting Comparative and Superlative Errors

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Example Questions

Example Question #2036 : Sat Writing

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

It is often said that hippos are most dangerous than lions, but I don't know if I believe that.

Possible Answers:

It is often said that hippos are most dangerous than lions; but I don't know if I believe that.

It's often said that hippos are most dangerous than lions, but I don't know if I believe that.

It is often said that hippos are more dangerous than lions, but I don't know if I believe that.

It is often said that hippos are most dangerous than lions, and I don't know if I believe that.

It is often said that hippos are most dangerous than lions, but I don't know if I believe that.

Correct answer:

It is often said that hippos are more dangerous than lions, but I don't know if I believe that.

Explanation:

When you are comparing only two things, you must use the comparative construction of the adjective or adverb in question. When you are comparing three or more things, or an indefinite number of things, you must use the superlative construction instead. Since there are two, and only two, specific kinds of animals mentioned, the correct option is to use the comparative construction. The best way to correct the underlined portion above is, "It is often said that hippos are more dangerous than lions, but I don't know if I believe that."

Note that a comma and a coordinating conjunction correctly combine these two independent clauses into a compound sentence.

Example Question #2037 : Sat Writing

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

I really enjoy Father Bill's company: he is the more kind man I have ever met.

Possible Answers:

I really enjoy Father Bill's company: he is the more kind man I have ever met.

I really enjoy Father Bill's company: he is the most kindest man I have ever met.

I really enjoy Father Bill's company: he is the more kinder man I have ever met.

I really enjoy Father Bill's company: he is the kindest man I have ever met.

I really enjoy Father Bill's company, he is the most kind man I have ever met.

Correct answer:

I really enjoy Father Bill's company: he is the kindest man I have ever met.

Explanation:

When you are comparing only two things, you must use the comparative construction of the adjective or adverb in question. When you are comparing three or more things, or an indefinite number of things, you must use the superlative construction instead. Since there is no specific point of comparison named in this sentence, we can assume that Father Bill is being distinguished from all other people. The superlative construction is needed. The best way to correct the underlined portion above is, "I really enjoy Father Bill's company: he is the kindest man I have ever met."

 

Example Question #2038 : Sat Writing

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence

The legend of the Pied Piper is one of the more horrifying stories I have ever heard.

Possible Answers:

The legend of the Pied Piper is one of the most horrifying story I have ever heard.

The legend of the Pied Piper is ones of the most horrifying stories I have ever heard.

The legend of the Pied Piper is one of the more horrifying stories I have ever heard.

The legend of the Pied Piper is one of the most horrifying stories I have ever heard.

The legends of the Pied Piper is one of the more horrifying stories I have ever heard.

Correct answer:

The legend of the Pied Piper is one of the most horrifying stories I have ever heard.

Explanation:

When you are comparing only two things, you must use the comparative construction of the adjective or adverb in question. When you are comparing three or more things, or an indefinite number of things, you must use the superlative construction instead. Since "the legend of the Pied Piper" is being distinguished from the indefinite (but likely much larger than two) number of stories the writer has "ever heard." The best way to correct the underlined portion above is, "The legend of the Pied Piper is one of the most horrifying stories I have ever heard."

Example Question #2039 : Sat Writing

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

I'm afraid that George is most powerful than Jonathan, and he will win their inevitable struggle.

Possible Answers:

I'm afraid that George is most powerful than Jonathan, but he will win their inevitable struggle.

I'm afraid that George is most powerful than Jonathan, then he will win their inevitable struggle.

I'm afraid that George is more powerful than Jonathan, and will win their inevitable struggle.

I'm afraid that George is most powerful than Jonathan, and he will win their inevitable struggle.

I'm afraid that George is more powerful than Jonathan, and will win their inevitable struggle.

Correct answer:

I'm afraid that George is more powerful than Jonathan, and will win their inevitable struggle.

Explanation:

When you are comparing only two things, you must use the comparative construction of the adjective or adverb in question. When you are comparing three or more things, or an indefinite number of things, you must use the superlative construction instead. Since two specific people are being directly compared, the best way to correct the example sentence is, "I'm afraid that George is more powerful than Jonathan, and will win their inevitable struggle."

Example Question #2040 : Sat Writing

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

I find it extraordinarily difficult to focus in the morning; it is my less favorite part of the day.

Possible Answers:

I find it extraordinarily difficult to focus in the morning, but it is my less favorite part of the day.

I find it extraordinarily difficult to focus in the morning, because it is my lesser favorite part of the day.

I find it extraordinarily difficult to focus in the morning; it is my less favorite part of the day.

I find it extraordinarily difficult to focus in the morning; it is my less than favorite part of the day.

I find it extraordinarily difficult to focus in the morning; it is my least favorite part of the day.

Correct answer:

I find it extraordinarily difficult to focus in the morning; it is my least favorite part of the day.

Explanation:

When you are comparing only two things, you must use the comparative construction of the adjective or adverb in question. When you are comparing three or more things, or an indefinite number of things, you must use the superlative construction instead. Since there are not two specified parts of the day in this sentence, we must use the superlative construction. The best way to correct the underlined portion above is, "I find it extraordinarily difficult to focus in the morning; it is my least favorite part of the day."

Example Question #701 : Improving Sentences

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Of all three of her sons, Mergo was more proud of Joshua.

Possible Answers:

Of all three of her sons, Mergo was the more proud of Joshua.

Of all three of her sons, Mergo was most proud of Joshua.

Of all three of her sons, Mergo was more proud then Joshua.

Of all three of her sons, Mergo was more proud of Joshua.

Of all three of her sons, Mergo was more than proud than Joshua.

Correct answer:

Of all three of her sons, Mergo was most proud of Joshua.

Explanation:

When you are comparing only two things, you must use the comparative construction of the adjective or adverb in question. When you are comparing three or more things, or an indefinite number of things, you must use the superlative construction instead. In the example sentence the phrase "of all" appears, this is an almost foolproof sign that the superlative construction will be required. The best way to correct the underlined portion above is, "Of all three of her sons, Mergo was most proud of Joshua."

Example Question #702 : Improving Sentences

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Both Paul and John are poor public speakers, but John is worst by far.

Possible Answers:

Both Paul and John are poor public speakers, but John is the worst by far.

Both Paul and John are poor public speakers, but John is far worst.

Both Paul and John are poor public speakers, but John is worse by far.

Both Paul and John are poor public speakers, but John is much worst by a lot.

Both Paul and John are poor public speakers, but John is worst by far.

Correct answer:

Both Paul and John are poor public speakers, but John is worse by far.

Explanation:

When you are comparing only two things, you must use the comparative construction of the adjective or adverb in question. When you are comparing three or more things, or an indefinite number of things, you must use the superlative construction instead. The sentence only mentions "Paul and John," therefore the comparative construction is required. The best way to correct the underlined portion above is, "Both Paul and John are poor public speakers, but John is worse by far."

Example Question #441 : Correcting Word Usage Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

I find it hard to believe that Jamila is a best student than Aaron, but she proved it this morning.

Possible Answers:

I find it hard to believe that Jamila is a best student than Aaron, but she proved it this morning.

I find it hard to believe that Jamila is a better student than Aaron, but she proved it this morning.

I find it's hard to believe that Jamila is a best student than Aaron, but she proved it this morning.

I find it's hard to believe that Jamila is a better student then Aaron, but she proved it this morning.

I find it hard to believe that Jamila is a best student then Aaron, but she proved it this morning.

Correct answer:

I find it hard to believe that Jamila is a better student than Aaron, but she proved it this morning.

Explanation:

When you are comparing only two things, you must use the comparative construction of the adjective or adverb in question. When you are comparing three or more things, or an indefinite number of things, you must use the superlative construction instead. Only two students are mentioned in the example sentence, so the comparative is required. The best way to correct the underlined portion above is: "I find it hard to believe that Jamila is a better student than Aaron, but she proved it this morning."

Example Question #704 : Improving Sentences

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Jimmy is the better astronaut of the whole group; he is consistently calm and collected.

Possible Answers:

Jimmy is the best astronaut of the whole group; he is consistently calm and collected.

Jimmy is the best astronaut of the whole group, he is consistently calm and collected.

Jimmy is the better astronaut of the whole group, he is consistently calm and collected.

Jimmy is the best astronaut of the whole group he is consistently calm and collected.

Jimmy is the better astronaut of the whole group; he is consistently calm and collected.

Correct answer:

Jimmy is the best astronaut of the whole group; he is consistently calm and collected.

Explanation:

When you are comparing only two things, you must use the comparative construction of the adjective or adverb in question. When you are comparing three or more things, or an indefinite number of things, you must use the superlative construction instead. In the example sentence, Jimmy is being distinguished from "the whole group," so the best way to correct the underlined portion above is, "Jimmy is the best astronaut of the whole group; he is consistently calm and collected."

Example Question #705 : Improving Sentences

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Alanis Morissette wrote one of the better songs of her generation, but a lot of people misunderstand what it's about.

Possible Answers:

Alanis Morissette wrote one of the better songs of her generation, but a lot of people misunderstand what it's about.

Alanis Morissette wrote one of the best songs of her generation, but a lot of people misunderstand what its about.

Alanis Morissette wrote one of the best songs of her generation, but a lot of people misunderstand what it's about.

Alanis Morissette wrote one of the better songs of her generation, but a lot of people misunderstand what its about.

Alanis Morissette wrote one of the best songs of her generation; but a lot of people misunderstand what its about.

Correct answer:

Alanis Morissette wrote one of the best songs of her generation, but a lot of people misunderstand what it's about.

Explanation:

When you are comparing only two things, you must use the comparative construction of the adjective or adverb in question. When you are comparing three or more things, or an indefinite number of things, you must use the superlative construction instead. In this case, Alanis Morissette is being distinguished from all the other songwriters of "her generation." The best way to correct the underlined portion above is, "Alanis Morissette wrote one of the best songs of her generation, but a lot of people misunderstand what it's about."

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