PSAT Writing : Improving Sentences

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Example Questions

Example Question #522 : Usage Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

When you are done reading the books, please bring them back to myself.

Possible Answers:

please bring them back unto myself

please bring those back to myself

please bring them back to myself

please bringing them back to myself

please bring them back to me

Correct answer:

please bring them back to me

Explanation:

The use of the reflexive pronoun "myself" in this sentence is incorrect, as it has no previous first person pronoun to refer back to. The pronoun can be changed to the simple first person objective pronoun, "me." The only answer choice to make this necessary change is "please bring them back to me."

Example Question #41 : Improving Sentences

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

The packages could only be signed for by myself.

Possible Answers:

The packages could only be signed for by myself.

The packages could only be signing for by myself.

The packages could only be sign for by myself.

The package's could only be signed for by myself.

The packages could only be signed for by me.

Correct answer:

The packages could only be signed for by me.

Explanation:

The use of the reflexive pronoun "myself" is incorrect in this sentence, as it has no previous first person pronoun to refer back to. The reflexive pronoun can be changed to the simple first person objective pronoun, "me." Therefore, the correct answer choice is "The packages could only be signed for by me."

Example Question #61 : Correcting Word Usage Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Every single paper written by an employee must be given to myself.

Possible Answers:

Each single paper written by an employee must be given to myself.

Every single paper written by an employee must be given to myself.

Every single paper written by an employee must be given for myself.

Every single paper written by an employee must be giving to myself.

Every single paper written by an employee must be given to me.

Correct answer:

Every single paper written by an employee must be given to me.

Explanation:

The use of the reflexive pronoun "myself" in this sentence is incorrect and confusing, as it has no previous first person pronoun to refer back to. The reflexive pronoun can be changed to the simple first person objective pronoun "me" without changing the meaning of the sentence. Therefore, the correct answer choice is "Every single paper written by an employee must be given to me."

Example Question #1662 : Sat Writing

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

That important document was only ever seen by myself.

Possible Answers:

was only ever seen for myself

was only ever seen by myself

was only ever seen by me

was only ever saw by myself

was ever only seen by myself

Correct answer:

was only ever seen by me

Explanation:

The use of the reflexive pronoun "myself" is incorrect in this sentence, as it has no previous first person pronoun to refer back to. The reflexive pronoun can easily be replaced by the simple first person objective pronoun, "me." The only answer choice that actually does this is "was only ever seen by me."

Example Question #1663 : Sat Writing

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices repeats the underlined portion as it is written.

You must be sure to bring the materials directly to myself.

Possible Answers:

 unto myself.

 to I.

 to me.

 for myself.

 to myself.

Correct answer:

 to me.

Explanation:

The use of the pronoun "myself" is incorrect in this sentence, as "myself" is a reflexive pronoun and needs a referent earlier in the sentence. As no earlier use of a first person pronoun exists in the sentence, a reflexive pronoun is inappropriate. "To me" is the correct answer choice. "To I" might look like a potentially correct answer, but because "I" is the object of the preposition "to," it needs to be in its objective form, "me," not its subjective form, "I."

Example Question #1664 : Sat Writing

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices repeats the underlined portion as it is written.

The documents were surrendered to themselves as soon as the commission had finalized their work.

Possible Answers:

to themselves soon as

to them soon as

to themselves as soon as

to themselves when

to them as soon as

Correct answer:

to them as soon as

Explanation:

The use of the pronoun "themselves" is incorrect in the sentence, as "themselves" is a reflexive pronoun and needs a noun earlier in the sentence to refer back to as a referent. This is the only issue in the sentence, and replacing "themselves" with the non-reflexive third person plural object pronoun "them" is sufficient. The correct answer choice, then, is "to them as soon as."

Example Question #1665 : Sat Writing

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

I have never doubted the facts for me, but I am aware that others have misgivings.

Possible Answers:

for me

Omit the underlined section.

me

itself

mine

Correct answer:

Omit the underlined section.

Explanation:

The use of "for me" is a confusing and odd use of the pronoun. Normally, we might consider changing "for me" to "for myself," since "I" has already been used in the sentence and "myself" would have a clear antecedent. However, the phrase "for myself" isn't necessary in this sentence; the sentence still makes complete sense without the inclusion of the phrase. Omitting the underlined portion simplifies the sentence and is grammatically correct, and it is the only answer choice that both corrects the error contained in "for me" and doesn't introduce other grammatical errors.

Example Question #1666 : Sat Writing

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

You must give this information to herself immediately, with no delays.

Possible Answers:

to her immediately, with no delays.

to herself immediately, with no delays.

to herself immediate, with no delays.

to herself immediately with no delays.

to herself immediately, with no delaying.

Correct answer:

to her immediately, with no delays.

Explanation:

The use of the reflexive pronoun "herself" in this sentence is incorrect and confusing, as no third-person female pronoun or name has been mentioned, so "herself" has no antecedent. The sentence only needs to use the simple female third-person objective pronoun "her." Therefore, the correct answer choice is "to her immediately, with no delays."

Example Question #42 : Improving Sentences

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Unsure of how to complete the math problem, Tony asked his teacher, which hesitated before answering.

Possible Answers:

whom

that

and which

who

and that

Correct answer:

who

Explanation:

We need to chose a relative pronoun to replace "which" that can describe a person, because the pronoun is referring to Tony's teacher. Of the available answer choices, only "who" and "whom" can refer to people. "Whom" is an objective pronoun while "who" is a subjective pronoun. A trick for deciding which form to use in a sentence is to replace the pronoun with the word "him." If "him" makes grammatical sense, you need to use the objective form, "whom." In this sentence, it does not make sense to say "him hesitated before answering," so we need to use the subjective form, "who."

Example Question #72 : Other Pronoun Errors

Rarely does a person get such an opportunity more than once in their lifetime.

Possible Answers:

more than once in their lifetime.

more than once in a lifetime.

more than once in there lifetime.

more then once in their lifetime.

more than once for their lifetime.

Correct answer:

more than once in a lifetime.

Explanation:

The use of the word "their" in the sentence is highly problematic, as it is both plural when the subject is singular and creates an odd referent. These issues can both be cleared by replacing it with the article "a," as in the correct answer choice "more than once in a lifetime."

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