PSAT Writing : Identifying Verb Errors

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Example Questions

Example Question #61 : Identifying Verb Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Beverly Hills was a significant part of Los Angeles because its inhabitants include important professionals who have been very influential in the historical development of the entertainment industry. No error 

Possible Answers:

part of

because

historical development

No error

was

Correct answer:

was

Explanation:

This sentence is written in the present tense, as we can tell from its verb "include." However, the verb "was" is in the past tense. It should be in the present tense as well. To correct the sentence's error, "was" should be changed to "is."

Example Question #201 : Identifying Word Usage Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

No matter how diverse a menu may be, John always orders the most basic dish that he could find. No error

Possible Answers:

No error

could

always

most

how

Correct answer:

could

Explanation:

The sentence is written in the present tense, except for the modal verb, "could," which expresses possibility where none is needed; we're told that John "always" orders basic dishes. "Could" should be changed to the present tense verb "can" so that its tense matches that of "orders."

Example Question #641 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Hillary Clinton, a prominent American politician, is often being represented in the media as a conniving woman rather than a successful political figureNo error.

Possible Answers:

in the media

conniving

No error.

being

than a successful political figure

Correct answer:

being

Explanation:

The progressive verb “being” is not necessary in this sentence. It is more concise and to-the-point to say: "Hillary Clinton, a prominent American politician, is often represented in the media as a conniving woman rather than a successful political figure."

Example Question #1 : Identifying Other Verb Usage Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

The spectators looked at one another, not having much to say, as they were dumbfounded by the tricks of the New York City street magician. No error.

Possible Answers:

New York City

one another

dumbfounded

No error.

having

Correct answer:

having

Explanation:

“Having” is an incorrect use of a gerund. It creates confusion with respect to time, as both “looked” and “dumbfounded” are in the simple past tense.

Example Question #61 : Identifying Verb Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Despite her best intentions, Suzy’s attempting to throw a surprise birthday party was a complete disaster. No error.

Possible Answers:

was

attempting

Despite her best intentions

No error.

surprise birthday

Correct answer:

attempting

Explanation:

It is not necessary to use the gerund “attempting” in this sentence because the noun “attempt” already exists. The corrected sentence reads, "Despite her best intentions, Suzy’s attempt to throw a surprise birthday party was a complete disaster."

Example Question #641 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Most elderly women prefer to go to bed early instead of stay up late watching television. No error.

Possible Answers:

stay up late

instead of

No error.

to go to bed

Most

Correct answer:

stay up late

Explanation:

Usually, the phrase “instead of” is followed by a gerund or verb that ends in "-ing". The corrected sentence reads, "Most elderly women prefer to go to bed early instead of staying up late watching television."

Example Question #645 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Given the chance, Frank would drop everything and dedicate his life to swim the English Channel. No error.

Possible Answers:

his life

everything and

No error.

to swim

Given the chance

Correct answer:

to swim

Explanation:

This sentence uses the verb “swim” when it needs a gerund, “swimming.” A gerund is a verb that is acting as a noun. The corrected sentence reads, "Given the chance, Frank would drop everything and dedicate his life to swimming the English Channel."

Example Question #646 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

All of the children were sorely disappointed that the water slide being closed for repairsNo error.

Possible Answers:

No error.

sorely

being closed

for repairs

All of the children

Correct answer:

being closed

Explanation:

This sentence has the gerund "being" in it, but the past tense "was" is cleaner and more direct. The corrected sentence reads, "All of the children were sorely disappointed that the water slide was closed for repairs."

Example Question #431 : Identifying Word Usage Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Many people find the rigorous schedule associated with campaign management being overly fatiguing. No error.

Possible Answers:

Many people find

overly

No error.

being

associated with

Correct answer:

being

Explanation:

This sentence uses “being” as a gerund (a verb acting as a noun) when the infinitive is necessary. Always, when you use "find" followed by a noun and then an adjective or an adjectival phrase, you should connect the noun and adjective or adjectival phrase with the infinitive “to be.” The corrected sentence reads, "Many people find the rigorous schedule associated with campaign management to be overly fatiguing."

Example Question #311 : Identifying Usage Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Tanner was afraid for returning to the cold winters of the northern states. No error.

Possible Answers:

was 

No error.

northern

for returning to

cold winters

Correct answer:

for returning to

Explanation:

The adjective “afraid” is usually followed by either an infinitive (“to return”) or “of” and a gerund (“of returning”). Choose one of those to fix this sentence: "Tanner was afraid to return to the cold winters of the northern states."

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