PSAT Writing : Identifying Sentence Errors

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Example Questions

Example Question #13 : Identifying Subject Verb Agreement Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

panel of chefs tasted spices produced by three manufacturers, and decided that the spices produced by a local manufacturer was the best. No error

Possible Answers:

that 

produced by

by panel of

was

No error

Correct answer:

was

Explanation:

In this sentence, the verb does not agree with the subject. The subject, "spices" is plural (“produced by a local manufacturer” is a modifier and doesn’t count), so the correct verb form should be “were,” not "was."

Example Question #14 : Identifying Subject Verb Agreement Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Kiera only knits when she is upset, so her current desire to knit blankets for her entire family are a worrisome sign. No error

Possible Answers:

No error

her

she

her current desire

are

Correct answer:

are

Explanation:

The verb "are" needs to agree with the subject "desire," so it must be singular—Kiera's desire to knit "is" a worrisome sign.

 

Example Question #331 : Identifying Word Usage Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Mr. Fredrickson, who takes pride in acting as both a teacher and a mentor to his students, are ready for classes to begin next week. No error

Possible Answers:

are

acting

No error

who

to begin

Correct answer:

are

Explanation:

Although the verb "are" is located close to the plural noun "students," it is actually referring to the subject of the sentence, "Mr. Fredrickson," so the verb should be the singular "is." When checking for subject-verb agreement, it can be helpful to identify just the subject and the verb, ignoring all descriptive phrases and focusing on whether the verb correctly matches the given subject.

Example Question #501 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Every morning, I eat a piece of whole grain toast with almond butter because the combination of carbohydrates and protein provide me with energy that lasts until lunch. No error

Possible Answers:

eat

provide

No error

until

because

Correct answer:

provide

Explanation:

The verb "provide" refers to the subject "combination." Because "combination" is a singular noun, the verb needs be changed from "provide" to "provides." The verb may follow the two nouns "carbohydrates and protein," which makes the verb "provide" seem appropriate. However, those nouns are actually part of the prepositional phrase "of carbohydrates and protein." Breaking down a sentence to make sure that each verb agrees with its subject is a good start when looking for sentence errors!

Example Question #22 : Identifying Agreement Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Not one of Johnny's teachers believe he cheated on his exit exams; however, given the severity of the accusations, the school's administrators forced Johnny to retake all of his exit exams. No error

Possible Answers:

of Johnny's teachers

of

believe

No error

however

Correct answer:

believe

Explanation:

In this sentence, "one" is the subject of the sentence, not "teachers," and "one" is a singular noun. As a result, the verb of the sentence ("believe") needs to match the subject's plurality. Therefore, the verb of the sentence must be singular, too: "Not one of the teachers believes."

Example Question #11 : Identifying Subject Verb Agreement Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

The protest of students, professors, and community members were unsuccessful in their attempt to change the university's policy on sexual assault to include harsher punishments for assailants. No error

Possible Answers:

No error

were unsuccessful in their

to change

harsher

on

Correct answer:

were unsuccessful in their

Explanation:

The subject of the sentence is "protest," not "students, professors, and community members."  Thus, the verb of the sentence, "were," is incorrect.  The verb must match the plurality of its subject.  Since "protest" is singular, the verb must be singular, too: "The protest of students, professors, and community members was unsuccessful."

Example Question #502 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Neither Sheila nor Ann have ever gone to the fair without having bought tickets beforehand. No error

Possible Answers:

No error

beforehand

have

having bought

gone

Correct answer:

have

Explanation:

The sentence features two subjects: "Sheila" and "Ann." The word "Neither" classifies them as singular, but the verb "have" is used with plural subjects. To correct this sentence, "have" should be changed to "has."

Example Question #503 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Early education programs, like the one started in that school district last year, has been shown to improve academic success later in lifeNo error

Possible Answers:

improve

like the one

No error

later in life

has been shown

Correct answer:

has been shown

Explanation:

The subject of the sentence, "Early education programs," is plural, but the verb that refers to it, "has been shown," agrees with a singular subject. It can be easy to miss this because of the interrupting phrase that separates the sentence's subject from the verb that refers to it. Changing "has been shown" to "have been shown" corrects the sentence's error. The corrected sentence reads, "Early education programs, like the one started in that school district last year, have been shown to improve academic success later in life."

Example Question #504 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

During the period of English colonialism, the reigning monarch, rather than elected officials, were responsible for nearly all political matters. No error

Possible Answers:

rather than

No error

for

During

were

Correct answer:

were

Explanation:

The subject of this sentence is "the reigning monarch," which is singular, but the verb "were," which refers to "the reigning monarch," is plural. "Were" should be changed to "was" to match the singular subject.

Example Question #505 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Carefully crafted plots andbrilliantly developed main character is what makes the book so compellingNo error

Possible Answers:

and

so compelling

No error

is what makes

brilliantly developed

Correct answer:

is what makes

Explanation:

This sentence has a plural, compound subject, but the verb "is" agrees with a singular subject. Changing "is" to "are" corrects the sentence's error. The corrected sentence reads, "Carefully crafted plots and a brilliantly developed main character are what makes the book so compelling."

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