PSAT Writing : Correcting Other Usage Errors

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Example Questions

Example Question #1 : Correcting Conventional And Idiomatic Usage Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

The jury, despite hours of deliberation, is not able to resolve the issue; in the end, they cannot determine whose responsible for the crime. No error

Possible Answers:

No error

deliberation, is

determine whose

issue; in the end

jury, despite

Correct answer:

determine whose

Explanation:

"Who is" and "who's" is not interchangeable with "whose": here the correct sentence is: "they cannot determine who is (who's) respsonsible ..."

Example Question #41 : Correcting Other Usage Errors

The two campaigns became certain the election was so close election night would not feature a definite result.

Possible Answers:

was closely

was so close that

was so close

was close

was too close

Correct answer:

was so close that

Explanation:

The key problem with the sentence is that the portion after the underlined part has to be introduced by a pronoun introducing the relative clause "election night would not feature a definite result." "Was so close that" is the only choice among the answers featuring such a word.

Example Question #1 : Correcting Conventional And Idiomatic Usage Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

What is most importantest in life is having love, health, and happiness in personal relationships.

Possible Answers:

most important

most importantly

more importanter

most importantest

importantest

Correct answer:

most important

Explanation:

"Importantest" is not a word, and is an incorrect superlative form. The proper superlative form of "important" is "most important," which is the correct answer choice.

Example Question #241 : Improving Sentences

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Kylie studied until morning in preparing her test stategy for the next exam.

Possible Answers:

to prepare her test strategy

for preparing her test strategy

for the preparation of her test strategy

in preparing her test strategy

in an effort to prepare her test strategy

Correct answer:

to prepare her test strategy

Explanation:

This is an usual utilization of the word "preparing." Simply "to prepare" is more practical.

Example Question #231 : Correcting Usage Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Although the firefighters tried their best, the house was completely in fire by the time they arrived.

Possible Answers:

Although the firefighters tried their best, the house was completely on fire by the time they arrived.

Although the firefighters tried their best, the house was completely in fire by the time they arrived.

By the time they arrived, the firefighters tried their best, although the house was completely in fire.

Although the firefighters tried their best, the house was completely engulfed on fire by the time they arrived.

Although they tried their best, the house was completely in fire by the time the firefighters arrived.

Correct answer:

Although the firefighters tried their best, the house was completely on fire by the time they arrived.

Explanation:

The original sentence contains an idiomatic error: "in fire." In English, objects are described as "on fire," not "in fire." A house that is "on fire" may also be "engulfed in flames," but never "engulfed on fire."

Only the correct answer choice contains the appropriate idiom.

Example Question #11 : Correcting Conventional And Idiomatic Usage Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

The politicians couldn't hardly believe their luck.

Possible Answers:

could hardly believe their luck.

couldn't nearly believe their luck.

couldn't hardly believe his or her luck.

couldn't hardly believe their luck.

would not hardly believe their luck.

Correct answer:

could hardly believe their luck.

Explanation:

We are looking for the answer choice without negation. "Could hardly believe their luck" is the only answer that does not contain a negative.

Example Question #231 : Correcting Usage Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Mexico is known for growing large quantities of mangos, but that isn’t its primary export.

Possible Answers:

but that isn’t its primary export, however

but that isn’t it’s primary export

but that isn’t its primary export

but that isn’t Mexicos’ primary export

but that isn’t their primary export

Correct answer:

but that isn’t its primary export

Explanation:

Since Mexico is a country (a thing), the possessive would be “its.” “It’s” (with an apostrophe) is a contraction of “it is.” The word “however” is redundant because “but” has the same meaning.

Example Question #231 : Correcting Usage Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Karla and Kimberly are supposedly much more athletic than they’re older siblings.

Possible Answers:

than their older siblings

then their older siblings

then they’re older siblings

than there older siblings

than they’re older siblings

Correct answer:

than their older siblings

Explanation:

“Than” is used for comparison, while “then” means next in a sequence. The possessive of third person plural is “their.” “They’re” is the contraction of “they are,” and “there” is a place.

Example Question #231 : Correcting Usage Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

The meteorology professor asked her students to record the causes and affects of Hurricane Sandy.

Possible Answers:

The Meteorology Professor asked her students to record the causes and effects of Hurricane Sandy.

The Meteorology Professor asked her students to record the causes and affects of Hurricane Sandy.

The meteorology professor asked their students to record the causes of effects of Hurricane Sandy. 

The meteorology professor asked her students to record the causes and effects of Hurricane Sandy.

The meteorology professor asked her students to record the causes and affects of Hurricane Sandy.

Correct answer:

The meteorology professor asked her students to record the causes and effects of Hurricane Sandy.

Explanation:

“Effects” is the noun “effect” in its plural form (e.g., the aftermath). “Affects,” by contrast, is from the verb “to affect” (e.g., to influence). “Meteorology Professor” does not need to be capitalized because it is not the official title of the person.

Example Question #491 : Correcting Word Usage Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

The rain has a big affect on his mood.

Possible Answers:

His mood has a big affect on the rain.

(No changes to original.)

On his mood, the rain is largely effecting.

The rain has a big effect on his mood.

The rain affects his mood.

Correct answer:

The rain has a big effect on his mood.

Explanation:

Here, we need the noun “effect,” not the verb “affect.”

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