PSAT Writing : Correcting Other Phrase, Clause, and Sentence Errors

Study concepts, example questions & explanations for PSAT Writing

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Example Questions

Example Question #2 : Correcting Ambiguity And Redundancy Errors

Having to have been what is like a chameleon, the spy could take on many different personas.

Possible Answers:

Had been what like a chameleon

Having to be like a chameleon

Having to have been what is like a chameleon

Having to had been like a chameleon

To have been having what is like a chameleon

Correct answer:

Having to be like a chameleon

Explanation:

The underlined portion of the sentence is extremely wordy and confusing. The best way to improve the sentence is to simplify the phrase while retaining its original intended meaning. The answer choice that best does this is "Having to be like a chameleon."

Example Question #161 : Correcting Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors

Professional athletes, having to have their careers ended by the time they are in their thirties, usually struggle when they are forced to retire.

Possible Answers:

having their careers end in their thirties

to have their careers ended by in their thirties

having had their careers ending by the time of their thirties

having careers ended by thirties

having to have their careers ended by the time they are in their thirties

Correct answer:

having their careers end in their thirties

Explanation:

The underlined phrase is extremely long and somewhat confusing, and needs to be simplified a great deal. The repetition and unclear language needs to be done away with while keeping the meaning of the sentence intact. The answer choice that best does all of this is "having their careers end in their thirties."

Example Question #161 : Correcting Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors

Having been seen as what is the thing to be judged against, the book was read by every student entering the field.

Possible Answers:

Having been seen as what is the thing to be judged against,

Having seen as the thing to be judged against,

Being seen as the thing to judge against,

Having being seen as what is the thing to be judged against,

Being what is seen as being judged against,

Correct answer:

Being seen as the thing to judge against,

Explanation:

The sentence as it is written is overly wordy and confusing, and desperately needs to be simplified. Key to simplification is keeping the meaning of the sentence and clarifying the word choice. The only answer choice that appropriately does both is "Being seen as the thing to judge against," making it the correct answer.

Example Question #151 : Correcting Other Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors

The young lieutenant, having seen heavy fighting at previous battles, knew that the task which was ahead of his troops was a difficult one.

Possible Answers:

The young lieutenant having seen heavy fighting at previous battles, knew that the task which was ahead of his troops was a difficult one.

The young lieutenant, having seen heavy fighting at previous battles, knew that the task which was ahead of his troops was a difficult one.

The young lieutenant knowing the task ahead of his soldiers was difficult because he had seen heavy fighting at previous battles.

The young lieutenant knew the task ahead of his soldiers was difficult because he had seen heavy fighting at previous battles.

The young lieutenant had seen heavy fighting at previous battles, knew that the task  ahead of his troops was difficult.

Correct answer:

The young lieutenant knew the task ahead of his soldiers was difficult because he had seen heavy fighting at previous battles.

Explanation:

The sentence as it is written is overwrought and complicated, and would be best served by being simplified. The only answer choice that simplifies the sentence, remains grammatically correct, and does not distort the meaning is "The young lieutenant knew the task ahead of his soldiers was difficult because he had seen heavy fighting at previous battles."

Example Question #1171 : Psat Writing Skills

River currents become stronger as a river grows wider, danger becoming more likely.

Possible Answers:

becoming more dangerous.

likelihood of danger being more.

danger becoming more likely.

danger being more likely.

danger more likely.

Correct answer:

becoming more dangerous.

Explanation:

The underlined portion of the sentence is a referential phrase that does not clearly fit into the sentence's meaning. The same meaning to the sentence can be given with a more cohesive word choice. "Becoming more dangerous" is the only answer choice that appropriately refers to the preceding part of the sentence and is grammatically correct.

Example Question #151 : Correcting Other Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors

To have been that which once was held precious, the figurines were kept by the young woman through all of her moves.

Possible Answers:

Having been that which once was held precious,

To have been that which once was held precious,

Having once been holding precious,

To have been which was held precious,

Being once held precious,

Correct answer:

Being once held precious,

Explanation:

The underlined phrase is extremely awkward and confusingly worded, and must be simplified. While being simplified, the intended meaning must be kept, and the new form must remain grammatically correct. The only answer choice that appropriately does all of this is "Being once held precious."

Example Question #151 : Correcting Other Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors

The school teacher was desperately seeking the student that was the one who had done the damage to the room.

Possible Answers:

that was done damage to the room.

that did the damage to the room.

that was the one that had done the damage to the room.

that had doing the damage to the room.

that was the one who had done the damage to the room.

Correct answer:

that did the damage to the room.

Explanation:

The underlined portion of the sentence has too many words and becomes confusing. The underlined section needs to be simplified, but also has to be grammatically correct and keep the intended meaning of the sentence. "That did the damage to the room" is the choice that best does this among the answers.

Example Question #152 : Correcting Other Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors

Having been one of the ones that had received the medal, the athlete quickly became a national hero.

Possible Answers:

Having received one of the ones of the medal.

Having received the medal

Having been one to receive the medal

Having been the ones that had received the medal

Having been one of the ones that had received the medal

Correct answer:

Having received the medal

Explanation:

The underlined portion of the sentence is extremely wordy, bordering on confusing. The phrase desperately needs to be simplified in order to make it clearer. The best answer choice that both simplifies and retains the intended meaning is "Having received the medal."

Example Question #153 : Correcting Other Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors

That topic being one of the ones which had been discussed, the entire group thought about it all weekend.

Possible Answers:

Being a topic that was one having been discussed

That topic being one of the ones which had been discussed

That topic being one of the ones which having been discussed

Being one topic that was discussed

That topic being one which had been discussed

Correct answer:

Being one topic that was discussed

Explanation:

The underlined phrase is extremely wordy and confusingly complex, and needs to be greatly simplified. While it should be simplified, it also needs to retain the sentence's intended meaning and be grammatically correct. The answer choice that best does both of these tasks is "Being one topic that was discussed."

Example Question #11 : Correcting Ambiguity And Redundancy Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Everyone was shocked to see that the crowd's favorite horse in the race was the least fast out of all of the horses.

Possible Answers:

was the least fast one.

was the slowest out of all of the horses.

were the slowest one.

was the slowest one.

was the slowest one of everyone.

Correct answer:

was the slowest one.

Explanation:

The best way to say something like "least fast" is to simply say "slowest." It is more concise and more direct, and so although "least fast" may be gramatically correct, it is not the most effective form. "Out of all of the horses" is also unnecessarily wordy and can be shortened to be more effective at getting the point across.

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