GMAT Verbal : Correcting Comma Errors

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Example Questions

Example Question #71 : Correcting Comma Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Because of farming, and herding, humans are able to sustain large populations.

Possible Answers:

Because of farming and herding, humans are able

Because of farming and herding: humans are able

Because of farming and herding; humans are able

Because of farming, and herding, humans are able

Because of farming, and herding humans are able

Correct answer:

Because of farming and herding, humans are able

Explanation:

This sentence misuses a comma. The phrase "Because of farming and herding" is an introductory phrase, explaining information necessary to the context of the sentence, but outside of the main sentence, grammatically. These types of phrases must be followed by a comma in order to separate them from the rest of the sentence. A comma is not necessary, however, before the "and," because the phrase "farming and herding" is not a list (a list contains three or more items), and it is not combining independent clauses. The correct choice is, "Because of farming and herding, humans are able."

Example Question #72 : Correcting Comma Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Harvard one of the top schools in the United States has an endowment worth billions of dollars.

Possible Answers:

Harvard: one of the top schools in the United States, has an endowment worth billions of dollars.

Harvard, one of the top schools in the United States, has an endowment worth billions of dollars.

Harvard one of the top schools in the United States has an endowment worth billions of dollars.

Harvard - one of the top schools in the United States - has an endowment worth billions of dollars.

Harvard is one of the top schools in the United States has an endowment worth billions of dollars.

Correct answer:

Harvard, one of the top schools in the United States, has an endowment worth billions of dollars.

Explanation:

This sentence does not contain commas where necessary. The phrase "one of the top schools in the United States" is an example of a relative clause, which gives more information about its antecedent: Harvard. Any such phrase that occurs in the middle of a sentence must be introduced and completed with a comma. The correct choice is, "Harvard, one of the top schools in the United States, has an endowment worth billions of dollars."

Example Question #72 : Correcting Comma Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

During, his flight Hector was able to catch up on many things on his task list. 

Possible Answers:

During his flight; Hector was able to catch

During, his flight, Hector was able to catch

During his flight: Hector was able to catch

During his flight, Hector was able to catch

During, his flight Hector was able to catch

Correct answer:

During his flight, Hector was able to catch

Explanation:

This sentence contains an error in the placement of the comma. There is no need for a comma to come after the word "during," since it is not the end of the phrase. The phrase "During his flight" is an introductory phrase, explaining information necessary to the context of the sentence, but outside of the main sentence, grammatically. These types of phrases must be followed by a comma in order to separate them from the rest of the sentence. The correct answer choice is, "During his flight, Hector was able to catch."

Example Question #73 : Correcting Comma Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Otto, and his brother went to the park every Saturday in order to fly their drones.

Possible Answers:

Otto and his brother went to the park every Saturday:

Otto, and his brother went to the park every Saturday

Otto and his brother went to the park: every Saturday

Otto, and his brother, went to the park every Saturday

Otto and his brother went to the park every Saturday

Correct answer:

Otto and his brother went to the park every Saturday

Explanation:

This sentence misuses a comma. The phrase "Otto and his brother" is part of the same clause: it is not a list (3+ items), two clauses, or anything else that would reason the use of a comma. This is a simple sentence, so no punctuation is necessary. The correct choice is, "Otto and his brother went to the park every Saturday."

Example Question #74 : Correcting Comma Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Stefan could not decide whether he should pay his bills now, or later.

Possible Answers:

whether he should pay his bills now or later. 

whether he should pay his bills now, or later. 

whether he should pay, his bills now or later. 

whether he should pay his bills, now, or later. 

whether he should pay, his bills now, or later. 

Correct answer:

whether he should pay his bills now or later. 

Explanation:

This sentence misuses a comma. There is no need for a comma before the word "or" because it is not joining two independent clauses together. This is the only time you see a comma before a conjunction. The correct choice is, "whether he should pay his bills now or later."

Example Question #75 : Correcting Comma Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Cassandra's dream which was to run her own bakery seemed like it would be realized soon.

Possible Answers:

Cassandra's dream; which was to run her own bakery; seemed like

Cassandra's dream which was to run her own bakery, seemed like

Cassandra's dream, which was to run her own bakery, seemed like

Cassandra's dream, which was to run her own bakery seemed like

Cassandra's dream; which was to run her own bakery, seemed like

Correct answer:

Cassandra's dream, which was to run her own bakery, seemed like

Explanation:

This sentence does not contain commas where necessary. The phrase "which was to run her own bakery" is a relative clause, which gives more information about its antecedent: dream. Any such phrase that occurs in the middle of a sentence must be introduced and completed with a comma. The correct answer choice is, "Cassandra's dream, which was to run her own bakery, seemed like."

Example Question #76 : Correcting Comma Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Jake was a perfectionist, it always bothered him when others did not do things exactly the way he wanted.

Possible Answers:

Jake was a perfectionist. it always bothered him when others

Jake was a perfectionist; it always bothered him when others

Jake was a perfectionist, it always bothered, him when others

Jake was a perfectionist it always bothered him when others

Jake was a perfectionist, it always bothered him when others

Correct answer:

Jake was a perfectionist; it always bothered him when others

Explanation:

This sentence misuses a comma. The sentence combines two independent clauses without the use of a conjunction. When this occurs, a semicolon is the appropriate punctuation mark: a semicolon should appear after the word "perfectionist." The correct choice is, "Jake was a perfectionist; it always bothered him when others." Note that the choice with the period is incorrect because "it" is not capitalized. 

Example Question #206 : Correcting Punctuation Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Dante planned to start an e-business because of the low overhead costs exposure to many markets and its ease to set up.

Possible Answers:

e-business because of the low overhead costs exposure to many markets and its ease to set up.

e-business because of the low overhead costs, exposure to many markets, and its easy to set up.

e-business because of: the low overhead costs, exposure to many markets, and its ease to set up.

e-business because of the low overhead costs, exposure to many markets, and its ease to set up.

e-business because of the low overhead costs, exposure to many markets and its ease to set up.

Correct answer:

e-business because of the low overhead costs, exposure to many markets, and its ease to set up.

Explanation:

This sentence omits commas where necessary. The phrase "the low overhead costs, exposure to many markets, and its ease to set up" is a list. All items in any sort of list/parallel words or phrases should be separated by commas. Additionally, a comma must come before the "and" because exposure to markets is not related to ease in setting something up, besides being another one of Dante's reasons. The correct answer is, "e-business because of the low overhead costs, exposure to many markets, and its ease to set up."

Example Question #77 : Correcting Comma Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. 

His room was filled with books maps, and other study materials.

Possible Answers:

was filled with books maps and other study materials

was filled with books, maps and other study materials

was filled with books maps, and other study materials

was filled with books, maps, and other study materials

was filled with books, maps, and other, study materials

Correct answer:

was filled with books, maps, and other study materials

Explanation:

This sentence does not contain a comma where necessary. The phrase "books, maps, and other study materials" are all a part of the list, so a comma should appear after each item. Note that the comma before the "and" cannot be omitted because "maps" is not necessarily related to "other study materials." The correct choice is, "was filled with books, maps, and other study materials."

Example Question #78 : Correcting Comma Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Sandra did not like beef, but loved chicken.

Possible Answers:

did not like beef, but loved chicken.

did not like beef but loved chicken.

did not like: beef but loved chicken.

did not like beef; but loved chicken.

did not like: beef, but loved chicken.

Correct answer:

did not like beef but loved chicken.

Explanation:

This sentence contains a comma where one is not necessary. Commas should only come before conjunctions when the conjunction joins two independent clauses. While "Sandra did not like beef" is an independent clause, "loved chicken" is not. The comma should be omitted. The answer is, "did not like beef but loved chicken."

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