ACT English : Other Pronoun Usage Errors

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Example Question #3 : Correcting Pronoun Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Yesterday, you asked me whether I agree more with John F. Kennedy or Richard Nixon; after reading about their policies, I realize that I agree more with him.

Possible Answers:

Yesterday, you asked me whether I agree more with John F. Kennedy or Richard Nixon; after reading about their policies, I realize that I agree more with him.

Yesterday, you asked me whether I agree more with John F. Kennedy or Richard Nixon; after reading about their policies, I realize that the one with whom I agreed was him.  

Yesterday, you asked me whether I agree more with John F. Kennedy or Richard Nixon; after reading about their policies, I realize that I agree more with he.  

Yesterday, you asked me whether I agree more with John F. Kennedy or Richard Nixon; after reading about their policies, I realize that the one that I agreed with.  

Yesterday, you asked me whether I agree more with John F. Kennedy or Richard Nixon; after reading about their policies, I realize that I agree more with Kennedy.  

Correct answer:

Yesterday, you asked me whether I agree more with John F. Kennedy or Richard Nixon; after reading about their policies, I realize that I agree more with Kennedy.  

Explanation:

It is unclear if the “him” refers to Kennedy or Nixon. The correct answer makes it clear with whom I agree. 

Example Question #11 : Correcting Pronoun Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices repeats the underlined portion as it is written.

The businessman decided to pamper him with nice meals on the road.

Possible Answers:

to pamper him around nice meals on the road.

to pamper him with nice meals in the road.

to pamper himself with nice meals on the road.

to pamper him with nice meals on the road.

pampering him with nice meals on the road.

Correct answer:

to pamper himself with nice meals on the road.

Explanation:

The use of the simple pronoun "him" is confusing in this sentence, as it is unclear exactly who the pronoun refers to, the subject or some other person. The best way to clear this confusion up is by using the reflexive pronoun "himself" to refer back to the subject. Thus, the correct answer choice is "to pamper himself with nice meals on the road."

Example Question #23 : Other Pronoun Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

When Sheila, Veronica, and I spend time together, we always go to her favorite restaurant. No error

Possible Answers:

we always go to her favorite restaurant.

she always goes to our favorite restaurant. 

we always went to our favorite restaurant.

they always go to their favorite restaurant.

we always go to our favorite restaurant. 

Correct answer:

we always go to our favorite restaurant. 

Explanation:

This phrase must have a pronoun and a possessive pronoun which refer to all three individuals: "we" and "our."

In the answer choice "she always goes to our favorite restaurant," the pronoun “she” does not agree with the subject of “Sheila, Veronica, and I”—it should be “we.”

In the answer choice "we always go to her favorite restaurant," the possessive pronoun “her” should be “our,” as it refers to a restaurant preferred by all three subjects. Though this sentence could be correct, it is not the best option because “her” is not specified.

In the answer choice "we always went to our favorite restaurant," the verb “go” must agree with the present tense of “spend,” so it is incorrect.

In the answer choice "they always go to their favorite restaurant," the pronouns “they” and “their” exclude “I” as a subject, so it is incorrect.

Example Question #11 : Correcting Pronoun Errors: Ambiguity

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

The political boss was notorious for making deals with his rival that only benefitted him.

Possible Answers:

that only benefits him

that only benefitted him

which only benefitted him

that benefitted only him

that only benefitted himself

Correct answer:

that only benefitted himself

Explanation:

The use of "him" at the end of the sentence is confusing and awkward, as it is not clear to whom the pronoun is referring. Changing the simple pronoun to a reflexive pronoun allows the pronoun to refer back to the subject of the sentence clearly. Thus, the correct answer choice is "that only benefitted himself."

Example Question #12 : Correcting Pronoun Errors: Ambiguity

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

The bankers loved the technological improvement of their new computers, but they didn't work well with them.

Possible Answers:

The new computers were loved, but the bankers didn't work well with them.

The bankers loved their new computers, but didn't work well with them.

The bankers loved the technological improvement of their new computers, but they didn't work well with them.

The bankers, though they loved their new computers, didn't work well with them.

Though they loved their new computers, the bankers didn't work well with them.

Correct answer:

Though they loved their new computers, the bankers didn't work well with them.

Explanation:

The sentence is faulty because it uses a pronoun with an ambiguous antecedent. The reader can't be sure who either "they" or "them" is referring to -- the bankers or the computers. The error can be fixed by rearranging the sentence so that "they" is followed by the clarifying subject "bankers."

Example Question #13 : Correcting Pronoun Errors: Ambiguity

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Bessie knew when her cat started fighting her dog she had to give him away.

Possible Answers:

Bessie knew when her cat, fighting her dog, had to give away. 

Bessie knew when her cat was fighting her dog, she had to give him away. 

Bessie knew when her cat started fighting her dog she had to give him away.

Bessie knew when her cat started fighting her dog, she had to give the former away.

Bessie knew once her cat started fighting her dog, she had to give him away. 

Correct answer:

Bessie knew when her cat started fighting her dog, she had to give the former away.

Explanation:

This is an example of an ambiguous pronoun. The "him" in "to give him away" in the original sentence could be applying to either the dog or the cat, so we must make clear that it is one or the other.

Example Question #1 : Correcting Pronoun Errors: Inconsistent Usage

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

If one wishes to understand a musical composition fully, we must consider the time period in which it was written.

Possible Answers:

we must consider the time period corresponding to when it was written.

we must consider the time period in which it was written.

one must consider the time period in which it was written.

we must have considered the time period in which it was written.

we will have to consider the time period in which it was written.

Correct answer:

one must consider the time period in which it was written.

Explanation:

The answer choice "one must consider the time period in which it was written" is correct because it contains the word "one," which matches the word "one" used in the first clause of the sentence.

All of the other answer choices are incorrect because they contain the pronoun "we," and therefore lead to pronoun agreement errors.

Example Question #1 : Correcting Pronoun Errors: Inconsistent Usage

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

If one is to construct a comprehensive model of the global economy, we must first account for alternating periods of expansion and contraction in the business cycle.

Possible Answers:

we must account firstly for

one must first account for

one must first account to

one had first accounted for

we must first account for

Correct answer:

one must first account for

Explanation:

The original text contains a pronoun consistency error. The underlined portion of the sentence contains the pronoun "we," but the sentence uses "one" before that. In order to maintain consistency, the underlined portion should use "one" rather than "we."

The answer choice "one had first accounted for" contains a tense error, even though it correctly uses "one" instead of "we."

The answer choice "one must first account to" is incorrect because the correct idiom is "account for."

Example Question #2001 : Correcting Grammatical Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Does one have a responsibility to help others, or do you only have a responsibility to help yourself?

Possible Answers:

Does one have a responsibility to help others, or does one only have a responsibility to help themselves?

Does one have a responsibility to the helping of the others, or does one only have a responsibility to the helping of yourself?

Do ones have a responsibility to help others, or do ones only have a responsibility to help his or herself?

Do you have a responsibility to help others, or do you only have a responsibility to help yourself?

Does one have a responsibility to help others, or do you only have a responsibility to help yourself?

Correct answer:

Do you have a responsibility to help others, or do you only have a responsibility to help yourself?

Explanation:

In the sentence as it is written, "one" and "you" are both used. You should stick to using one of these pronouns or the other, and not switch between them in a sentence.

Example Question #1 : Correcting Pronoun Errors: Inconsistent Usage

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices repeats the underlined portion as it is written.

When you go to a buffet, one should make sure that you do not overeat.

Possible Answers:

then make sure

be sure of

and make sure

one should make sure

make sure

Correct answer:

make sure

Explanation:

The sentence begins by using the pronoun "you," but then switches to using the pronoun "one." These should be kept consistent.

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