ACT English : Misplaced or Interrupting Modifier Errors
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Example Question #141 : Modifier Placement Errors
Though I was part of the army during the Algerian War, my position as a military doctor kept me relatively safe. Yet I saw many terrible injuries working in my makeshift operating hall.
Choose the answer that best corrects the underlined portion of the sentence. If the underlined portion is correct as written, choose “NO CHANGE.”
working in my makeshift operating hall, many terrible injuries were exposed to my sight.
working in my makeshift operating hall, I saw many terrible injuries.
I saw many terrible injuries that worked in my makeshift operating hall.
NO CHANGE
working in my makeshift operating hall, I saw many terrible injuries.
Here, because the phrase “working in my makeshift operating hall” is next to the word “injuries,” it sounds like it was the injuries that worked in the operating hall; however, this phrase should really describe the doctor who is the narrator. So, we should rewrite the sentence to put the phrase “working in my makeshift operating hall” right next to the word “I.”
Example Question #1962 : Correcting Grammatical Errors
My first year in San Francisco, I often met up with a friend of mine to stroll around the city. One day, seeing a hawk fly by above, my friend remarked that there was still wildlife to be found in the city, if one knew where to look.
Choose the answer that best corrects the underlined portion of the sentence. If the underlined portion is correct as written, choose “NO CHANGE.”
my friend remarked about wildlife, seeing a hawk fly by above, that it could still be found in the city
my friend remarked that in the city, one could still find wildlife, seeing a hawk fly by above,
NO CHANGE
seeing a hawk fly by above, the city showed my friend that there was still wildlife to be found
my friend remarked that there was still wildlife to be found in the city, seeing a hawk fly by above,
NO CHANGE
This sentence is correct as written. The modifying phrase “seeing a hawk fly by above” is meant to describe the friend, and it does, because the words “my friend” are right next to that phrase. The other answer choices are not correct because each of them moves the modifying phrase or the words “my friend” so that they are no longer next to each other, as they are supposed to be.
Example Question #104 : Correcting Modifier Placement Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
The runner was the third person only from his home country to win a medal at the games.
the third person from only his home country
the third person only from his home country
only the third person from his home country
the third person from his home country only
the only third person from his home country
only the third person from his home country
The use of "only" in the sentence is confusing, and makes it unclear what is being modified by the adjective. The word can be better used by placing it at the front of the underlined phrase to show the subject was the third person from the country; therefore, the correct answer choice is "only the third person from his home country."
Example Question #42 : Misplaced Or Interrupting Modifier Errors
There once was a shepherd boy whom sat on the hillside watching the village sheep. He was hot and exhausted fanning himself, rapidly in a feeble attempt to cool himself down. On top of that, he had never been so bored before.
To amuse himself, he decided to play a joke. He put his hands around his mouth and yelled in a loud voice, "Wolf! Wolf! A wolf is chasing the sheep!”
They came running. They asked the boy, “What’s going on? Did you yell ‘A wolf is chasing the sheep?’ ”
The boy laughed. “It was just a joke, everyone.”
The people fumed, but they all returned to their homes.
The next day, the boy bored again decided to amuse himself again. He bellowed, “Wolf! Wolf!”
Again, the townspeople came running. Once they arrived and witnessed the laughing boy, they realized they’d been tricked a second time. Nonetheless, they returned home and irritated resolved to never fall for the trick again for third time.
The next day, the boy was watching his sheep. Suddenly, out of nowhere, a wolf appeared from behind the bushes. With its teeth bared, the boy cowered as the wolf approached the sheep. Terrified, he called, “Help! A wolf! A wolf is here!”
The people ignored his cries. “That mischievous boy,” they all said to one another. “He must think he can fool us again.” But not one of them came running.
No one was there to witness as the wolf ate every last sheep on the hillside, as the boy helplessly cowered behind a bush. As the boy hid, he shook his head. “I shall never fib again,” he resolved to himself.
What is the best alternative for the underlined sentence: "With its teeth bared, the boy cowered as the wolf approached the sheep"?
With its teeth bared, the wolf approached the sheep as the boy cowered.
With bared teeth the boy cowered as the wolf the sheep approached.
Its teeth was bared as the wolf approached the sheep and the boy was cowering as it did so.
With his teeth bared, the boy cowered as the wolf approached the sheep.
NO CHANGE
With its teeth bared, the wolf approached the sheep as the boy cowered.
In the original sentence, the boy is the subject of the sentence, so the phrase "with its teeth bared" would be a modifier for him. The author was intending to use this phrase to describe the wolf, so one has to choose an option in which the phrase clearly modifies the wolf. In "With its teeth bared, the wolf approached...," the wolf is the subject of the sentence, so the modifier applies correctly.
The sentence, "With bared teeth the boy cowered as the wolf the sheep approached" does not fix the modifier, and it is confusing to read without a comma setting off the prepositional phrase, "with bared teeth." The sentence, "Its teeth was bared as the wolf approached the sheep and the boy was cowering as it did so," is needlessly wordy. The sentence, "With his teeth bared, the boy cowered as the wolf approached the sheep" still has a misplaced modifier, and now that "his" is added, it is significantly more confusing.
Example Question #142 : Modifier Placement Errors
Choose the answer that best corrects the underlined portion of the sentence. If the underlined portion is correct as written, choose "NO CHANGE."
After studying for the past two weeks, passing the Algebra test didn't seem a real challenge for Jennifer.
she didn't find passing the Algebra test real challenging
it was passing the test that did not seem challenging to Jennifer
NO CHANGE
a challenge that faced Jennifer was passing the Algebra test
Jennifer didn't find passing the Algebra test to be a real challenge
Jennifer didn't find passing the Algebra test to be a real challenge
Modifying phrases at the beginning of the sentence should be correctly anchored. The only logical anchor for this modifying phrase is "Jennifer." All of the other choices would created a misused modifier.
Example Question #451 : Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors
Passage adapted from Stephen Leacock, The Dawn of Canadian History: A Chronicle of Aboriginal Canada (1915)
When the Europeans came to this continent at the end of the fifteenth century they already found it inhabited by races of men very different from themselves. These people, whom they took to calling "Indians," were spread out, though very thinly, from one end of the continent to the other. Who were these nations, and how was their presence to be accounted for?
Choose the answer that best corrects the bolded and underlined portion of the passage. If the bolded and underlined portion is correct as written, choose "NO CHANGE."
they found, already, that it was inhabited by races of men
they found already that it was inhabited by races of men
NO CHANGE
they found it already inhabited by races of men
they found it already inhabited by races of men
Although adverbs are fairly fluid in terms of position, in this case, placing the adverb "already" directly before the verb "found" makes the sentence mean "found at some point prior to some other specified time." However, there is no other time specified--only the "when" of the Europeans' coming and finding the inhabitants of the continent. As written, then, the sentence bears the nonsensical meaning, "they found it before they found it."
Moving "already" to modify "inhabited," on the other hand, makes the sentence mean "the land was lived in (by others) before the Europeans found it," which is not problematic.
Example Question #148 : Modifier Placement Errors
Passage adapted from G. K. Chesterton, "The Wrath of the Roses," in Alarms and Discursions (1910)
The position of the rose among flowers is like that of the dog among animals. It is not so much that both are domesticated as that we have some dim feeling that they were always domesticated. There are wild roses and there are wild dogs. I do not know the wild dogs; wild roses are very nice. But nobody ever thinks of either of them if the name is abruptly mentioned in a conversation or a poem. On the other hand, there are tame tigers and tame cobras, but if one says, "I have a cobra in my pocket," or "There is a tiger in the music-room," the adjective "tame" has to be somewhat added hastily. If one speaks of beasts one thinks first of wild beasts; if of flowers one thinks first of wild flowers.
But there are two great exceptions caught so completely into the wheel of man's civilization, entangled so unalterably with his ancient emotions and images, that the artificial product seems more natural than the natural. The dog is not a part of natural history, but of human history; and the real rose grows in a garden. All must regard the elephant as something tremendous, but tamed; and many, especially in our great cultured cities, regard every bull as presumably a mad bull. In the same way we think of most garden trees and plants as fierce creatures of the forest or morass taught at last to endure the curb.
But with the dog and the rose this instinctive principle is reversed.
Choose the answer that best corrects the bolded and underlined portion of the passage. If the bolded and underlined portion is correct as written, choose "NO CHANGE."
NO CHANGE
has to be added, somewhat, hastily
has to hastily be somewhat added
has to be somewhat hastily added
has to be somewhat hastily added
Both "somewhat" and "hastily" are adverbs. Adverbs can modify verbs, adjectives, or other adverbs. Here, however, only the adverb "hastily" can modify the verb "added," since it doesn't make sense to talk about an adjective being "somewhat" added to a noun. Therefore, the best option is to make the adverb "somewhat" modify the adverb "hastily" by placing it directly in front of it, yielding the meaning "rather quickly."
Example Question #44 : Misplaced Or Interrupting Modifier Errors
Growing up, I used to find math very tedious. I abhorred algebra, couldn't stand geometry, and 1. was just hating trigonometry. I was sure calculus would be no different. 2. That was until I met, my calculus teacher, Ms. Sweed. 3. Calculus being the subject she taught, she used it to show me how 4. math makes our world go around.
5.Ms. Sweed was very educated, having two master’s and a PhD. 6. I can still remember one day that she talked to me after class after one of the first tests we took in class I had done not as well as I had wanted. When I went to talk to her after class, she told me that she thought I was very smart and could do better if I tried. I began to come to talk to her after class every day for extra study. 7. She only used these extra sessions to not help me understand the math, but showed how math can be used to apply to real life. She showed how math could be used to explain many natural phenomena. 8. However, she showed how math can be used to analyze patterns from studies. I never thought I would say math was my favorite subject, but with Ms. Sweed teaching, it was.
9. (1) Trying to use Mrs. Sweed’s wit, enthusiasm, and dedication, as I tried to inspire other students. (2) I even started to do well enough in math to start tutoring other students. (3) I never would have been able to do so without meeting Ms. Sweed. (4) I was soon one of the top tutors in our school, and I helped dozens of students increase their grades. [10] Thanks to her inspiration, I’ve decided to look into the field of engineering. 11. Now, an engineering major taking many math classes in college. I enjoy every single one of them. 12. Math is a subject everyone can enjoy.
Where should the word "only" be placed?
Before the word "apply"
After the word "not"
After the word "me"
After the word "showed"
Exactly where it is
After the word "not"
The placement of the modifier "only" changes the meaning of the sentence. In this case, the author wants to emphasize that Ms. Sweed accomplished more than one goal, so the word "only" should go after the word "not" to compare the idea of "[helping] to understand the math" with "[showing] how math can be used to apply to real life."
Example Question #151 : Modifier Placement Errors
Choose the answer that best corrects the underlined portion of the sentence. If the underlined portion is correct as written, choose "NO CHANGE."
Moving along the track at 150 miles per hour, I saw the red race car go by in a blur.
I saw, moving along the track in a blur at 150 miles per hour, the red race car go by.
The red race car went by in a blur, moving along the track at 150 miles per hour, I saw.
I saw the red race car go by in a blur, moving along the track at 150 miles per hour.
NO CHANGE
In a blur, I saw the red race car go by, moving along the track at 150 miles per hour.
I saw the red race car go by in a blur, moving along the track at 150 miles per hour.
This sentence contains a misplaced modifier, which confuses its meaning. The modifying phrase, "moving along the track at 150 miles per hour," should be placed as close as possible to the phrase it modifies, "the red race car." Otherwise, the structure of the sentence incorrectly suggests that the narrator of the sentence, rather than the car, was moving at 150 miles per hour.
Example Question #1971 : Correcting Grammatical Errors
Coupons
Are you trying to stick to a budget? Using coupons for [61] purchases, also known as “couponing” is a great way to save money on groceries. [62] Coupons are a little piece of paper that can give you a discount on what you buy. You will be amazed at the [63] great bargains and amazing savings you can get!
It’s easy to get started. [64] When you open up your daily newspaper, one might find a glossy insert full of coupons. [65] Some of the coupons will be for things you don’t buy, some will be for things you buy all the time. Go through the coupons and [66] chop out the ones you can use.
The key to successful couponing is getting multiple copies of coupon circulars. Ask [67] your friends, your neighbors, and family if they have any extras. Some coupon users even go through the recycling at their office to find more coupons! [68] Completely devoted, these circulars help coupon users to get even more savings.
Couponing might sound like hard work, but for [69] many people, it’s also a hobby. Not only does it help them save hundreds of dollars per year, [70] but instead it gives them a fun challenge every time they do their shopping.
Is there perhaps a greater value to a life lived without constant counting, penny-pinching, and miserliness? [71] But of what value are such savings? [72] At the end of the day; money is a construct, invented by the elite for the sole purpose of controlling the populace. [73] If we accept this fundamental truth, it behooves one to question the monetary structures that control our lives. Indeed, from this perspective, the very practice of couponing might seem a venial distraction from the valuable human endeavor of personal philosophical consideration. [74]
The papers we pore over should be in our books; the pennies we save should be in the currency of our happiness; [75] the budget we have made should have been a budget of our contentment.
A sort of couponing of the soul might ultimately be the solution.
Choose the answer that best corrects section [65].
These circulars help completely devoted coupon users get even more savings.
These circulars, completely devoted, help coupon users get even more savings.
Completely devoted, these circulars help get even more savings for coupon users.
NO CHANGE
These circulars help completely devoted coupon users get even more savings.
This question asks you to correct a misplaced modifier error. The modifying phrase, "completely devoted," should be placed as close as possible to the phrase it modifies, "coupon users." Otherwise, the misplaced modifier confuses the sentence's meaning, making it sound as though the circulars themselves are devoted.
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