ACT English : Phrase, Clause, and Sentence Errors

Study concepts, example questions & explanations for ACT English

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Example Questions

Example Question #401 : Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors

One time a mystery, scientists now believe they understand the reason behind the creation of the ancient Stonehenge.

Choose the best alternative to the sentence above. If the sentence is correct as is, choose NO CHANGE.

Possible Answers:

One time a mystery, the Stonehenge and its creation is now understood by scientific reasoning.

One time a mystery, the reasons behind the creation of the Stonehenge are now understood by scientists.

One time a mystery, the creation of the Stonehenge has unveiled its reasons to scientists.

NO CHANGE

One time a mystery, scientists now believe they understand the reasons behind the creation of the ancient Stonehenge.

Correct answer:

One time a mystery, the reasons behind the creation of the Stonehenge are now understood by scientists.

Explanation:

This question asks the reader to choose the best alternative to correct the dangling modifier, which is a phrase that isn't attached to the rest of the sentence in a clear manner. Here, the phrase "one time a mystery" modifies the word "reasons." Therefore "reasons" must follow its modifier immediately. The only option choice that does this is "One time a mystery, the reasons behind the creation of the Stonehenge are now understood by scientists."

Example Question #402 : Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors

In order to get better results, the experiment was repeated.

Choose the best alternative to the sentence above. If the sentence is correct as is, choose NO CHANGE.

Possible Answers:

In order to get better results, the scientist repeated the experiment.

In order to get better results, the experiment was repeated by the scientist.

In order to achieve better results, repetition of the experiment by the scientist is recommended.

In order to achieve better results, the experiment was repeated.

NO CHANGE

Correct answer:

In order to get better results, the scientist repeated the experiment.

Explanation:

This original sentence contains a dangling modifier that needs to be corrected. The introductory clause "In order to achieve better results" is modifying the scientist's behavior, therefore the word "scientist" must immediately follow its modifier.

Example Question #93 : Modifier Placement Errors

While watching his favorite football team on TV, the commercial suddenly interrupted Ashton's focus.

Choose the best alternative to the sentence above. If the sentence is correct as is, choose NO CHANGE. 

Possible Answers:

While watching his favorite football team on TV, suddenly a commercial interrupted Ashton's focus.

While watching his favorite football team on TV, a commercial suddenly interrupted the focus of Ashton.

While watching his favorite football team on TV, Ashton had his focus suddenly interrupted by a commercial.

NO CHANGE

While watching his favorite football team on TV, Ashton's focus was suddenly interrupted by a commercial.

Correct answer:

While watching his favorite football team on TV, Ashton had his focus suddenly interrupted by a commercial.

Explanation:

This question requires the reader to correct the dangling modifier. The phrase "While watching his favorite football team on TV" is modifying Ashton. Therefore "Ashton" must follow this phrase immediately. One answer is a bit deceiving: "While watching his favorite football team on TV, Ashton's focus was suddenly interrupted by a commercial." Though the name Ashton immediately follows the modifier, it's being used as a possessive modifier of the noun "focus," so technically "focus" still immediately follows this phrase. 

Example Question #403 : Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors

When picking a puppy, the best choice is a dog with a medium level of energy.

Choose the best alternative to the sentence above. If the sentence is correct as is, choose NO CHANGE.

Possible Answers:

NO CHANGE

When picking a puppy, a dog with a medium level of energy is the best choice.

When picking a puppy, you should choose a dog with a medium level of energy.

When picking a puppy, a medium level of energy is the best choice for a dog.

When picking a puppy, the energy level of the dog is best when it's medium.

Correct answer:

When picking a puppy, you should choose a dog with a medium level of energy.

Explanation:

This question requires the reader to correct the dangling modifier. The phrase "When picking a puppy" is referring to someone who performs this action. Therefore we need a name or pronoun that refers to a person that will immediately follow this phrase. Every other choice has the wrong noun immediately following the modifying phrase. 

Example Question #95 : Modifier Placement Errors

Choose the answer that best corrects the underlined portion of the sentence. If the underlined portion is correct as written, choose "NO CHANGE."

Overjoyed to have finally found a position in his field, his employer was delighted to have John start working right away.

Possible Answers:

NO CHANGE

Overjoyed to have finally found a position in his field, John's employer was delighted to have John start working right away.

Overjoyed to have finally found a position in his field, John's employer was delighted to start working right away for John.

Overjoyed to have finally found a position in his field, John and his employer were delighted to start working right away.

Overjoyed to have finally found a position in his field, John was delighted to start working right away.

Correct answer:

Overjoyed to have finally found a position in his field, John was delighted to start working right away.

Explanation:

The dangling modifier "Overjoyed to have finally found a position in his field" describes the noun John and should therefore be followed by this noun. Amodifier should begin a sentence, is set off by a comma, and is followed by the noun(s) to which the modifier refers. If the subject of the main clause does not match up with the subject of the introductory clause that modifier is left hanging, which is fun for neither people or modifiers!

Example Question #96 : Modifier Placement Errors

Choose the answer that best corrects the underlined portion of the sentence. If the underlined portion is correct as written, choose "NO CHANGE."

Celebrated for their loyalty and unwavering companionship, man commonly refers to dogs as "man's best friend".

Possible Answers:

Celebrated for their loyalty and unwavering companionship, men is commonly referred to as "dog's best friend".

NO CHANGE

Celebrated for their loyalty and unwavering companionship, dogs are commonly referred to as "man's best friend".

Dog's, celebrated for their loyalty and unwavering companionship, are commonly referred to as "mans best friend".

Celebrated for their loyalty and unwavering companionship, a dog is commonly referred to as "mans best friend".

Correct answer:

Celebrated for their loyalty and unwavering companionship, dogs are commonly referred to as "man's best friend".

Explanation:

The dangling modifier "Celebrated for their loyalty and unwavering companionship" refers to "dogs," the  noun being described, but the subject of the main clause here is "man." Anytime you have an introductory clause that modifies a later noun, you should be careful to double-check that the modifier describes the grammatical subject of the main clause.

Example Question #404 : Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors

Choose the answer that best corrects the underlined portion of the sentence. If the underlined portion is correct as written, choose "NO CHANGE."

With over 200 published short stories in two years, the prolific writing of James Martin is unparalleled.

Possible Answers:

James Martin's writing is prolific an unparalleled.

NO CHANGE

James Martin is unparalleled in his prolific writing.

the prolific writing of James Martin will be unparalleled.

James Martin's prolific writing is unparalleled.

Correct answer:

James Martin is unparalleled in his prolific writing.

Explanation:

It is not the writing of James Martin that has published over 200 stories, it is James Martin himself, so the correct answer assigns the modifier to the correct subject.

Example Question #405 : Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors

Choose the answer that best corrects the underlined portion of the sentence. If the underlined portion is correct as written, choose "NO CHANGE."

To prepare for the party, Casey's decorations were all hung up early that morning.

Possible Answers:

Casey's decorations were to be hung up early that morning.

all of the decorations was hung up by Casey early that morning.

NO CHANGE

Casey hung up all of her decorations early that morning.

all of the decorations were hung up by Casey early that morning.

Correct answer:

Casey hung up all of her decorations early that morning.

Explanation:

Casey is the person who is preparing for the party, not her decorations. As it stands, the modifying phrase is misplaced so that the sentence is confusing and implies that Casey's decorations are doing the party preparations. The correct answer is the only one that correctly refers to Casey instead of her decorations as the person or thing performing the action in the sentence.

Example Question #406 : Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors

Choose the answer that best corrects the underlined portion of the sentence. If the underlined portion is correct as written, choose "NO CHANGE."

Having drunk all the water, the empty bottle was on the table next to Bill.

Possible Answers:

Bill's empty bottle was on the table next to him, having drunk all the water. 

Having drunk all the water, Bill put the empty bottle on the table next to him. 

Having drunk all the water, the empty bottle was placed on the table next to him by Bill.

Having drunk all the water, on the table next to Bill was the empty bottle.

NO CHANGE

Correct answer:

Having drunk all the water, Bill put the empty bottle on the table next to him. 

Explanation:

This question asks you to correct a dangling modifier, which occurs when it is unclear what phrase is being modified. In this sentence, the structure incorrectly suggests that the bottle itself drank the water. A modifying phrase should be placed as close as possible to the phrase it modifies, so the phrase "Having drunk all the water" should be placed next to the description of who drank it, "Bill."

Example Question #407 : Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors

Choose the answer that best corrects the underlined portion of the sentence. If the underlined portion is correct as written, choose "NO CHANGE."

Looking up at the top of the stairwell, Jerry's date took careful steps as he watched her descend.

Possible Answers:

NO CHANGE

Having looked up at the top of the stairwell,

Beginning at the top of the stairwell,

The stairwell being where she looked up,

As she looked up at the top of the stairwell,

Correct answer:

Beginning at the top of the stairwell,

Explanation:

Since Jerry's date "descended" the stairwell, it is obvious that she was not "looking up" Thus, "beginning" her descent as Jerry looked up at her is the correct modifying phrase for the anchor, "Jerry's date."

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