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I am an interdisciplinary educator with an Ed.M. from the Harvard Graduate School of Education and a B.A. from Dartmouth College. My background is primarily in integrated arts learning and museum education and I specialize in visual arts, history and art history, and object-based learning. In all subjects, I take a creative, inquiry-based and learner-centered approach, designing opportunities for each unique individual to meet their learning goals.

I'm not tutoring or buried in my textbooks, you will either find me rock climbing at the Triangle Rock Club, playing Ultimate Frisbee, working on my car, or enjoying the great outdoors (beaches, mountains, forests--you name it, I love it). On rainy weekends I enjoy tinkering with computers and old electronics, playing Pokemon, or picking at my guitar.
I am a recent graduate from a masters program in biostatistics at Columbia University. I received my Bachelor of Arts in biological sciences, with a focus in neurobiology at Northwestern University. In August, I will be starting a doctoral program in biostatistics at NYU. I was a teaching assistant at Columbia University in my department and also have tutored graduate students and undergraduates privately as well. My primary areas of tutoring are math and statistics coursework in addition to math sections on standardized tests such as the GRE and GMAT. I am very passionate about helping students feel more confident and excited about math. In my spare time, I enjoy running, playing piano, and spending time with friends and family.
I am a graduate of Wesleyan University, where I received my Bachelor of Arts in Sociology with High Honors. With eight years of experience working in education, I've tutored students in math, science, history, and English, as well as helped students prepare for standardized tests. I've guided adults towards passing the US Citizenship Exam and taught English in India, where I lived for six months. Whenever I work with a student I personalize the lessons to fit their particular learning style, since I know every student is unique and having the right fit can make all the difference in making learning fun and effective. My strengths are tutoring the social sciences and humanities, as well as making math and standardized tests approachable to students that normally don't like those subjects. In my spare time I like traveling, spending time in the outdoors (climbing & backpacking), meditation, and playing soccer. Next fall I will be beginning my PhD in Education at Harvard University.
I am a junior Mechanical Engineering major at Yale, and I hope to become a Naval Aviator after college. I am also a varsity sailor, and enjoy playing music with friends when I can get some free time. I have been tutoring my fellow students throughout my entire academic career, and I would best describe my tutoring style as one that adapts to each students' needs. For example, I have always tried to frame questions in a different way so that the student can better understand the question. Some students need visual representations of numbers and systems to understand them, and others benefit more by understanding the concepts behind each formula. I prefer to tutor in math and physics, and especially with real world application problems. I hope to help students improve their standardized test scores and their understanding of the math and sciences so that they can achieve their academic goals!
I am a rising sophomore at Harvard College and am about to declare as a Mechanical Engineering concentrator, working towards a Bachelor of Science degree. I've always enjoyed sharing my knowledge with my peers and those around me and have done so in both formal and informal settings. I've been a tutor for both Math and Spanish programs in high school and enjoyed the strides I made with students. I am willing to tutor any subject I have a background in, but am strong in mathematics, the sciences, Spanish, history, writing, and ACT prep. I enjoy teaching mathematics most due to the joy I can see in children once they master a topic and can answer even pointed questions meant to stump them, and maybe even put their knowledge to real world use. As a tutor, I like to give a strong foundation to orient my student, and then gradually grant them more freedom and independence until they can feel themselves grasp the concept, pointing out pitfalls or common errors along the way; teachers who used these methods on me always left the most lasting impressions. Outside of my studies, I really enjoy listening to music, both old favorites and new interests, reading classics, and gaming/playing basketball with my friends.
I am a graduate of Washington University in St Louis, where I received my Bachelor of Arts in History with minors in Humanities and Anthropology. Since graduation, I have worked as a tutor, teacher, and director of tutors at a charter public middle school in Boston. During this time I also received my Masters in Mild to Moderate Disabilities from Simmons College. I have worked extensively with students with a range of abilities, including students with specific learning disabilities, emotional impairments, dyslexia, and ADHD. My teaching experience has given me a deep understanding of the knowledge and habits essential to academic success and has given me the opportunity to hone a variety of strategies that ensure students at each level can achieve their academic goals. While I tutor a broad range of subjects, my favorite ones are Reading, Elementary/Middle School Math, History, and Test Prep. In my experience, tutoring is the most rewarding when a student has that "aha!" moment and achieves a new level of understanding and confidence in his/her abilities. I am a firm believer in the transformative power of education, and I see my role to be that of a facilitator and coach who is there to help the student reach his/her goals through individualized support and rigorous practice. In my free time, I enjoy reading, running, practicing my Spanish, and discovering new music. I am also an avid traveler and just got back from a 3 month trip to South America. I look forward to the opportunity to work with you!
I am proud to be a part of Varsity Tutors! I am originally from San Antonio, TX; I completed my undergraduate education at Rice University in Houston where I received a bachelor's degree in Biochemistry and Cell Biology. Currently, I am in my second year of medical school at Baylor College of Medicine.
I'm Solange - a recent graduate from Harvard where I studied Sociology & Women's Studies. I've been tutoring for eight years now, and have worked with a wide range of ages and in a wide range of subjects. Some of my specialties are college prep/test taking II worked in the admissions office on campus); social sciences; and literature/writing.
I am an aspiring applied mathematician, with particular interest in image processing and climate science. I graduated in May 2017 from Washington University in St. Louis with a bachelor's in physics and mathematics, and am beginning a PhD program in September 2017 at the University of Chicago in Computational and Applied Mathematics. I've tutored introductory physics students for three years and enjoyed it thoroughly, as a chance to help other students while revisiting fundamental concepts to enhance my own knowledge. I'm eager to continue reaching out and helping students of math and physics to succeed and, furthermore, to appreciate the beauty and power of these subjects.
I'm eager to help you in your education. I'm a recent graduate of Harvard College looking to apply to law school. My senior thesis was written on John Dewey's ideas of education, which I deeply believe has incredible power to transform individuals and society.
I am a graduate of McGill University (BA First Class Honors) and the University of Edinburgh (MSc First Class Honors with Distinction) with over eight years of tutoring experience. I am currently a curriculum developer for a company which creates relatable and culturally-literate courses for middle and high-schools, and am particularly adept at communicating and explaining concepts in a quirky, engaging, and intelligent manner. I was named Scotland International Young Thinker of the Year 2014 for exactly that sort of work. Much of my tutoring background is in test-prep and essay coaching, which I enjoy because it allows the tutor and student to think strategically together, and work as a team to achieve concrete results. I have worked with students ranging in age from 6-32, and believe that, in an educational context, a few jokes never hurt anybody. I love reading and learning, and my educational approach is centered around making the material just as engaging to students as it is to me. I think J.K. Rowlings, the writer of Harry Potter, is just as brilliant as Stephen Hawking, and in my free time, I manage my (terrible) fantasy baseball team, write songs for my comedy band, and crack jokes about terrible science-fiction movies with my friends.
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Most students struggle with three core issues: showing genuine motivation rather than sounding generic, balancing humility with confidence when discussing their achievements, and articulating how their background uniquely positions them for their chosen program. Many applicants also underestimate how much programs want to understand their specific fit—they write statements that could apply to any school rather than demonstrating why they're passionate about that particular institution's research, faculty, or culture. Additionally, students often overcomplicate their narratives or try to cover too much ground, diluting the impact of their core story.
Authentic voice comes from specificity and vulnerability—using concrete examples from your life rather than abstract statements about your ambitions. Instead of "I am passionate about research," show it through a moment when you stayed late in the lab or the exact question that sparked your curiosity. The key is finding the tone that matches your personality while maintaining academic professionalism; this often means writing naturally first, then refining for clarity rather than starting with a formal template. Tutors experienced in personal statements help you identify where your voice is strongest and guide you to amplify those moments while trimming generic language.
Most effective statements follow a "origin story to future vision" arc: opening with a specific moment or question that sparked your interest, developing how your experiences deepened that passion, and closing with a clear vision of what you'll contribute to the field and why this program is essential to that path. Some students use a challenge-response-growth structure, showing how obstacles shaped their perspective. The strongest statements avoid chronological resume-style narratives and instead use selective moments to reveal character, intellectual curiosity, and fit. A tutor can help you identify which moments best illustrate your unique trajectory and how to weave them into a cohesive narrative that admissions committees remember.
Genuine fit goes beyond naming the program or location—it requires showing you've researched specific faculty members, research groups, or unique resources and can articulate why they align with your goals. Reference particular labs, courses, or initiatives you'd engage with, and explain how they advance your specific research questions or career trajectory. Avoid flattery; instead, show how the program's strengths match your intellectual needs. Many students make the mistake of writing one generic statement and submitting it everywhere; strong personal statements are customized to demonstrate that you've done your homework and see yourself as part of that community's future.
The key is framing accomplishments through what you learned and how they shaped your thinking, rather than listing accolades. Instead of "I won a prestigious award," try "When I received that award, I realized my work had impact beyond my own lab—it pushed me to think bigger about how research scales." This approach demonstrates achievement while showing self-awareness and growth mindset. Admissions committees want to see confidence rooted in genuine curiosity and intellectual humility—the understanding that graduate school is where you'll deepen expertise, not where you've already mastered your field. A tutor can help you identify where you're underselling yourself versus where you're overreaching.
Look for tutors with direct experience in graduate admissions—ideally those who've worked in admissions offices, served on graduate committees, or have advanced degrees themselves and understand discipline-specific expectations. Strong tutors know how different fields (STEM, humanities, business, medicine) value different narrative elements and can help you write for your specific audience. They should excel at asking probing questions to uncover your authentic story rather than imposing a template, and they need strong editorial skills to help you cut unnecessary words and sharpen your language. Experience working with students across multiple application cycles is valuable, as is familiarity with how personal statements fit into the broader application context.
Most statements benefit from 3-5 rounds of revision with different focuses: the first draft is about getting your story out without worrying about polish; the second focuses on structure and narrative arc; the third refines voice and removes clichés; the fourth addresses program-specific customization and ensuring every sentence serves your larger narrative; and the final round is copyediting. Early revisions are about big-picture questions—"Does this actually show why I'm pursuing this field?" Later revisions address precision—"Is this the strongest verb? Does this phrase add new information?" A tutor accelerates this process by identifying which revision layer you need to focus on and providing targeted feedback rather than general comments.
Admissions committees tire of statements that begin with "Since childhood, I've been fascinated by..." or "I've always wanted to make a difference," as well as overused metaphors like "standing on the shoulders of giants" or "pushing the boundaries of knowledge." Many students also fall into the trap of writing about why the field is important rather than why it matters to them specifically, or they use jargon to sound impressive without demonstrating genuine understanding. Another frequent misstep is the "I overcame adversity" narrative that doesn't connect meaningfully to their academic or research goals. Experienced tutors help you identify where your statement sounds generic and replace those moments with specific details and authentic voice that only you could write.
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