Title: Architectures of Ambition: A Blueprint for Academic Success by Oluwakorede
Oluwakorede's entry into Varsity Tutor's April 2024 scholarship contest
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Title: Architectures of Ambition: A Blueprint for Academic Success by Oluwakorede - April 2024 Scholarship Essay
Dear Varsity Tutors College Scholarship Contest Committee,
My name is Oluwakorede Kuponiyi, a rising junior in the School of Architecture at the New Jersey Institute of Technology. I am humbly writing this essay to articulate what motivates me to pursue my academic goals and how I maintain focus to realize them. As I reflect on my journey and vision, I am deeply moved by the resilience, investment, and drive of my father. His consistent efforts to ensure I reach my academic dreams have been my guiding light, a beacon that keeps my path illuminated even when the journey gets rugged.
Taking a comprehensive view of my academic pursuits is akin to reading a structural plan of a complex building. This plan is the blueprint of my dreams, charting my course from a basic understanding of architectural principles to my aspiration of becoming an accomplished architect. At the heart of this blue-print is the tireless work of my father, who continually impresses upon me the importance of discipline, resilience, and keeping my eyes focused on the prize. His tirefulness in prioritizing my education reminds me daily of the goal that I must reach.
Acquiring a 2.8 GPA in both high school and college hasn't come without hurdles. There have been times when maintaining this level of academic performance seemed like an uphill battle - akin to ascending a steep, rocky architectural structure. However, analogously to the firm foundation which lies underneath every towering edifice, my dad’s unwavering conviction in my potential has remained my significant bedrock of support. This, coupled with my inherent passion for architectural design, has been my driving force.
My dad's commitment to my future has gifted me with an embodiment of perseverance and ambition that motivates me to excel academically. Seeing his dedication, his self-sacrifice - all for my dreams - fuels a sense of responsibility within me. It creates a rousing symphony of resilience that propels me towards my academic goals, irrespective of the challenges I encounter on the way.
Pursuing a major in Architecture at the New Jersey Institute of Technology, I harness this motivation and utilize it to stay focused. I carry with me the understanding that architecture, much like my education, demands meticulous dedication and rigorous application. I remind myself that like developing an architectural masterpiece, significant accomplishments require patience, persistence, and vision. More importantly, maintaining concentration on my academic performance is a tribute to my father, who consistently works so hard for my success.
In conclusion, my academic journey is a spectrum of both highs and lows, obstacles and accomplishments. Still, the constancy of two elements remain unwavering: the motivation drawn from my father's dedication to my dreams and the focus required to attain those dreams. By keeping my eyes firmly set on the ultimate goal - becoming an accomplished architect, I have no doubt that I will construct a promising future, not just for myself but also as a way to reciprocate my father's investment in my success.
Thank you for considering my application.
Sincerely,
Oluwakorede Kuponiyi