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Example Question #3641 : Sat Writing
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
Although the students had studied hard they found that the answers to many of the questions eluded them. No error
questions eluded
No error
answers to many
hard they found
Although the students
hard they found
An introductory phrase must always be separated from the rest of the sentence by comma. Introductory phrases are phrases that provide information about, or modify, the subject of the main clause, but are not essential to the grammatical structure of the sentence. In this sentence, the phrase "Although the students had studied hard" acts as the introductory phrase, so it must be followed by a comma. This makes the correct answer "hard they found."
Example Question #3642 : Sat Writing
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
Niko couldn't understand why, even though he had been so good his mother still wouldn't let him go over to Jimmy's house. No error
Niko couldn't
why, even though
wouldn't let him
so good his mother
No error
so good his mother
The phrase "even though he had been so good" is a non-essential interrupting phrase. The sentence would still be correct even if it were deleted. Therefore, there must be commas before and after the phrase, which means that the the correct answer is "so good his mother."
Example Question #3643 : Sat Writing
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
Because Corrine the former vice president of the club, had attended every single meeting, Amanda vowed that she would do the same. No error
Corrine the former
club, had attended
she would do
meeting, Amanda
No error
Corrine the former
In the sentence above, the phrase "the former vice president" is an appositive phrase that renames Corrine. Because commas are required before and after an appositive phrase, "the former vice president" must have commas before it and after it. This means that the correct answer is "Corrine the former."
Example Question #3644 : Sat Writing
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
As luck would have it there were no open appointments on Kendra's only day off from work. No error
appointments on Kendra's
No error
As luck
day off
have it there
have it there
In this sentence, the phrase "As luck would have it" is an introductory phrase. Because an introductory phrase must be followed by a comma, the sentence should read "As luck would have it, there were no open appointments on Kendra's only day off from work." This makes the correct selection "have it there."
Example Question #3645 : Sat Writing
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
Just as the students had feared their teacher presented them with a pop-quiz to make sure they had completed last night's reading assignment. No error
last night's reading
No error
Just as the students
feared their teacher
pop-quiz to
feared their teacher
An introductory phrase must always be followed by a comma. In this sentence, the phrase "Just as the students had feared" acts as an introductory phrase, so it must be followed by a comma.
Example Question #3646 : Sat Writing
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
If you're going to be staying here long I must insist that you treat our employees with at least a modicum of respect. No error
that you
long I must
No error
with at least a modicum of respect.
If you're going
long I must
In the example sentence "If you're going to be staying here long" is clearly a dependent clause (big clue being the "if") because this clause provides context and precedes the main clause, it is called an introductory clause. The only correct way to punctuate an introductory clause is to add a comma after the last word in the phrase, which in this case is "long."
Example Question #3647 : Sat Writing
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
If Paula, one of the smartest young women I have ever met can't comprehend what Professor Pyg is talking about, I strongly suspect that no one can. No error
No error
met can't
Professor Pyg is talking about,
no one can.
If Paula,
met can't
Interrupting phrases are subordinate and add information to a sentence, but are not necessary to the sentence being grammatically complete. Such phrases must be separated from the rest of the sentence by commas at the beginning and end of the phrase. In the example sentence "one of the smartest young women I have ever met" acts as an interrupting phrase, so the portion of the sentence above that needs to be corrected is, "met can't."
Example Question #3648 : Sat Writing
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
Mithridates commonly known as the Poison King, was a phenomenal enemy of ancient Rome. No error
Mithridates commonly
ancient Rome.
phenomenal enemy
No error
Poison King,
Mithridates commonly
In the example sentence "commonly known as the Poison King" is a grammatically unnecessary (but contextually useful) phrase that must be separated from the clause it interrupts with commas. The sentence above is missing a comma between "Mithridates" and "commonly." The rest of the sentence is grammatically correct and complete.
Example Question #3649 : Sat Writing
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
Pontus, a relatively rich kingdom on the Black Sea is famous for its extraordinary plant life. No error
Black Sea is
No error
kingdom on
its extraordinary
Pontus, a relatively
Black Sea is
The fundamental grammatical structure of the example sentence reads, "Pontus is famous for its extraordinary plant life." "Pontus" is the subject, while "is" functions as the verb. So, we know that the words excluded from this fundamental subject-verb-object structure must be an interrupting phrase, and as such must be separated with commas at the beginning and end of the phrase. The example sentence is missing a comma after "Sea."
Example Question #3650 : Sat Writing
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
Every morning when Kent comes to school he has an apple for his teacher. No error
No error
school he
Every morning
comes
his teacher.
school he
Introductory phrases are subordinate and add information to a sentence. These phrases are not necessary to the sentence being grammatically complete, and thus must be separated from the rest of the sentence by commas. In this sentence "Every morning when Kent comes to school" acts an introductory clause, and must be punctuated with a coma after "school." The portion of the sentence above that needs to be corrected is, "school he"
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