SAT Writing : Improving Sentences

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Example Questions

Example Question #362 : Correcting Punctuation Errors

The issues to be discussed in the debate will be economics foreign policy and health care

Possible Answers:

economics, foreign policy, and health care.

economics; foreign policy; and health care.

economics foreign policy, and health care.

economics foreign policy and health care.

economics foreign policy health care.

Correct answer:

economics, foreign policy, and health care.

Explanation:

A list like the one in the underlined portion of the sentence must always be appropriately separated out, especially when the elements of the list are two words, like "foreign policy." The only answer choice that clearly delineates the three component parts of the list is "economics, foreign policy, and health care."

Example Question #2 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Commas In Lists

The athletes musicians, and actors all came together to help the charity raise money at the event.

Possible Answers:

The athletes, musicians, actors

The athlete's musician's and actor's

The athletes musicians, and actors

The athletes musicians and actors

The athletes, musicians, and actors

Correct answer:

The athletes, musicians, and actors

Explanation:

Any list like the one used as the subject of the sentence needs to have its elements separated by commas to distinguish the separate parts. The only answer choice that appropriately does this is "The athletes, musicians, and actors," with every other answer choice being grammatically incorrect.

Example Question #1 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Commas

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Rowing lacrosse and tennis are all sports that are growing in popularity.

Possible Answers:

Rowing lacrosse and tennis is

Rowing, lacrosse, and tennis are

Rowing lacrosse, and tennis are

Rowing lacrosse and tennis are

Rowing lacrosse, and tennis is

Correct answer:

Rowing, lacrosse, and tennis are

Explanation:

A list like the one in the underlined portion of the sentence always needs to be separated by commas to clearly distinguish between the different elements in the list. The only answer choice that correctly does this is "Rowing, lacrosse, and tennis are," making it the correct answer choice.

Example Question #11 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Commas

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Dogs cats and small animals have always been popular pets for small children.

Possible Answers:

Dogs, cats, and small animals have always been

Dogs cats, and small animals have always been

Dogs, cats, and small animals, have always been

Dogs cats and small animals have always been

Dogs cats, small animals have always been

Correct answer:

Dogs, cats, and small animals have always been

Explanation:

The three-part list that is the subject of this sentence does not employ appropriate demarcation between its separate parts. Lists like the one in the sentence need to be separated out by commas to show their individual parts. "Dogs, cats, and small animals have always been" is the only answer choice that appropriately deploys commas in the list.

Example Question #12 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Commas

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

The school offered programs in engineering computer science and architecture.

Possible Answers:

The school offered programs in engineering computer science, and architecture.

The school offered programs, in engineering computer science and architecture.

The school offered programs in engineering, computer science, and architecture.

The school offered programs in engineering computer science and architecture.

The school offered programs in: engineering computer science and architecture.

Correct answer:

The school offered programs in engineering, computer science, and architecture.

Explanation:

The list of items that ends the sentence as its object is not properly separated out by commas. Any list needs to have its elements clearly delineated, and of all the answer choices, the only one that accomplishes this is "The school offered programs in engineering, computer science, and architecture."

Example Question #3781 : Sat Writing

The dog the cat and the rabbit all got along quite well with each other.

Possible Answers:

The dog, the cat, and the rabbit

The dog, the cat, the rabbit

The dog cat and rabbit

Dog cat and rabbit

The dog the cat and the rabbit

Correct answer:

The dog, the cat, and the rabbit

Explanation:

The underlined portion lists three different things, "the dog," "the cat," and "the rabbit." Each of these needs to be appropriately separated to clarify they are all different. "The dog, the cat, and the rabbit," is the correct answer choice.

Example Question #1611 : Improving Sentences

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices repeats the underlined portion as it is written.

The field rations were evenly distributed between the sailors marines and soldiers.

Possible Answers:

sailors marines, and soldiers.

sailors, marines, soldiers.

sailors marines and soldiers.

sailors marines soldiers.

sailors, marines, and soldiers.

Correct answer:

sailors, marines, and soldiers.

Explanation:

The underlined words make up a list. Such lists need to have each element separated for clarity and understanding. "Sailors, marines, and soldiers" is the best choice among the answers.

Example Question #1612 : Improving Sentences

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Many nineteenth century texts on military strategy focused extensively on supplies troops and ammunition.

Possible Answers:

on supplies troops and ammunition.

on: supplies troops and ammunition.

on supplies, troops, and, ammunition.

on supplies troops, and ammunition.

on supplies, troops, and ammunition.

Correct answer:

on supplies, troops, and ammunition.

Explanation:

The underlined phrase contains a series, or a list of grouped items. All series in a sentence must be divided by each other for linguistic and logical clarity. The best way to do this is with commas, making "on supplies, troops, and ammunition," the correct answer.

Example Question #15 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Commas

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

The key to having a succesful road trip is bringing plenty of medicine snacks and water.

Possible Answers:

plenty of medicine snacks and water.

plenty of medicine snacks, and water.

plenty, of medicine snacks and water.

plenty of medicine, snacks, and water.

plenty medicine snacks and water.

Correct answer:

plenty of medicine, snacks, and water.

Explanation:

A list like the one presented in the underlined portion of the sentence needs to be separated somehow, usually by commas. The only choice that appropriately separates the three items is "plenty of medicine, snacks, and water," which is the correct answer.

Example Question #16 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Commas

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Much of the time, only the most discerning animal trainer cannot tell the difference between thoroughbreds Arabians and saddlebred horses.

Possible Answers:

between thoroughbreds Arabians and saddlebred horses.

between, thoroughbreds, Arabians and saddlebred horses.

between thoroughbreds Arabians, and saddlebred horses.

between thoroughbreds Arabians and saddlebred, horses.

between thoroughbreds, Arabians, and saddlebred horses.

Correct answer:

between thoroughbreds, Arabians, and saddlebred horses.

Explanation:

The three items in the list of the underlined portion of the sentence, "thoroughbreds" and "Arabians" and "saddlebred horses," are lumped together in one large pile. All such lists need to be separated by commas, to show the separate items clearly. The only answer choice that correctly does this is "between thoroughbreds, Arabians, and saddlebred horses."

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