SAT Writing : Improving Sentences

Study concepts, example questions & explanations for SAT Writing

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Example Questions

Example Question #101 : Correcting Punctuation Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Whenever I find myself faced with a particularly arduous task: I always ask my friends for help. 

Possible Answers:

Whenever I find myself faced by a particularly arduous task:

Whenever I find myself faced with a particularly arduous task,

Whenever I find myself faced with a particularly arduous task:

Whenever I find myself faced with a particularly arduous task;

Whenever, I find myself faced with a particularly arduous task:

Correct answer:

Whenever I find myself faced with a particularly arduous task,

Explanation:

Colons serve primarily two purposes. The first is to precede a list of three or more things in a sentence, and the second is to join two clauses of a sentence where the first clause is independent, and the second clause explains, defines, or clarifies the main clause. For the second purpose, however, you may only use a colon where a period might otherwise be used. To correct the sentence above change the colon into a comma.

Example Question #1441 : Sat Writing

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

I need you to: sit down, be quiet, and follow all further instructions with precision.

Possible Answers:

I need you to, sit down,

I need you to sit down,

I need you to: sit down;

I need you to sit down

I need you to: sit down,

Correct answer:

I need you to sit down,

Explanation:

Colons serve primarily two purposes. The first is to precede a list of three or more things in a sentence, and the second is to join two clauses of a sentence. For the first purpose, however, you should avoid using a colon after a verb or a preposition. The best way to correct the sentence above is to delete the colon. 

Example Question #103 : Correcting Punctuation Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

I abhor the way totalitarian states treat their citizens their behavior towards thier own people is simply inexcuseable.

Possible Answers:

I abhor the way totalitarian states treat their citizens their behavior towards thier own people is simply inexcuseable.

I abhor the way totalitarian states treat: there citizens their behavior towards thier own people is simply inexcuseable.

I abhor the way totalitarian states treat: they're citizens their behavior towards thier own people is simply inexcuseable.

I abhor the way totalitarian states treat their citizens they're behavior towards thier own people is simply inexcuseable.

I abhor the way totalitarian states treat their citizens: their behavior towards thier own people is simply inexcuseable.

Correct answer:

I abhor the way totalitarian states treat their citizens: their behavior towards thier own people is simply inexcuseable.

Explanation:

Colons serve primarily two purposes. The first is to precede a list of three or more things in a sentence, and the second is to join two clauses of a sentence. For the second purpose, however, you may only use a colon where a period might otherwise be used. The best way to correct the underlined portion above is: "I abhor the way totalitarian states treat their citizens: their behavior towards thier own people is simply inexcuseable."

Example Question #1442 : Sat Writing

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

There are three ways to go forward here we can get it together, we can go our separate ways, or we can stop altogether.

Possible Answers:

here our

here we

here, we

here: we

here; we

Correct answer:

here: we

Explanation:

Colons serve primarily two purposes. The first is to precede a list of three or more things in a sentence, and the second is to join two clauses of a sentence. The colon is missing prior to the list above, the best way to correct the underlined portion is: "here: we"

Example Question #1443 : Sat Writing

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

When you don't you regard your family more favorably: you hurt them, they are clearly a great group of people. 

Possible Answers:

When don't you regard your family more favorably,

When, don't you regard your family more favorably:

When you don't you regard your family more favorably:

When don't you regard your family better,

When don't you regard your family better:

Correct answer:

When don't you regard your family more favorably,

Explanation:

Colons serve primarily two purposes. The first is to precede a list of three or more things in a sentence, and the second is to join two clauses of a sentence. For the second purpose, however, you may only use a colon where a period might otherwise be used (after an independent clause).

Example Question #1444 : Sat Writing

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

You need to: work harder in order to succeed, or you never will. 

Possible Answers:

You need to: work harder in order to succeed,

You need to work harder in order to succeed,

You need to, work harder in order to succeed,

You need to work harder in order to succeed:

You need: to work harder in order to succeed,

Correct answer:

You need to work harder in order to succeed,

Explanation:

Colons serve primarily two purposes. The first is to precede a list of three or more things in a sentence, and the second is to join two clauses of a sentence. For the second purpose, however, you may only use a colon where a period might otherwise be used. The best way to correct the sentence above is to delete the colon. 

Example Question #1445 : Sat Writing

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

I need you to do: the dishes, your laundry, and the rest of the chores.

Possible Answers:

I need you to do the dishes

I need you to do the dishes,

I need you to do: the dishes

I need you to: do the dishes,

I need you to "do": the dishes

Correct answer:

I need you to do the dishes,

Explanation:

Colons serve primarily two purposes. The first is to precede a list of three or more things in a sentence, and the second is to join two clauses of a sentence. For the first purpose, however, you should avoid using a colon after a verb or a preposition. The best way to correct the sentence above is to delete the colon. 

Example Question #36 : Correcting Colon Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

The truth of the matter is, as always, rather simple you must do what I ask, or you will fail. 

Possible Answers:

The truth of the matter is, as always, rather simple:

The truth of the matter is, as always, rather simple

The truth of the matter is as always rather simple,

The truth of the matter is as always rather simple:

The truth of the matter is as always, rather simple:

Correct answer:

The truth of the matter is, as always, rather simple:

Explanation:

Colons serve primarily two purposes. The first is to precede a list of three or more things in a sentence, and the second is to join two clauses of a sentence. For the second purpose, however, you may only use a colon where a period might otherwise be used, after an independent clause, and for this use of the colon the second clause should explain or define the main clause. In this case, the dependent clause directly explains the main clause, so the best way to correct the underlined portion above is, "The truth of the matter is, as always, rather simple"

Example Question #1446 : Sat Writing

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

I ate four terrible things yesterday; a raw squash, a cold turkey sandwich, and a hot popsicle.

Possible Answers:

I ate four terrible things yesterday:

I ate four terrible things yesterday.

I ate four terrible things yesterday...

I ate four terrible things yesterday;

I ate four terrible things yesterday

Correct answer:

I ate four terrible things yesterday:

Explanation:

The example sentence includes a list of three items. Often lists of three or more items are preceded by a colon (unless the last word before the list is a verb), but they should not be preceded by a semicolon. Semicolons are used to combine independent clauses into one sentence. Since the second clause is nowhere near to a grammatically complete independent clause, we know that a semicolon will not be the appropriate form of punctuation. The correct version of the example sentence reads, "I ate four terrible things yesterday: a raw squash, a cold turkey sandwich, and a hot popsicle."

Example Question #1447 : Sat Writing

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

My three favorite card games are: Solitaire, War, and Blackjack.

Possible Answers:

are-

are

are:

are,

Correct answer:

are

Explanation:

You are only permitted to use a colon to separate clauses (one of the clauses may be a list) when the colon is placed where a period could also logically be placed. In the sentence above, the colon is incorrect because you can't put a period after "My three favorite games are." The best solution is to eliminate the colon altogether. Note that because the items in this list are proper nouns it is correct to capitalize them.

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