SAT Writing : Improving Paragraphs

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Example Question #191 : Rewriting A Single Word

1 Biographies exist in various specialized forms. 2 A hagiography is a biography that discusses a saint or other church leader. 3 Many hagiographies focus on a saint’s miracles, martyrdom, and divine connection. 4 They were especially common in the Middle Ages, often appearing as part of a larger collection or calendar of saints.

5 Historians today value these accounts not because the hagiographer is often too worshipful to be critical but also they include good insight into local history. 6 For example, the bestselling Golden Legend was a 13th century compensation of saint stories from more than a hundred different sources. 7 England, Ireland, and the Byzantine Empire were all fertile ground for medieval hagiographies and as such much is known about carnelian life there. 8 These hagiographies also changed focus over the years; shifting from heroic tales of holy warriors and sanctimonious moralistic lessons designed to instruct churchgoers. 9 And gradually fading in popularity.

In Sentence 5, what word could not replace “worshipful?”

Possible Answers:

captious

reverent

adulatory

adoring

venerating

Correct answer:

captious

Explanation:

We’re looking for the word that isn’t a synonym for “worshipful.” “Captious” means critical or inclined to find fault, while all the other words mean “worshipful.” 

Example Question #191 : Rewriting A Single Word

1 Punk rock developed in the mid-1970s. 2 It was a musical movement that arose out of antiauthoritarian garage bands.3 It was characterized by fast-paced songs, sedimentary lyrics, and a raw loud sound. 4 And often its lyrics were also political. 5 Some of the most famous punk rock bands came from England and the United States and including the Clash, the Sex Pistols, and the Ramones.

6 Punk bands tending to convince a liberal, anti-establishment, sensibility,and they were proponents of individualism, freedom, and nonconformity.7 (Later in the 1990s “riot grrrl” bands like Bikini Kill and Sleater-Kinney used their punk music to draw attention on feminist concerns.)8 Now you can find, punk bands in cities all around the world.9 By the 1980s, the public was beginning to accept punk music, slowly becoming mainstream. 

In Sentence 6, what word should replace “convince?”

Possible Answers:

convince (no change)

evade

evince

collude

elude

Correct answer:

evince

Explanation:

Musicians can’t “convince” or persuade a sensibility, but they can certainly “evince” or reveal the presence of one.

Example Question #193 : Rewriting A Single Word

1 If you’ve watched any environmental news reports in the last few years, it’s likely you’ve stumbled among the idea of fracking. 2 The word is short for “hydraulic fracturing” and involves injecting liquid into rock to create fractures and fractals, there allowing natural gas to be extracted more querulously.3 Proponents say the method facilitates oil drilling and allows countries, like the United States, to cut back on their foreign oil dependence. 4 Amateurs say that fracking, causes significant and sometimes irresponsible environmental damage.

5 Fracking can require sonorous quantities of water, and leach dangerous carcinogenic chemicals into the groundwater. 6 Some people have even inquired minor earthquakes to fracking: as the process thought to spurn tremors.7 Perhaps most worrisome, fracking allows governments to continue depending on fossil fuel rather than exploring renewable energy. 8 These sources could include wind turbines, solar panels, even hot springs and waterwheels.

In Sentence 5, what word should replace “sonorous?”

Possible Answers:

sonorous (no change)

cacophonous

strident

gargantuan

susurrate

Correct answer:

gargantuan

Explanation:

Except for “gargantuan,” which means enormous, all of these adjectives describe sound and therefore cannot describe a quantity.

Example Question #192 : Rewriting A Single Word

1 If you’ve watched any environmental news reports in the last few years, it’s likely you’ve stumbled among the idea of fracking. 2 The word is short for “hydraulic fracturing” and involves injecting liquid into rock to create fractures and fractals, there allowing natural gas to be extracted more querulously.3 Proponents say the method facilitates oil drilling and allows countries, like the United States, to cut back on their foreign oil dependence. 4 Amateurs say that fracking, causes significant and sometimes irresponsible environmental damage.

5 Fracking can require sonorous quantities of water, and leach dangerous carcinogenic chemicals into the groundwater. 6 Some people have even inquired minor earthquakes to fracking: as the process thought to spurn tremors.7 Perhaps most worrisome, fracking allows governments to continue depending on fossil fuel rather than exploring renewable energy. 8 These sources could include wind turbines, solar panels, even hot springs and waterwheels.

In Sentence 6, what word should replace “spurn?”

Possible Answers:

spar

spurn (no change)

spear

spur

spoor

Correct answer:

spur

Explanation:

The fracking process wouldn’t “spurn,” or reject, tremors; it would “spur,” or spark, them.

Example Question #801 : Improving Paragraphs

1 Lemon juice with cayenne pepper, cabbage soup, cookies, grapefruit. 2 What do these have in common?3 They are all key ingredients in recent fad diets; since these diets sound promising, few lead to any permanent weight loss.4 Some of the worst can even lead to health problems, such as, vitamin deficiencies or anemia. 5 Instead of being concerned with lasting weight loss, they are promoting radical changes that only last a short time. 6 Cutting out too many calories at once from your diet can lead to dizziness, heart palpitations, and even a slower metabolism.

7 Some thinkers suggest that fad diets are really a way for us to impose order on our chaotic world, hundreds of food choices, conflicting advice from various health experts. 8 So why diet at all?

In Sentence 5, how should “are promoting” be changed?

Possible Answers:

will have promoted

will promote

promote

promoted

would be promoting

Correct answer:

promote

Explanation:

The present tense “promote” matches the tense of the other verbs in the passage and is more concise than the present progressive “are promoting.”

Example Question #194 : Rewriting A Single Word

1 What is to be done about the problem of shoplifting. 2 Small security devices hidden in the tags of expensive clothing, clearly posted signs vocalizing the penalties for shoplifting, and “spider tags” or wired alarm clips all measures that store owners can take. 3 However many can be removed turgidly with magnets, scissors, or other means.

4 Other solutions including using attentive employees, clear and wide aisles, security guards, and security cameras. 5 With self-checkouts, an additional degree of honesty comes into play. 6 Though, it might be more fruition to examine the motives for shoplifting, as more lugubrious social policies could prevent people from needing to shoplift in the first place.

In Sentence 3, what word should replace “turgidly”?

Possible Answers:

surreptitiously

equivocally

dogmatically

turgidly (no change)

patently

Correct answer:

surreptitiously

Explanation:

“Turgid,” which means swollen, doesn’t make sense as a way to remove security tags; however, “surreptitiously,” or secretly and sneakily, does. All of the answer options are adverbs, and thus grammatically COULD be used in this sentence. The key to this question is simply in context and usage; only "surreptitiously" makes contextual sense for this sentence.

Example Question #195 : Rewriting A Single Word

1 Lemon juice with cayenne pepper, cabbage soup, cookies, grapefruit. 2 What do these have in common?3 They are all key ingredients in recent fad diets; since these diets sound promising, few lead to any permanent weight loss.4 Some of the worst can even lead to health problems, such as, vitamin deficiencies or anemia. 5 Instead of being concerned with lasting weight loss, they are promoting radical changes that only last a short time. 6 Cutting out too many calories at once from your diet can lead to dizziness, heart palpitations, and even a slower metabolism.

7 Some thinkers suggest that fad diets are really a way for us to impose order on our chaotic world, hundreds of food choices, conflicting advice from various health experts. 8 So why diet at all?

In Sentence 3, what word should replace “since?”

Possible Answers:

because

additionally

although

moreover

resultantly

Correct answer:

although

Explanation:

The sentence is discussing a contrasting relationship, so we need a transitional word that signals that contrast, not causation.

Example Question #201 : Rewriting A Single Word

1 What is to be done about the problem of shoplifting. 2 Small security devices hidden in the tags of expensive clothing, clearly posted signs vocalizing the penalties for shoplifting, and “spider tags” or wired alarm clips all measures that store owners can take. 3 However many can be removed turgidly with magnets, scissors, or other means.

4 Other solutions including using attentive employees, clear and wide aisles, security guards, and security cameras. 5 With self-checkouts, an additional degree of honesty comes into play. 6 Though, it might be more fruition to examine the motives for shoplifting, as more lugubrious social policies could prevent people from needing to shoplift in the first place.

In Sentence 6, what word should replace “lugubrious?”

Possible Answers:

benevolent

lugubrious (no change)

malicious

superstitious

chary

Correct answer:

benevolent

Explanation:

“Lugubrious” (glum), “malicious” (spiteful), “chary” (cautious/hesitant), and “superstitious” (believing in legends and luck) do not make sense as types of social polices that could eradicate shoplifting. “Benevolent,” or well meaning and charitable, is an excellent word for the sentence.

Example Question #202 : Rewriting A Single Word

You may not know Gerard Manley Hopkins was a famous English poet. Hopkins led a complicated life as a Jesuit priest, converting to Roman Catholicism in 1866. Born in 1844 the poet was excellent at sketching from an early age and attended the University of Oxford from 1863 to 1867, where he met poets Christina Rossetti, Robert Bridges, and others. According to his personal diaries, Hopkins frequently struggled to repress homoerotic urges, adopting an ascetic lifestyle, many believing that this contributed to his writing. His work itself is characterized by an escarpment of conventional poetic meter, the use of sprung rhythm, frequent vivid imagery, and a careful and creative use of language. Sprung rhythm is a particular poetic rhythm that is intended to mimic natural speech and is distinguished by its irregular patterns although it is distinct from free verse.

Hopkins died when he was only in his forties, but his contributions to poetry – particularly his experimentation and his use of sprung rhythm – continue to obscure today.

What word should replace the underlined word "escarpment"?

Possible Answers:

espadrille

escapade

eschewal

NO CHANGE

esplanade

Correct answer:

eschewal

Explanation:

“Eschewal,” or avoidance, of traditional poetic conventions is something that could reasonably characterize someone’s writing. None of the other words make sense in the context. An “escarpment” is a steep slope or cliff, an “espadrille” is a type of shoe, an “esplanade” is a walking path, and an “escapade” is an adventure.

Example Question #1 : Correcting Single Word Grammatical Errors

Although a work of fiction, Mariama Bâ's 1979 novel, So Long a Letter is also, in a sense, a manifesto of the female African experience, one that has all too often been consigned to a footnote in history books. Within the overarching colonial narrative of African marginalization, black women have been marginalized farther. In their respective accounts, Jomo Kenyatta and Franz Fanon put their own words in the mouths of female subjects: in more objective histories, women are hardly spoken of at all. By taking a comparative approach, however, the history of African women in the colonial and post-colonial eras can be patched together into something comprehensible. With Bâ’s voice as a guide, a more complex narrative comes out of the darkness of historical silence and bias to revealing significant degrees of female agency and expression.

Replace the bolded and underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Possible Answers:

revealing

reveal

having been revealed

start revealing

have revealed

Correct answer:

reveal

Explanation:

The phrase “to revealing” is grammatically incorrect because it lacks a helping verb. “Having been revealed” and “have revealed” both complicate the tense of the sentence, while “start revealing” changes the meaning of the sentence. The most simple and correct response is “reveal.”

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