SAT Writing : Identifying Pronoun Errors

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Example Questions

Example Question #791 : Sat Writing

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed in order to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

In order for you to become a successful tennis player, one must devote many hours to practice; working on the intricacies can seem arduous, but it is of utmost importance. No error

Possible Answers:

player,

practice;

No error

one

arduous, 

Correct answer:

one

Explanation:

The uses of "you" and "one" here are inconsistent. They refer to the same subject, so using each one once is inconsistent. Either one would be a fine choice, as long as it is the same one - the choice should be consistent throughout the sentence.

Example Question #301 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

One often finds that one can’t study when people are talking near you, especially if those people are giggling or yelling. No error

Possible Answers:

especially if

can't

you

No error

are

Correct answer:

you

Explanation:

You can't switch between "one" and "you." The sentence begins with "one" and has to keep using it for the remainder of the statement.

Example Question #1 : Identifying Pronoun Errors: Case

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

The awkward tension between Sam and I was, as it turns outcompletely one-sidedNo error

Possible Answers:

No error

awkward

as it turns out

completely one-sided

Sam and I

Correct answer:

Sam and I

Explanation:

The pronoun "I" is only used as the subject of a sentence. "Me" is used as the object of a verb or (as in this case) a preposition. The corrected sentence reads, "The awkward tension between me and Sam was, as it turns out, completely one-sided."

Example Question #1 : Identifying Pronoun Errors: Case

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

I say that between you and Iwe can definitely eat that entire pizza. No error

Possible Answers:

we

I say

No error

between

you and I

Correct answer:

you and I

Explanation:

The phrase "between you and I" is incorrect because "you" and "I" are acting as the objects of the prepositional phrase "between you and I," where the objective forms of these pronouns ("you" and "me") should be used instead.

Example Question #302 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

I never heard the official announcement, but I received the news when Mark sent an email to Sharon and I. No error

Possible Answers:

never

when

Sharon and I

received

No error

Correct answer:

Sharon and I

Explanation:

This sentence has a problem with pronoun case in the prepositional phrase "to Sharon and I." "I" is the subjective case of the first-person pronoun, but as an object of the preposition "to," the objective case of the first-person pronoun, "me," should be used. The corrected sentence reads, "I never heard the official announcement, but I received the news when Mark sent an email to Sharon and me."

Example Question #801 : Sat Writing

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

“I don’t understand why I can’t come to the movies with you,” cried Tina’s younger brother, whom had a strict 8:00 bedtime. No error

Possible Answers:

whom

cried

No error

don't understand

to the movies

Correct answer:

whom

Explanation:

The word "whom" is incorrect because it refers to the brother, who is the subject of the sentence (it is the younger brother who does the crying here). Therefore, the correct word choice would be "who."

Example Question #3 : Identifying Pronoun Errors: Case

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

My boyfriend and me went to the animal shelter, and together, we adopted a dog. No error

Possible Answers:

went

me

No error

adopted

together

Correct answer:

me

Explanation:

This sentence contains an error in its use of the pronoun "me."  The proper subjects of the sentence are "my boyfriend" and "I."  "Me" is an objective pronoun, not a subjective pronoun (e.g., "My boyfriend gave the puppy to me." is correct, but "Me went to the animal shelter" is not correct.)  

Example Question #303 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

It was a frightening experience when our camping leader left my friend and I to set up camp by ourselves while the wolves were howling. No error

Possible Answers:

when 

by ourselves

I

were

No error

Correct answer:

I

Explanation:

When someone is left behind, that person is the object of the action. "Me" is the first person pronoun that is used as an object, not "I." Therefore, the word "I" should be changed to the word "me" in the sentence.

Example Question #1 : Identifying Pronoun Errors: Case

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

I had never visited the Mayan ruins until four months ago when my intrepid friends and me decided to take a road trip there. No error

Possible Answers:

No error

had never visited

intrepid friends and me

intrepid

Mayan

Correct answer:

intrepid friends and me

Explanation:

In the clause "my intrepid friends and me decided to take a road trip there," "my intrepid friends and me" are doing the action of deciding. Therefore, the objective-case pronoun "me" should be changed to the subjective-case pronoun "I."

Example Question #304 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Startled by the sudden darkness that fell upon the town, Margaret, Thomas, and me stumbled and clutched at each other. No error

Possible Answers:

clutched at

Startled by

No error

me

that fell upon

Correct answer:

me

Explanation:

This sentence has a problem with pronoun case. Since “me” is a subject, it should be “I.” The corrected sentence reads, "Startled by the sudden darkness that fell upon the earth, Margaret, Thomas, and I stumbled and clutched at each other."

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