SAT Writing : Identifying Sentence Errors

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Example Questions

Example Question #118 : Identifying Punctuation Errors: Commas

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

If Paula, one of the smartest young women I have ever met can't comprehend what Professor Pyg is talking about, I strongly suspect that no one can. No error

Possible Answers:

Professor Pyg is talking about,

No error

If Paula,

no one can.

met can't 

Correct answer:

met can't 

Explanation:

Interrupting phrases are subordinate and add information to a sentence, but are not necessary to the sentence being grammatically complete. Such phrases must be separated from the rest of the sentence by commas at the beginning and end of the phrase. In the example sentence "one of the smartest young women I have ever met" acts as an interrupting phrase, so the portion of the sentence above that needs to be corrected is, "met can't."

Example Question #119 : Identifying Punctuation Errors: Commas

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Mithridates commonly known as the Poison King, was a phenomenal enemy of ancient Rome. No error

Possible Answers:

phenomenal enemy

Poison King,

ancient Rome.

Mithridates commonly

No error

Correct answer:

Mithridates commonly

Explanation:

In the example sentence "commonly known as the Poison King" is a grammatically unnecessary (but contextually useful) phrase that must be separated from the clause it interrupts with commas. The sentence above is missing a comma between "Mithridates" and "commonly." The rest of the sentence is grammatically correct and complete.

Example Question #120 : Identifying Punctuation Errors: Commas

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Pontus, a relatively rich kingdom on the Black Sea is famous for its extraordinary plant life. No error

Possible Answers:

its extraordinary

No error

Black Sea is

Pontus, a relatively 

kingdom on

Correct answer:

Black Sea is

Explanation:

The fundamental grammatical structure of the example sentence reads, "Pontus is famous for its extraordinary plant life." "Pontus" is the subject, while "is" functions as the verb. So, we know that the words excluded from this fundamental subject-verb-object structure must be an interrupting phrase, and as such must be separated with commas at the beginning and end of the phrase. The example sentence is missing a comma after "Sea."

Example Question #271 : Identifying Punctuation Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Every morning when Kent comes to school he has an apple for his teacher. No error

Possible Answers:

No error

comes

his teacher.

Every morning

school he

Correct answer:

school he

Explanation:

Introductory phrases are subordinate and add information to a sentence. These phrases are not necessary to the sentence being grammatically complete, and thus must be separated from the rest of the sentence by commas. In this sentence "Every morning when Kent comes to school" acts an introductory clause, and must be punctuated with a coma after "school." The portion of the sentence above that needs to be corrected is, "school he"

Example Question #41 : Identifying Punctuation Errors: Commas For Introductory Or Interrupting Phrases

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

If you don't stop smoking I'm going to be forced to remove you from the train platform. No error

Possible Answers:

smoking I'm

If you

No error

be forced

from the train

Correct answer:

smoking I'm

Explanation:

In the example sentence, "if you don't stop smoking" is clearly a dependent clause. Since this dependent clause comes before the main clause, it is acting here as an introductory phrase and must be punctuated with a comma.

Example Question #42 : Identifying Punctuation Errors: Commas For Introductory Or Interrupting Phrases

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

I think that pork, one of my favorite kinds of meat is incredibly versatile. No error

Possible Answers:

I think

No error

versatile.

pork, one

meat is

Correct answer:

meat is

Explanation:

Interrupting phrases must be separated from the rest of the sentence with commas. Here, the grammatical subject is "pork," this subject is then described in a grammatically irrelevant, but contextually useful, interrupting phrase. Because it is outside of the basic structure of the sentence, the interrupting phrase "one of my favorite kinds of meat" should have one comma at the beginning and one comma at the end.

Example Question #43 : Identifying Punctuation Errors: Commas For Introductory Or Interrupting Phrases

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

My favorite actor of the previous generation, Derek Jacobi is profoundly talented. No error

Possible Answers:

generation, Derek Jacobi is

talented.

My favorite 

No error

of the

Correct answer:

generation, Derek Jacobi is

Explanation:

In this sentence "Derek Jacobi" acts as an interrupting appositive phrase, and thus must be enclosed with commas. Here, the subject is first identified as "my favorite actor of the previous generation," and is then renamed with a proper noun. The actors name is important information contextually, but is not fundamental to grammatical structure of the sentence, since the grammatical subject remains "my favorite actor of the previous generation."

Example Question #44 : Identifying Punctuation Errors: Commas For Introductory Or Interrupting Phrases

Shortly the windows opened and a strong gust blew all the papers on the desk.

Possible Answers:

Shortly, the window's opened

Shortly, the windows opening

Shortly the windows opens

Shortly the windows opening

Shortly, the windows opened

Correct answer:

Shortly, the windows opened

Explanation:

The underlined portion of the sentence contains just one error. The word "Shortly" is used as an introductory phrase, describing when the action of the sentence took place. Any introductory phrase needs to be set off by a comma. "Shortly, the windows opened" is the best choice to improve the sentence.

Example Question #121 : Identifying Punctuation Errors: Commas

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Although he initially refused to go to the cinema, James finally saw the movie, that his friends had recommendedNo error

Possible Answers:

movie, that

had recommended

refused to go to the cinema

Although he

No error

Correct answer:

movie, that

Explanation:

Commas, gramatically speaking, should never be used before or after the word "that." The correct sentence would have: "James finally saw the movie that his friends . . ."

"Had recommended" could be changed to "recommended", for the sake of simplicity, but the comma error is more flagrant.

Example Question #122 : Identifying Punctuation Errors: Commas

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Joey will reluctantly eat broccoli and spinach but his favorite green vegetables are peas and green beans. No error

Possible Answers:

green beans

spinach but

No error

are

reluctantly

Correct answer:

spinach but

Explanation:

The sentence consists of two independent clauses ("Joey will reluctantly eat broccoli and spinach" and "his favorite green vegetables are peas and green beans") joined by a coordinating conjunction, "but." (Other coordinating conjunctions can include "and," "or," "nor," "yet," "so," and "for.") When two independent clauses are joined by a coordinating conjunction, a comma is required after the first clause immediately before the conjunction. The corrected sentence would read, "Joey will reluctantly eat broccoli and spinach, but his favorite green vegetables are peas and green beans."

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