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Example Question #31 : Identifying Pronoun Errors: Inconsistent Usage
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed in order to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
In order for you to become a successful tennis player, one must devote many hours to practice; working on the intricacies can seem arduous, but it is of utmost importance. No error
player,
arduous,
practice;
one
No error
one
The uses of "you" and "one" here are inconsistent. They refer to the same subject, so using each one once is inconsistent. Either one would be a fine choice, as long as it is the same one - the choice should be consistent throughout the sentence.
Example Question #32 : Identifying Pronoun Errors: Inconsistent Usage
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
One often finds that one can’t study when people are talking near you, especially if those people are giggling or yelling. No error
you
are
especially if
No error
can't
you
You can't switch between "one" and "you." The sentence begins with "one" and has to keep using it for the remainder of the statement.