SAT Writing : Identifying Other Adjective and Adverb Errors

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Example Question #11 : Identifying Adjective And Adverb Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Randy grabbed the ball with his hand, moving intense and with a focused look in his steely blue eyes. No error

Possible Answers:

grabbed 

focused

No error

intense

steely blue

Correct answer:

intense

Explanation:

The underlined word "intense" modifies the verb, "grabbed." Therefore, "intense" should be an adverb, not an adjective. "Intense" is an adjective; the appropriate adverb would be "intensely."

Example Question #11 : Identifying Adjective And Adverb Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

The narrator described how as a child, he loved to let his body drift down the river, floating serene and happily in the sparkling water. No error

Possible Answers:

happily

serene

described

as a child 

No error

Correct answer:

serene

Explanation:

The word "serene" is modifying the verb "floating." Therefore, "serenely," an adverb, should be used; "serene" is an adjective, and is improperly used in this sentence. 

Example Question #11 : Identifying Other Adjective And Adverb Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

It is often hard to keep up with my friend because she is in much better shape than I am and also walks very quickNo error

Possible Answers:

No error

she is

keep up

quick

than 

Correct answer:

quick

Explanation:

Adverbs modify verbs, while adjectives modify nouns. Given that “walks” is a verb, it should be modified by an adverb. “Quick,” however is an adjective, so the adverb "quickly" should be used instead.

Example Question #12 : Identifying Adjective And Adverb Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

As the online presence of businesses has expanded at a rapidly pace, so too have the outlets for cyber shopping. No error

Possible Answers:

too

for

online

No error

rapidly

Correct answer:

rapidly

Explanation:

The underlined word, "rapidly," is modifying "pace," which is a noun. Therefore, the underlined word should be the adjective, "rapid," as opposed to the adverb, "rapidly."

Example Question #11 : Identifying Adjective And Adverb Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

The artist painted slowly and deliberate, trying to capture every detail that she could with her paintbrush. No error

Possible Answers:

No error

every 

with

painted

deliberate

Correct answer:

deliberate

Explanation:

In this sentence, the adjective “deliberate” modifies the verb “painted.” Given that only adverbs can modify verbs, "deliberate" should be changed to “deliberately,” which is an adverb.

Example Question #13 : Identifying Adjective And Adverb Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

The horse ran beautifully and fierce towards the ranch, anxious to see its new foals, which were only a few weeks old. No error

Possible Answers:

which 

its

No error

fierce

ran

Correct answer:

fierce

Explanation:

 In this sentence, the adjective “fierce” modifies the verb “ran.” Given that adverbs can only modify verbs, the proper word would instead be “fiercely,” which is an adverb. 

Example Question #17 : Identifying Other Adjective And Adverb Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

The bird flew cautious over the fence, which the owners had laced with barbed wire. No error

 

Possible Answers:

cautious

had 

which 

barbed

No error

Correct answer:

cautious

Explanation:

In this sentence, the adjective “cautious” modifies the verb “flew.” Given that only adverbs can modify verbs, the proper word to use would instead be “cautiously,” which is an adverb. 

Example Question #931 : Sat Writing

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

The nurse adjusted the bandages softly and gentle, as she knew the wound beneath them was very tender. No error

Possible Answers:

gentle

adjusted

beneath

knew 

No error

Correct answer:

gentle

Explanation:

In this sentence, the adjective “gentle” modifies the verb “adjusted.” Given that adverbs can only modify verbs, the proper word would instead be “gently,” which is an adverb.

Example Question #21 : Identifying Adjective And Adverb Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Many people find the appearance of the potoo, a small brown bird, to be extremely amusing due to the large of its round, yellow eyes. No error

Possible Answers:

round, yellow eyes

to be extremely amusing

No error

the potoo, a small brown bird,

large

Correct answer:

large

Explanation:

You can spot this sentence's error by realizing that the adjective "large" needs to be a noun because it is preceded by the definite article "the," which refers to nouns, not adjectives. Changing "large" to "largeness" would correct the sentence's error.

Example Question #22 : Identifying Adjective And Adverb Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

"I'm sorry that I'm running late for dinner," I said to my mother on the phone, "but I'll be home real soon." No error

Possible Answers:

that

No error

real

said

running

Correct answer:

real

Explanation:

The word "real" here is meant to modify the adjective "soon," which means that an adverb is needed. The adverb form of the word "real" is "really," so the sentence should say, "I'm sorry that I'm running late for dinner," I said to my mother on the phone, "but I'll be home really soon." People might use the word "real" as an adverb during everyday conversation, but that slang form is grammatically incorrect.

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