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Example Question #31 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Other Punctuation
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
The government is mired in gridlock, there appears to be no end in sight.
The government is mired in gridlock with there appears to be no end in sight.
The government is mired in gridlock; there appears to be no end in sight.
The government is mired in gridlock, or there appears to be no end in sight.
The government is mired in gridlock, there appears to be no end in sight.
The government is mired in gridlock, nor there appears to be no end in sight.
The government is mired in gridlock; there appears to be no end in sight.
Semicolons may be used to separate two related, independent clauses. Semicolons, however, must be used alone, and without any accompanying conjunction. The best way to correct the underlined portion above is: "The government is plauged by gridlock; there appears to be no end in sight."
Example Question #32 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Other Punctuation
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
All three branches of our government are held in check by separation of powers; and it is one of the most crucial portions of our system.
powers; but it is one of the most crucial portions of our system.
powers; with it is one of the most crucial portions of our system.
powers; it is one of the most crucial portions of our system.
powers; and it is one of the most crucial portions of our system.
powers, but it is one of the most crucial portions of our system.
powers; it is one of the most crucial portions of our system.
Semicolons may be used to separate two related, independent clauses. Note, however, that they must be used alone, and without any accompanying conjunction. The best way to correct the underlined portion above is:
"powers; it is one of the most crucial portions of our system."
Example Question #33 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Other Punctuation
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
There's a lot to get done today; but I am worried that I will be to lazy to achieve everything I hope to achieve.
There's a lot to get done today: but
There's a lot to get done today but
There's a lot to get done today, but
There's a lot to get done today; but
There's a lot to get done today; and
There's a lot to get done today, but
Semicolons may be used to separate two related, independent clauses; however they must be used alone, and without any accompanying conjunction. The best way to correct the underlined portion above is: "There's a lot to get done today, but"
Example Question #34 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Other Punctuation
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
We have to have a greater level of commitment to victory; otherwise we will never overcome the other team.
We have to have a greater level of commitment to victory; otherwise
We have to have a greater, level of commitment to victory otherwise
We have to have a greater level of commitment to victory, otherwise
We have to have a greater level of commitment to victory: otherwise
We have to have a greater level, of commitment to victory; otherwise
We have to have a greater level of commitment to victory, otherwise
Semicolons may be used to separate two related, independent clauses; however they must be used alone, and without any accompanying conjunction. The best way to correct the underlined portion above is: "We have to have a greater level of commitment to victory, otherwise"
Example Question #35 : Correcting Semicolon Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
It's extremely difficult to find a person that you care for a great deal it is also very important.
It's extremely difficult to find a person that you care for a great deal;
It's extremely difficult to find a person that you care for a great deal, with
It's extremely difficult to find a person that you care for a great deal,
It's extremely difficult to find a person that you care for a great deal
It's extremely difficult to find a person that you care for a great deal, under
It's extremely difficult to find a person that you care for a great deal;
Semicolons may be used to separate two related, independent clauses. In the sentence above, "it is also very important" is NOT an independent clause, and therefore should not be preceded by a semicolon in the sentence. The word "also" in the second clause is a clear clue that it is a dependent clause. The best way to correct the underlined portion above is: "It's extremely difficult to find a person that you care for a great deal;"
Example Question #31 : Correcting Punctuation Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
There will be a lot of trouble if you don't stop being rude; and I insist that you stop.
There will be a lot of trouble if you don't stop being rude;
There will be a lot of trouble if you don't stop being rude...
There will be a lot of trouble if you don't stop being rude; and
There will be a lot of trouble, if you don't stop being rude; but
There will be a lot of trouble if you don't stop being rude for
There will be a lot of trouble if you don't stop being rude;
Semicolons may be used to separate two related, independent clauses; however, they must be used alone, and without any accompanying conjunction. The best way to correct the underlined portion above is: "There will be a lot of trouble if you don't stop being rude;"
Example Question #32 : Correcting Punctuation Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
Lamb is one of my absolute favorite foods; but I know I shouldn't eat it so much.
Lamb is one of my absolute favorite foods,
Lamb is one of my absolutely favorite foods;
Lamb is one of my absolute favorite foods;
Lamb is one of my absolute favorite foods:
Lamb is one of my absolute favorite foods.
Lamb is one of my absolute favorite foods,
Semicolons may be used to separate two related, independent clauses; however they must be used alone, and without any accompanying conjunction. Coordinating conjunctions should follow commas, not semicolons when connecting two independent clauses. The best way to correct the underlined portion above is: "Lamb is one of my absolute favorite foods,"
Example Question #38 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Other Punctuation
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
There's a lot to be done today, we all need to work together in order to accomplish everything.
Theres a lot to be done today, we all need to work together in order to accomplish everything.
There's a lot too be done today, we all need to work together in order to accomplish everything.
There's a lot to be done today, we all need to work together in order to accomplish everything.
There's a lot to be done today, we all need to work together, in order to accomplish everything.
There's a lot to be done today; we all need to work together in order to accomplish everything.
There's a lot to be done today; we all need to work together in order to accomplish everything.
Semicolons may be used to separate two related, independent clauses. Semicolons can neither follow nor precede a dependent clause, and they must be used alone, and without any accompanying conjunction. The best way to correct the underlined portion above is: "There's a lot to be done today; we all need to work together in order to accomplish everything."
Grammatically speaking, a semicolon and comma followed by a coordinating conjunction fulfill the same role in a sentence, which one you choose will depend on the context, the level of connection you wish to suggest between the content of the two sentences, and finally your personal prose style.
Example Question #39 : Correcting Punctuation Errors: Other Punctuation
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
I really love summer; but I am not a big fan of humidity.
I really love summer; and I am not a big fan of humidity.
I really love summer: but I am not a big fan of humidity.
I really love summer; or I am not a big fan of humidity.
I really love summer; but I am not a big fan of humidity.
I really love summer, but I am not a big fan of humidity.
I really love summer, but I am not a big fan of humidity.
Semicolons are a mysterious, dangerous, and ultimately enchanting form of punctuation. Often misunderstood, and thus underappreciated, semicolons, if given some study and the trust that so often accompanies knowledge, can be used to enhance a writer's personal prose style, and clarify the meaning of all sorts of missives. They are primarily used to separate two related, independent clauses; however they must be used alone, and without any accompanying conjunction. The best way to correct the underlined portion above is: "I really love summer, but I am not a big fan of humidity."
Coordinating conjunctions (and, but, or, nor, for, yet, so) should never follow a semicolon.
Example Question #1381 : Sat Writing
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
The old men were worn out; because it had been a long day for them.
The old men were worn out: because it had been a long day for them.
The old men were worn out; and it had been a long day for them.
The old men were worn out; for it had been a long day for them.
The old men were worn out; because it had been a long day for them.
The old men were worn out; it had been a long day for them.
The old men were worn out; it had been a long day for them.
Semicolons may be used to separate two related, independent clauses; however they must be used alone, and without any accompanying conjunction. The best way to correct the underlined portion above is: "The old men were worn out; it had been a long day for them."
Semicolons can be replaced (grammatically speaking) without error by either a comma and an appropriate coordinating conjunction, or simply with a period, splitting the two clauses into separate sentences. Whichever you choose will depend on the meaning and level of connection between the clauses, and your personal style.
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