SAT Writing : Correcting Correlative Conjunction Errors

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Example Questions

Example Question #23 : Correcting Conjunction Errors

Choose the answer below which best replaces the underlined section of the following sentence. This should result in a sentence that meets all of the rules of standard written English.

Not only have you ruined your friendship with Mark, but made Paul very upset.

Possible Answers:

Not only have you ruined your friendship with Mark, but you made Paul very upset.

Not only have you ruined your friendship with Mark, but also you made Paul very upset.

Not only have you ruined your friendship with Mark, also you made Paul very upset.

Not only have you ruined your friendship with Mark, but made Paul very upset.

Not only have you ruined your friendship with Mark but also you made Paul very upset.

Correct answer:

Not only have you ruined your friendship with Mark, but also you made Paul very upset.

Explanation:

When "not only" is used in any sentence, it must be followed by it's coordinate conjunction, "but also." The best way to correctly write the sentence above is "Not only have you ruined your friendship with Mark, but also you made Paul very upset."

Example Question #24 : Correcting Conjunction Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a setence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Grammar is as easy for John as math is for Sarah; they both have their own strenghts. 

Possible Answers:

with easy for John as math is for Sarah

as easy for John under math is for Sarah

as easy for John with math is for Sarah

as easy for John as math is for Sarah

both easy for John as math is for Sarah

Correct answer:

as easy for John as math is for Sarah

Explanation:

Whenever you see the conjunction "as," and it is being used as part of a parallel structure, it must always be followed by the correlative conjunction "as." As such, the sentence is correct above as written.  

Example Question #25 : Correcting Conjunction Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a setence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Whether you fight in the tournament nor go back home, you must make a choice. 

Possible Answers:

Whether you fight in the tournament and go back home

Whether you fight in the tournament if go back home

Whether you fight in the tournament under go back home

Whether you fight in the tournament nor go back home

Whether you fight in the tournament or go back home

Correct answer:

Whether you fight in the tournament or go back home

Explanation:

Whenever you see the conjunction "whether," it must always be followed by the correlative conjunction "or."  As such, the "nor" in the sentence above should be changed to "or."

Example Question #26 : Correcting Conjunction Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Neither the boys' counselor nor the girls' was equipped to handle the catastrophe. 

Possible Answers:

Neither the boy's counselor nor the girl's

Neither the boys' counselor nor the girls' counselor

Neither the boys' counselor nor the girls'

Neither the boys' counselor or the girls'

Neither the boys's counselor nor the girls's

Correct answer:

Neither the boys' counselor nor the girls' counselor

Explanation:

Whenever you use correlative conjunctions in a sentence, the things that are being compared amidst the conjunctions should have parallel structure. The best way to correct the underlined portion of the sentence above is: "Neither the boys' counselor nor the girls' counselor."

Example Question #27 : Correcting Conjunction Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Either you will get back into the car, or you walk home by yourself.

Possible Answers:

or, walk home by yourself.

or walk home by yourself.

or will walk home by yourself.

or you walk home by yourself.

or you will walk home by yourself.

Correct answer:

or you will walk home by yourself.

Explanation:

Whenever you use correlative conjunctions in a sentence, the things that are being compared amidst the conjunctions should have parallel structure. The best way to correct the underlined portion of the sentence above is: "or you will walk home by yourself."

Example Question #28 : Correcting Conjunction Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Thor was not as popular a god as Odin, according to recent archaeological data. 

Possible Answers:

as popular a god and

as popular a god as

as popular as if

as popular a god or

and popular a god as

Correct answer:

as popular a god as

Explanation:

Whenever you see the conjunction "as," and it is being used for a direct comparison between two things and followed by another conjunction, it must always be followed by the correlative conjunction "as." As such, the sentence above is correct as it is written. 

Example Question #29 : Correcting Conjunction Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Both men or women are capable of being nasty when the situation calls for it; don't let anyone tell you otherwise. 

Possible Answers:

Both men or women are capable of being nasty when the situation calls for it, but

Both men and women are capable of being nasty when the situation calls for it;

Both men or women are capable of being nasty when the situation calls for it;

Both men or women are capable of being nasty when the situation calls for it,

Both men nor women are capable of being nasty when the situation calls for it;

Correct answer:

Both men and women are capable of being nasty when the situation calls for it;

Explanation:

Whenever you see the conjunction "both," it must always be followed by the correlative conjunction "and." As such, the "or" in the sentence above should be changed to "and." "Or" is never the correct correlative conjunction to use with "both."

Example Question #30 : Correcting Conjunction Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Either pick up your things promptly, or don't bring them into my laboratory again.

Possible Answers:

with don't bring them into my laboratory again

nor don't bring them into my laboratory again

and don't bring them into my laboratory again

or don't bring them into my laboratory again.

or don't not bring them into my laboratory again

Correct answer:

or don't bring them into my laboratory again.

Explanation:

Whenever you see the conjunction "either," it must always be followed by the correlative conjunction "or."  As such, the sentence above is correct as it is written. 

Example Question #31 : Correcting Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Whether nor not you wish to win the race, if you don't stretch you're going to injure yourself.  

Possible Answers:

Whether or not you wish to win the race,

Nor not you wish to win the race,

Either or not you wish to win the race,

Whether nor not you wish, to win the race,

Whether nor not you wish to win the race,

Correct answer:

Whether or not you wish to win the race,

Explanation:

Whenever you see the conjunction "whether," it must always be followed by the correlative conjunction "or." As such, the "nor" in the sentence above should be changed to "or." "Nor" is a correlative conjunction used with "neither." Note that when "whether" is used "or" needs to be used, even if the sentence is expressing a negative condition.

Example Question #21 : Correcting Correlative Conjunction Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

After hours of deliberation, the committee agreed to proceed with neither Plan A or Plan B. No error

Possible Answers:

committee

No error

proceed

After

or

Correct answer:

or

Explanation:

"Nor," nor "or," must follow the word "neither" in a phrase such as this.

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