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Example Question #1 : Pronouns

Jazz music originated in late 19th century New Orleans, where it gained it’s inspiration from ragtime and blues music, popular genres of that time, and region.

Possible Answers:

which gained its

NO CHANGE

where it gained its

which gained it's

Correct answer:

where it gained its

Explanation:

This question primarily tests us on reference and the use of the proper, possessive form “its.” In the sentence, it would be illogical to use the contraction “it’s,” as the sentence is not attempting to say “it gained it is inspiration.” Instead, if we use “its,” the single possessive pronoun to refer to the inspiration Jazz gained. It is also important that we begin the underlined portion with “where,” as “which” illogically refers back to New Orleans and implies that New Orleans gained its inspiration from ragtime and blues. The correct answer, “where it gained its” correctly addresses that New Orleans is the location where Jazz gained the inspiration it possesses.

Example Question #93 : New Sat Writing And Language

The New Kingdom Egyptians, who inhabited ancient Egypt from 1500-1000 B.C., was well known for its impact on the world of movemental dance and the visual arts.

Possible Answers:

were well known for their​

were well known for its

NO CHANGE​

was well known for their​

Correct answer:

were well known for their​

Explanation:

If we look to the answer choices, we can see that this question primarily tests the singular vs. plural nature of the verb was vs. were, and the possessive pronoun its vs. their. Two of our choices, “was well known for their​” and “were well known for its” are illogical given that they utilize a plural verb with a singular pronoun, or a singular verb with a plural pronoun. Since both of these terms refer back to the same subject: “Egyptians.” Since “Egyptians” is a plural subject, we need a plural verb and a plural pronoun, so the correct answer is “were well known for their.” Here, if we remove the modifying phrase “who inhabited ancient Egypt from 1500-1000 B.C.” the agreement of “Egyptians” to “were well known for their” becomes more straightforward and clear.

Example Question #2 : Pronouns

The North American bald eagle is no longer threatened with imminent extinction in the United States, primarily because prohibitions on hunting and the ban of a poisonous pesticide have led to a rebound in the eagle population.

Possible Answers:

because it has prohibited

because their prohibitions

because its prohibitions

NO CHANGE

Correct answer:

NO CHANGE

Explanation:

This example tests us on meaning and pronoun ambiguity. In the original construction, we can clearly see that two things have led to a rebound in the eagle population: prohibitions and the ban of a pesticide. However, our incorrect constructions introduce either the singular pronoun “it” or “its,” or the plural possessive pronoun “their.” This is illogical, as it is unclear whether the pronoun should refer to the bald eagle (an illogical construction) or the United States (a more logical but unclear antecedent. Additionally, “because it has prohibited” introduces a sentence construction error by forming the underlined portion as a verb phrase that does not parallel the rest of the sentence as intended. This leaves us with our original answer, “because prohibitions on.”

Example Question #3 : Pronouns

In nests across North America, the host mother tries to identify their own eggs and weed out the fakes, but the brown-headed cowbird – a brood parasite that sneaks its eggs into other birds’ nests – produces eggs that look very similar to the host’s, making that task surprisingly difficult.

Possible Answers:

the host mother try to identify their own eggs

host mothers try to identify their own eggs

host mothers try to identify its own eggs

NO CHANGE

Correct answer:

host mothers try to identify their own eggs

Explanation:

In this example, we’re being tested on the use of singular vs. plural possessive pronouns to refer back to their proper antecedents. In the original construction, “their” illogically attempts to refer back to “the host mother.” This is incorrect, as we need to match a singular possessive pronoun with a singular antecedent, or a plural possessive pronoun with a plural antecedent. Only our correct answer, “host mothers try to identify their own eggs” accomplishes this. We want to be particularly careful when both elements of an agreement or ambiguity-based question are within the underline, as the author of the question could choose to change both components of the agreement at hand, as we see in this example.

Example Question #6 : Pronouns

Threatened by the potential for overpopulation, officials of Central New Jersey have limited their population growth by putting stricter housing regulations and zoning requirements into effect.

Possible Answers:

NO CHANGE

Central New Jersey has limited their

Central New Jersey has limited its

officials of Central New Jersey has limited its

Correct answer:

Central New Jersey has limited its

Explanation:

This example tests us on pronoun ambiguity and meaning. In the original construction, the underlined portion seems to imply that officials are “threatened by the potential for overpopulation,” since the modifier at the start of the sentence must logically modify what follows. This is illogical, as officials are neither threatened by or limiting “their” population growth. “officials of Central New Jersey has limited its” makes a similar mistake, and also incorrectly attempts to agree “officials” with the singular pronoun “its.” When we begin the underlined portion of the sentence with “Central New Jersey,” rather than “officials,” we correct the modifier error previously described. However, in “Central New Jersey has limited their,” we incorrectly agree the singular noun “Central New Jersey” with the plural pronoun “their.” Our correct answer, “Central New Jersey has limited its” corrects both of these issues by presenting the location itself as threatened and creating proper agreement to that location with the singular pronoun “its.”

Example Question #96 : New Sat Writing And Language

The company manual specifically outlines rules for employees about contacting managers while they are out of the office on vacation or for personal reasons.

Possible Answers:

as they are

NO CHANGE

if they are

who are

Correct answer:

who are

Explanation:

This example tests us on pronoun ambiguity. In the original construction, and in all constructions that utilize the pronoun “they,” the pronoun is ambiguous and creates a reference error. A reference error exists when it is unclear who or what the pronoun refers back to. In this case, the pronoun “they” could refer back to the managers, or to the employees. Does the manual outline rules for employees about contacting managers while the managers are out of the office, or while the employees are? Because we are uncertain of the pronoun’s antecedent, all answers that utilize “they” can be eliminated, and we’re left with “who are.” “Who are” is logical in this case, as the relative clause opener “who” must logically refer back to the noun or noun phrase before, in this case, managers.

Example Question #1 : Agreement

There are two different ways to consider the so-called “Dark Ages.” On the one hand, you can think of the period directly after the fall of the Roman Empire, when civilization began to collapse throughout the Western Empire. On the other hand, you can consider the period that followed this initial collapse of society. It is a gross simplification too use the adjective dark to describe the civilization of either of these periods.

As regards the first period, it is quite a simplification to consider this period to be a single historical moment. It is not as though the civilization switched off like a lightbulb. At one moment light and then, at the next, dark. Instead, the decline of civilization occurred over a period of numerous decades and was, in fact, already occurring for many years before the so-called period of darkness. Thus, the decline of civilization was not a rapid collapse into barbarism, but instead, was a slow alteration of the cultural milieu of a partition of Europe. Indeed, the Eastern Roman Empire retained much of it’s cultural status during these years of decline!

More importantly, the period following the slow collapse of the Western Empire was much less “dark” than almost every popular telling states. Indeed, even during the period of decline, the seeds for cultural restoration was being sown. A key element of this cultural revival were the formation of monastic communities throughout the countryside of what we now know as Europe. Although these were not the only positive force during these centuries, the monasteries had played an important role in preserving and advancing the cause of culture through at least the thirteenth century and arguably until the Renaissance.

How should the underlined section be corrected?

Possible Answers:

Indeed, even during the period of decline the seeds, for cultural restoration was being sown.

Indeed, even during the period of decline, the seeds, for cultural restoration were being sown.

NO CHANGE

Indeed, even during the period of decline the seeds for cultural restoration was being sown.

Indeed, even during the period of decline, the seeds for cultural restoration were being sown.

Correct answer:

Indeed, even during the period of decline, the seeds for cultural restoration were being sown.

Explanation:

The issue with the sentence as written is the fact that its main verb does not match the number of the sentence's subject. The subject is "seeds." Think of a simple sentence to check the verb: "The seeds were . . ." If you were to say, "The seeds was," you would immediately be aware of the error! The intervening expression "for cultural restoration" can distract you if you are not careful. Now, no additional commas are necessary. The "for" is a preposition, not a conjunction.

Example Question #336 : New Sat

To be considered true niche constructors, however, earthworms must change the environment in such a way as to alter the evolution of another species. One of the easiest ways to measure this effect on evolution has been in the effect that the number of earthworms have on soil fertility, a measure of how hospitable an environment is to plant growth. Even the least fertile soil has around 62 worms per square meter, and as the number of worms increases so does soil fertility. As worms move through the different layers of soil, they eat, digest, and excrete massive amounts of organic matter. They leave their excretions behind in the form of nutrient-rich droppings known as casings. As these casings decompose, they release nutrients into the soil. is process not only moves nutrients from one layer of the soil to another but also converts the nutrients to forms that plants can absorb and process more easily.

Possible Answers:

it has on

NO CHANGE

 

has on

can be to

Correct answer:

has on

Explanation:

The error in the original sentence is one of subject-verb agreement.  The subject is “the number,” with “of earthworms” serving as a prepositional modifier that tells us more about the number.  So the correct phrasing should be “the effect that the number (of earthworms) has on soil fertility…” Note that this occurs often on the SAT, with the authors of these questions adding descriptions (often in the form of prepositional modifiers) that include nouns, making your job of determining which subject goes with the verb a difficult one.

"Has on" is therefore correct.  Among the other answer choices, "it has on" is incorrect because of the pronoun “it” between the subject, number of earthworms, and verb, has.  And "can be to" uses improper diction: something can have an effect on something else, but to say that “its effect can be to” is an improper sentence structure.

 

Example Question #332 : New Sat

The traditional view of archaeologists usually involves a college professor who spends much of his or her time digging and researching in ancient foreign libraries or a museum curator who works every day to preserve the artifacts the museum holds. While this view isn’t completely incorrect, it is incomplete, both in terms of the types of jobs available to archaeologists and in the types of work within those jobs. For example, college professors may spend summers at dig sites, but much of their time is also spent writing grants, teaching students, and writing about their research projects. Additionally, although there are still many people who work in archaeology as professors and museum curators, the demand for these jobs far outstrips the number of positions available, making the positions difficult to acquire.

Possible Answers:

NO CHANGE

work

worked

do work

Correct answer:

NO CHANGE

Explanation:

This problem asks you to find the proper form of the verb “work,” and showcases a handful of important lessons.  For one, note that the verb “works” follows the relative pronoun “who” - this means that this verb applies specifically to the word that “who” is modifying, which is “curator.”  So while this sentence involves many nouns, the only one that matters here is “curator.” For that reason, the noun must be singular, eliminating choices "work" and "do work", which are plural.  

"Worked" is also incorrect, as the past tense implies that this curator in question has completed this work.  Note that everything else in the sentence is ongoing: the traditional view “involves,” the professor “spends.” Therefore to suggest that this one action is completed while the others are ongoing is illogical, making this incorrect.  The correct answer is "NO CHANGE", which uses a singular, ongoing verb “works.”

 

Example Question #331 : New Sat

Even today, lions can be seen ruling the African plains, hunting almost any animal that crosses its path and intimidating all but the most intrepid hunters.

Possible Answers:

lions rule

lions are able to be seen ruling

lions can be seen ruling

the lion rules

Correct answer:

the lion rules

Explanation:

In this example, we need to seek out relevant cues from outside the underlined portion of the sentence to identify what is needed out of the underline. Here, the singular vs. plural nature of the subject, lion vs. lions, is at question. If we continue to the latter portion of the sentence, we find the pronoun “its.” Since “its” refers back to the subject and is singular in nature, the subject, “the lion,” must also be singular. This leaves us with only “the lion rules,” our correct answer, as “lions can be seen ruling,” “lions are able to be seen ruling,” and “lions rule” all utilize the plural subject, “lions.”

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