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Example Questions
Example Question #37 : Correcting Verb Voice Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
Conventions for anything imaginable are attended by millions each year.
Millions attend conventions for anything imaginable
Millions attend conventions, for anything imaginable
Conventions for anything imaginable are attended by millions
Conventions, for anything imaginable, are attended by millions
Millions attend: conventions for anything imaginable
Millions attend conventions for anything imaginable
This sentence contains an error in verb voice. The phrase "Conventions...are attended" is in the passive voice. The correct choice should always be in the active voice (i.e. the subject of the clause should be doing the action of the main verb). The correct choice is, "Millions attend conventions for anything imaginable."
Example Question #38 : Correcting Verb Voice Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
Because the technology was improved, the price fell sharply.
Because the technology was improved
Because the technology improved
The technology improved
Because, the technology improved
The technology was improved
Because the technology improved
This sentence contains an error in verb voice. The phrase "the technology was improved" is in the passive voice. The correct choice should always be in the active voice (i.e. the subject of the clause should always do the action of the main verb). This can be fixed by simply omitting the word "was." No other changes are necessary. The correct answer is, "Because the technology improved."
Example Question #39 : Correcting Verb Voice Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
Music was considered extremely important by her.
She considered music to be the most important thing in her life.
She considered music extremely important.
Music was to be considered extremely important by her.
Music was considered extremely important by her.
Music was considered to be an extremely important influence on her.
She considered music extremely important.
This sentence contains an error in verb voice. The phrase "Music was considered" is in the passive voice, which is totally unnecessary in this context. The correct answer will be in the active voice (i.e. the subject of the clause should always do the action of the main verb). The sentence needs to be reworded. The correct choice is, "She considered music extremely important." The other choices only add unnecessary words to the sentence.
Example Question #40 : Correcting Verb Voice Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
Though no one truly understood it, the joke was laughed at by many.
many were laughing at the joke because it was funny.
many laughed at the joke.
many laughed at the joke, because it was funny.
the joke was laughed at by many.
the joke were laughed at by many.
many laughed at the joke.
The phrase "the joke was laughed at" is in the passive voice. The correct choice should always be in the active voice (the subject of the clause should always do the action of the main verb). The sentence needs to be reworded. The correct choice is, "many laughed at the joke." The other choices are either still in the passive voice or are too wordy.
Example Question #711 : Sentence Correction
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
The progress of the team was viewed as insufficient.
The progress of the team was labelled as insufficient.
The progress of the team was viewed as insufficient.
They viewed the team's progress as insufficient.
The team's progress was viewed as insufficient.
The team's progress was considered insufficient.
They viewed the team's progress as insufficient.
The phrase "The progress...was viewed" is in the passive voice. The correct choice should always be in the active voice (i.e. the subject of the clause should be doing the action of the main verb). The sentence needs to be reworded. All of the choices but one, however, are in the passive voice. The correct choice is, "They viewed the team's progress as insufficient."
Example Question #712 : Sentence Correction
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
The painting was found mesmerizing by the kids.
The painting is considered amazing by
The painting, mesmerizing to
The painting was found amazing by
The painting was found mesmerizing by
The painting amazed
The painting amazed
This sentence contains an error in verb-voice. The phrase "The painting was found mesmerizing" is in the passive voice. The correct choice should always be in the active voice (i.e. the subject of the clause should always do the action of the main verb). The sentence needs to be reworded. The correct choice is "The painting amazed" as all the other options are still in the passive voice or a fragments.
Example Question #713 : Sentence Correction
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
Experience is earned with practice and time.
Earning experience
Experience earned
Experience is earned
You earns experience
You earn experience
You earn experience
This sentence contains an error in verb voice. The phrase "Experience is earned" is in the passive voice. The correct choice in this case should be in the active voice (i.e. the subject of the clause should always do the action of the main verb) because it is more concise and clear. The sentence needs to be reworded. The correct choice is, "You earn experience" as all the other choices contain fragments, passive voice, or subject-verb agreement errors.
Example Question #41 : Usage Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
As the suit was finished quickly, that it still needed alterations did not surprise Henry.
it still needed alterations, which did not surprise Henry.
it was not surprising to Henry that it still needed alterations.
because it still needed alterations, which surprised Henry.
Henry was not surprised that it still needed alterations.
that it still needed more alterations did not surprise Henry.
Henry was not surprised that it still needed alterations.
Avoid the passive voice of the original ("it still needed alterations") and choose the simplest answer which preserves the meaning of the original sentence.
Example Question #714 : Sentence Correction
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
By the time he reached the front of the line, he has realized that he left his wallet at home.
he has realized that he has left
he realized that he had left
he realizes that he had left
he had been realizing that he left
he has been realizing that he has left
he realized that he had left
Note that the past perfect tense is used to refer to an action (A) which was initiated in the past and completed by the time of another action (B) also in the past. In this case the subject (B) "realized" that he (B) "had left his wallet at home". The other answer choices use active verb tenses such as the perfect progressive inappropriately and do not convey the meaning that is intended.
Example Question #715 : Sentence Correction
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
Many individuals around the world read the magazine.
Many individuals, around the world read
Many, individuals, around the world, read
Many individuals, around the world, read
Many individuals around the world read
Many, individuals around the world read
Many individuals around the world read
This sentence contains no errors. "Around the world" is a prepositional phrase that is not separate from the rest of the sentence, so it is not necessary to offset it with commas. Additionally, commas are not used to separate an adjective from the noun it describes, so no comma should appear between "many" and "individuals." The correct choice is, "Many individuals around the world read."