GMAT Verbal : Sentence Correction
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Example Question #11 : Correcting Verb Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
The time that was had by Jenny at the circus was good.
A time that was good was had by Jenny at the circus.
The circus was there for Jenny to have a good time at.
Jenny had a good time at the circus.
Jenny at the circus had a good time.
Jenny's time at the circus was good.
Jenny had a good time at the circus.
The voice of the verb in the example sentence is passive. In general, where possible, it is best to use active voice over passive voice. Active sentences use the subject as the agent of the main verb, and are therefore usually simpler and clearer than passive sentences. The best version of this sentence reads, "Jenny had a good time at the circus."
Example Question #22 : Verb Formation Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
Mike and Jonas were asked to spar by the boxing coach, eager to see how they would perform in a simulated match.
Eager to see how they would perform in a simulated match, the boxing coach asked Mike and Jonas to spar.
Mike and Jonas, eager to see how the boxing coach would perform in a simulated match, asked them to spar.
The boxing coach, eagerly sees how Mike and Jonas would perform in a simulated match, asked them to spar.
Mike and Jonas, eager to see how they would perform in a simulated match, were asked to spar by the boxing coach.
Mike and Jonas were asked to spar by the boxing coach, eager to see how they would perform in a simulated match.
Eager to see how they would perform in a simulated match, the boxing coach asked Mike and Jonas to spar.
The initial independent clause in the sentence, "Mike and Jonas were asked to spar by the boxing coach," uses passive voice ("were asked"); it becomes clearer when we use active voice ("the boxing coach asked Mike and Jonas . . .").
Example Question #12 : Correcting Verb Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
He was reminded by his friends to bring back gifts from his trip.
He was reminded by his friends to bring back gifts from his trip.
He was reminded by his friends to bring back gifts: from his trip.
He, reminded to bring back gifts by his friends, decided to buy some gifts at the store.
His friends reminded him to bring back gifts from his trip.
He was buying gifts because his friends reminded him to get gifts.
His friends reminded him to bring back gifts from his trip.
This sentence contains an error in verb voice. It is most proper for the subject of the verb to be doing the action of the verb. In this sentence; however, the subject "he" is not doing the action "remind." He is being reminded, which means someone else is doing the action to him. The best choice is: "He was reminded by his friends to bring back gifts from his trip" because it fixes this error, is concise, and is not redundant, like the other sentences.
Example Question #693 : Sentence Correction
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
Japanese longswords, katanas, are considered the best swords in the world by many individuals.
Japanese longswords, katanas, are the best swords in the world according to the opinion of many individuals.
Many individuals might consider Japanese longswords, also known as katanas, to be the best swords in the world.
Japanese longswords, katanas, are considered the best swords in the world by many individuals.
Many individuals consider Japanese longswords, katanas, the best swords in the world.
Many individuals consider Japanese longswords, a katana, the best sword in the world.
Many individuals consider Japanese longswords, katanas, the best swords in the world.
This sentence contains an error in verb voice. The phrase "Japanese longswords...are considered..." is in the passive voice. Since there is already an interrupting appositive renaming the subject here, it is best to simply re-phrase this sentence in the active voice in order to avoid an overly wordy and complex sentence. The most clear and concise choice in this instance is, "Many individuals consider Japanese longswords, katanas, the best swords in the world." The other choices are too wordy or contain inconsistencies (e.g. longswords...a katana).
Example Question #691 : Sentence Correction
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
The company was named Tesla, in homage to the great inventor.
The company was being named Tesla, in homage to the great inventor.
They named the company Tesla, in homage to the great inventor.
The company was named Tesla, in homage to the great inventor.
They were naming the company after Tesla, in homage to the great inventor.
The company named Tesla, in homage to the great inventor, was well known.
They named the company Tesla, in homage to the great inventor.
This sentence contains an error in verb voice. The phrase "The company was named..." is in the passive voice. While it can be correct to use the passive voice in certain instances, in this case the active verb voice is a better choice (that is, the subject of the sentence should be doing the action). The correct choice is, "They named the company Tesla, in homage to the great inventor" since it is the most clear and concise choice that fixes this error. The other choices are too wordy or change the overall meaning of the sentence.
Example Question #692 : Sentence Correction
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
The patent system is designed to encourage innovation, but many people feel it is abused by various parties.
The patent system is designed to encourage innovation, but many people feel it is abused by various parties.
The government designed the patent system to encourage innovation, but many people feel it is abused by various parties.
The patent system is designed to encourage innovation; but many people feel it is abused by various parties.
The patent system is designed to encourage innovation but many people feel it is abused by various parties.
The government designed the patent system to encourage innovation but many people feel it is abused by various parties.
The government designed the patent system to encourage innovation, but many people feel it is abused by various parties.
This sentence contains an error of concision and clarity related to verb voice. Since the real issue here is the "feelings" of the people who were abused by the patent system, it is better to phrase this sentence in the active voice (the subject of the sentence must do the action). Making this sentence in the passive voice is unnecessarily verbose and confusing.
Example Question #692 : Sentence Correction
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
Many articles are edited on Wikipedia every day.
A great number of articles are edited by a great number of people every day on Wikipedia.
People edit a great amount of articles on Wikipedia every day.
Many articles are edited on Wikipedia every day.
People edit many articles on Wikipedia every day.
An enormous amount of articles are edited on Wikipedia every day.
People edit many articles on Wikipedia every day.
This sentence contains an error in verb voice. The sentence is in the passive voice (e.g. "are edited"). In the correct choice, the subject should be in the active voice, for clarity's sake: the subject of the sentence should be doing the action. The best choice is, "People edit many articles on Wikipedia every day" because it fixes this issue and is the most concise sentence. The other choices are too wordy or redundant.
Example Question #693 : Sentence Correction
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
Rock is said to have evolved from African-American styles of music, like Jazz.
Rock evolved African-American styles
Rock evolved from African-American styles
Rock has evolved from African-American styles
Rock is said to have evolved from African-American styles
Rock was created from African-American styles
Rock evolved from African-American styles
This sentence contains an error in verb voice. The passive voice is used (is said). Since "Rock" is the subject of the sentence, it should do the action of the sentence. The best choice is "Rock evolved from African-American styles" since it is the most concise choice that fixes this issue. The choice "Rock evolved African-American styles" is incorrect because it changes the entire meaning of the sentence.
Example Question #694 : Sentence Correction
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
After only one year, the song was named "The Best Song of All Time."
the song was named the best song of all time.
the song was named "The Best Song of All Time."
people named the song the best song of all time.
the song, named "The Best Song of All Time."
people named the song "The Best Song of All Time."
people named the song "The Best Song of All Time."
This sentence contains an error in verb voice: the phrase "the song was named" is in the passive voice; active voice is usually preferred. In this case, the presence of the introductory clause "after only one year" makes a more active, concise verb voice the better choice. Rephrasing to "the people named the song" fixes this issue. Note that "the best song of all time" should be in quotes and capitalized because it is treated as an exact title given to the song. The answer is, "people named the song "The Best Song of All Time." "
Example Question #695 : Sentence Correction
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
Tim was reprimanded by his parents for staying out till 12 AM.
Tim was reprimanded for staying out till 12 AM.
Tim was reprimanded by his parents till 12 AM.
His parents reprimanded for staying out till 12 AM.
Tim's parents reprimanded him for staying out till 12 AM.
Tim was reprimanded by his parents for staying out till 12 AM.
Tim's parents reprimanded him for staying out till 12 AM.
This sentence contains an error in verb voice. The phrase "Tim was reprimanded" is in the passive voice; the correct choice should always be in the active voice (That is, the subject of the clause should be doing the action). The only choice that corrects this issue is, "Tim's parents reprimanded him for staying out till 12 AM."
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