GMAT Verbal : Sentence Correction

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Example Questions

Example Question #34 : Correcting Comma Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

The mayoral candidate was extremely out of touch with his voter base, his campaign ads made him even less attractive an option to the town's residents.

Possible Answers:

The mayoral candidate was extremely out of touch with his voter base; his campaign ads made him even less attractive an option to the town's residents.

The mayoral candidate was extremely out of touch with his voter base, whose campaign ads made him even less attractive an option to the town's residents.

The mayoral candidate was extremely out of touch with his voter base, the campaign ads of which made him even less attractive an option to the town's residents.

The mayoral candidate, extremely out of touch with his voter base, his campaign ads made him even less attractive an option to the town's residents.

The mayoral candidate was extremely out of touch with his voter base, his campaign ads made him even less attractive an option to the town's residents.

Correct answer:

The mayoral candidate was extremely out of touch with his voter base; his campaign ads made him even less attractive an option to the town's residents.

Explanation:

As written, this sentence contained a comma splice. A comma cannot be used to separate two independent clauses without a conjunction. In this instance, the best option is the one containing a semicolon, which is the appropriate punctuation to use when dividing two independent clauses with different subjects such as these. 

Example Question #35 : Correcting Comma Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

The manufacturer recalled the product but most customers did not bother to get it fixed.

Possible Answers:

recalled the product, but most customers did not bother

recalled the product, but most customers did not bother,

recalled, the product but most customers did not bother

recalled, the product but most customers did not bother,

recalled the product but most customers, did not bother

Correct answer:

recalled the product, but most customers did not bother

Explanation:

In this sentence, two independent clauses are being joined by a coordinate conjunction. When this occurs, a comma must come before the coordinate conjunction. The correct answer choice is "recalled the product, but most customers did not bother."

Example Question #36 : Correcting Comma Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

The man decided to change his morning routine which he had had since childhood because he wanted to try something new.

Possible Answers:

The man decided to change, his morning routine which he had had since childhood because he wanted to try something new.

The man decided to change his morning routine which he had had since childhood, because he wanted to try something new.

The man decided to change his morning routine, which he had had since childhood because he wanted to try something new.

The man decided to change his morning routine, which he had had since childhood, because he wanted to try something new.

The man decided to change his morning routine which he had had since childhood because he wanted to try something, new.

Correct answer:

The man decided to change his morning routine, which he had had since childhood, because he wanted to try something new.

Explanation:

The phrase "which he had had since childhood" is an example of a relative clause, which gives more information about its antecedent: the man's routine. Any such phrase that occurs in the middle of a sentence must be introduced and completed with a comma. The correct answer choice is "The man decided to change his morning routine, which he had had since childhood, because he wanted to try something new."

Example Question #36 : Correcting Comma Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

On his days off, Mark likes to go to the park and he likes to feed the birds.

Possible Answers:

Mark likes to go to the park, and he likes to feed the birds.

Mark likes to go to the park and he likes to feed the birds.

Mark likes, to go to the park and he likes, to feed the birds.

Mark, likes to go to the park and he likes to feed the birds.

Mark likes to go to the park and he likes, to feed the birds.

Correct answer:

Mark likes to go to the park, and he likes to feed the birds.

Explanation:

In this sentence, two independent clauses are being joined by a coordinate conjunction. When this occurs, a comma must come before the coordinate conjunction. The correct answer choice is, "Mark likes to go to the park, and he likes to feed the birds."

Example Question #162 : Correcting Punctuation Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

The woman's new home which was on the outskirts of the city was very close to her workplace.

Possible Answers:

The woman's new home, which was on the outskirts of the city, was very close to her workplace.

The woman's new home, which was on the outskirts, of the city was very close to her workplace.

The woman's new home which was on the outskirts of the city was very close, to her workplace.

The woman's new home, which was on the outskirts of the city was very close, to her workplace.

The woman's new home, which was on the outskirts of the city was very close to her workplace.

Correct answer:

The woman's new home, which was on the outskirts of the city, was very close to her workplace.

Explanation:

The phrase "which was on the outskirts of the city" is an example of a relative clause, which gives more information about its antecedent: "home." Any such phrase that occurs in the middle of a sentence must be introduced and completed with a comma. The correct answer choice is "The woman's new home, which was on the outskirts of the city, was very close to her workplace."

Example Question #37 : Correcting Comma Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

The woman worked with most of her clients remotely so her schedule was usually very flexible.

Possible Answers:

The woman worked with most of her clients remotely so her schedule was usually very flexible.

The woman worked with, most of her clients remotely, so her schedule was usually very flexible.

The woman worked with most of her clients remotely, so her schedule was usually very flexible.

The woman worked, with most of her clients remotely so her schedule was usually very flexible.

The woman worked with most of her clients remotely so her schedule was usually very, flexible.

Correct answer:

The woman worked with most of her clients remotely, so her schedule was usually very flexible.

Explanation:

In this sentence, two independent clauses are being joined by the coordinate conjunction "so." When this occurs, a comma must come before the coordinate conjunction. The correct answer choice is "The woman worked with most of her clients remotely, so her schedule was usually very flexible."

Example Question #38 : Correcting Comma Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

In the next year, she hopes to get a promotion and she plans to take on much more responsibility at work.

Possible Answers:

she hopes to get a promotion, and she plans to take on much more responsibility at work.

she hopes to get a promotion and she plans to take on much more responsibility at work.

she hopes to get a promotion, and she plans to take on much, more responsibility at work.

she hopes to get a promotion, and she plans to take on much more responsibility, at work.

she hopes, to get a promotion and she plans, to take on much more responsibility at work.

Correct answer:

she hopes to get a promotion, and she plans to take on much more responsibility at work.

Explanation:

In this sentence, two independent clauses are being joined by the coordinate conjunction "and." When this occurs, a comma must come before the coordinate conjunction. The correct answer choice is "she hopes to get a promotion, and she plans to take on much more responsibility at work."

Example Question #261 : Sentence Correction

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

The company's upcoming announcement which might decide the fate of thousands of workers' jobs put everyone on edge.

Possible Answers:

The company's upcoming announcement, which might decide the fate of thousands of workers' jobs put everyone on edge.

The company's upcoming, announcement which might decide the fate of thousands of workers' jobs, put everyone on edge.

The company's upcoming announcement, which might decide the fate of thousands of workers' jobs, put everyone on edge.

The company's upcoming announcement which might decide the fate of thousands of workers' jobs put everyone, on edge.

The company's upcoming announcement which might decide the fate of thousands of workers' jobs, put everyone on edge.

Correct answer:

The company's upcoming announcement, which might decide the fate of thousands of workers' jobs, put everyone on edge.

Explanation:

The phrase "which might decide the fate of thousands of workers' jobs" is an example of a relative clause, which gives more information about its antecedent: announcement. Any such phrase that occurs in the middle of a sentence must be introduced and completed with a comma. The correct answer choice is "The company's upcoming announcement, which might decide the fate of thousands of workers' jobs, put everyone on edge."

Example Question #41 : Correcting Comma Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

The new CEO who was a very controversial choice was hired in order to fix the company's image, but many people doubted whether or not he would be able to do so.

Possible Answers:

The new CEO who was a very controversial choice, was hired in order to fix

The new, CEO, who was a very controversial choice was hired in order to fix

The new CEO who was a very controversial choice was hired, in order to fix

The new CEO, who was a very controversial choice was hired in order to fix

The new CEO, who was a very controversial choice, was hired in order to fix

Correct answer:

The new CEO, who was a very controversial choice, was hired in order to fix

Explanation:

The phrase "who was a very controversial choice" is an example of a relative clause, which gives more information about its antecedent: the CEO. Any such phrase that occurs in the middle of a sentence must be introduced and completed with a comma. The correct answer choice is "The new CEO, who was a very controversial choice, was hired in order to fix."

Example Question #42 : Correcting Comma Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

As he sat on his rug, he was trying to solve the problem for his boss promised a bonus to the first person that could do it.

Possible Answers:

he was trying to solve the problem for his boss promised a bonus to the first person that could do it.

he was trying to solve the problem, for his boss promised a bonus to the first person that could do it.

he was trying to solve the problem for his boss promised, a bonus to the first person that could do it.

he was trying to solve, the problem for his boss promised a bonus to the first person that could do it.

he was trying to solve the problem for his boss promised a bonus, to the first person that could do it.

Correct answer:

he was trying to solve the problem, for his boss promised a bonus to the first person that could do it.

Explanation:

In this sentence, two independent clauses are being joined by the coordinate conjunction "for." When this occurs, a comma must come before the coordinate conjunction. The correct answer choice is "he was trying to solve the problem, for his boss promised a bonus to the first person that could do it."

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