GMAT Verbal : Correcting Punctuation Errors

Study concepts, example questions & explanations for GMAT Verbal

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Example Questions

Example Question #437 : Sentence Correction

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Josh couldn't wait for spring break to begin, he and his girlfriend had bought tickets to Costa Rica several months in advance.  

Possible Answers:

Josh couldn't wait for spring break to begin, he and his girlfriend had bought tickets to Costa Rica several months in advance.  

Josh couldn't wait for spring break to begin... he and his girlfriend had bought tickets to Costa Rica several months in advance.  

Josh couldn't wait for spring break to begin? he and his girlfriend had bought tickets to Costa Rica several months in advance.  

Josh couldn't wait for spring break to begin: he and his girlfriend had bought tickets to Costa Rica several months in advance.  

Josh couldn't wait for spring break to begin; he and his girlfriend had bought tickets to Costa Rica several months in advance.  

Correct answer:

Josh couldn't wait for spring break to begin; he and his girlfriend had bought tickets to Costa Rica several months in advance.  

Explanation:

The sample sentence uses a comma where a semicolon would be more appropriate. The semicolon properly separates two independent clauses in the sentence. 

Example Question #2 : Correcting Other Punctuation Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Since we never figured out it's original name, we decided to give our new rescue dog a brand new name. 

Possible Answers:

Since we never figured out its original name,

Since we never figured out it's original name,

Since we never figured out it's original name;

Since we never figured out its original name -

Since we never figured out its original name?

Correct answer:

Since we never figured out its original name,

Explanation:

The original sentence uses the incorrect contraction "it's" instead of the correct possessive form of "it," "its." We can replace "it's" with "its" and leave the comma as-is.

Example Question #3 : Correcting Other Punctuation Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Daisy spent the weekend deciding which college major she wanted to choose, botany or dance. 

Possible Answers:

Daisy spent the weekend deciding which college major she wanted to choose? botany or dance. 

Daisy spent the weekend deciding which college major she wanted to choose. botany or dance. 

Daisy spent the weekend deciding which college major she wanted to choose, botany or dance. 

Daisy spent the weekend deciding which college major she wanted to choose: botany or dance. 

Daisy spent the weekend deciding which college major she wanted to choose... botany or dance. 

Correct answer:

Daisy spent the weekend deciding which college major she wanted to choose: botany or dance. 

Explanation:

The colon is the correct punctuation mark to use in this instance, as it sets Daisy's two options apart from the first clause of the sentence. 

Example Question #4 : Correcting Other Punctuation Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Julie went to the store to pick up a few things eggs fruit and vegetables. 

Possible Answers:

Julie went to the store, to pick up a few things: eggs, fruit and vegetables. 

Julie, went to the store to pick up a few things eggs: fruit, and vegetables. 

Julie, went to the store, to pick up a few things: eggs fruit and vegetables. 

Julie went to the store to pick up a few things: eggs, fruit, and vegetables. 

Julie went to the store to pick: up a few things eggs, fruit, and vegetables. 

Correct answer:

Julie went to the store to pick up a few things: eggs, fruit, and vegetables. 

Explanation:

This sentence has a subordinate clause that is modifying a word in the main clause "eggs, fruit, and vegetables." This clause needs to be separated from the main clause with a colon, since it is not being joined with a conjunction, relative pronoun, or otherwise. Colons are used to indicate that one clause modifies another in some way. Here, the clause "eggs, fruit, and vegetables" modifies the previous clause by explaining what Julie went to the store to get. Furthermore, since "eggs, fruit, and vegetables" is a list, a comma needs to separate each item in the list. The best answer choice is "Julie went to the store to pick up a few things: eggs, fruit, and vegetables." 

Example Question #8 : Correcting Other Punctuation Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

The manager was considering instituting a new incentive program however the past incentive programs had not worked out so well.

Possible Answers:

The manager was considering instituting a new incentive; program however the past incentive programs

The manager was considering instituting a new incentive program; however, the past incentive programs

The manager was considering instituting a new incentive program, however, the past incentive programs

The manager was considering instituting a new incentive program however, the past incentive programs

The manager was considering instituting a new incentive program, however; the past incentive programs

Correct answer:

The manager was considering instituting a new incentive program; however, the past incentive programs

Explanation:

This sentence joins two independent clauses without the use of a coordinate conjunction. A semicolon must separate independent clauses that are joined in this way. Furthermore, the word "however" is the start of the new clause, so the semicolon needs to occur before this word. "However" is an example of a conjunctive adverb; when they join sentences, a semicolon must occur before the word and a comma must appear afterwards. The correct answer choice is "The manager was considering instituting a new incentive program; however, the past incentive programs."

Example Question #4 : Correcting Other Punctuation Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

"How was the party"? Mike asked.

Possible Answers:

"How was the party?,"

"How was the party"?

"How was the party"

How was the party

"How was the party?"

Correct answer:

"How was the party?"

Explanation:

This sentence contains a punctuation error. Ending punctuation should always be on the inside of quotation marks. When using ending punctuation in quotes, a comma is not used. The correct answer is, "How was the party?" "

Example Question #11 : Correcting Other Punctuation Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

"Could you give me direction to this address?" asked Amir "I think I am lost."

Possible Answers:

"Could you give me direction to this address?" asked Amir "I think I am lost."

"Could you give me direction to this address?," asked Amir "I think I am lost."

"Could you give me direction to this address?" asked Amir. "I think I am lost."

"Could you give me direction to this address?" asked Amir. "I think I am lost."

"Could you give me direction to this address?," asked Amir, "I think I am lost."

Correct answer:

"Could you give me direction to this address?" asked Amir. "I think I am lost."

Explanation:

This sentence omits a period where one is needed. The correct answer is, " "Could you give me direction to this address?" asked Amir. "I think I am lost." Everything else is correct. Commas should never come after ending punctuation in a quote and "asked Amir" is the end of a sentence, so a period is appropriate, instead of a comma. 

Example Question #12 : Correcting Other Punctuation Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

The Lottery, a short story by Shirley Jackson, disturbed many people.

Possible Answers:

"The Lottery," a short story by Shirley Jackson

The Lottery, a short story by Shirley Jackson

The Lottery, a short story by Shirley Jackson, 

The Lottery, a short story by Shirley Jackson, 

"The Lottery," a short story by Shirley Jackson,

Correct answer:

"The Lottery," a short story by Shirley Jackson,

Explanation:

This sentence contains a misuse of italics. Italics/underlining should not be used when referring to a story. The titles of stories should be surrounded by quotation marks. Italics are for complete, longer works like novels and plays. All of the other punctuation is correct. The correct answer is, " "The Lottery," a short story by Shirley Jackson,"

"The Lottery" was first published in 1948.

Example Question #13 : Correcting Other Punctuation Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

August asked, "What time are we meeting for the concert"?

Possible Answers:

asked: "What time are we meeting for the concert?"

asked, "What time are we meeting for the concert?"

asked "What time are we meeting for the concert"?

asked, "What time are we meeting for the concert"?

asked, "what time are we meeting for the concert?"

Correct answer:

asked, "What time are we meeting for the concert?"

Explanation:

This sentence contains an error in the placement of the question mark. Ending punctuation should always go on the inside of quotation marks. The correct choice is, "asked, "What time are we meeting for the concert?" "

Example Question #14 : Correcting Other Punctuation Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

"Japser wants to know if you will be at the event?" inquired Eva.

Possible Answers:

"Japser wants to know if you will be at the event"

"Japser wants to know if you will be at the event"?

"Japser wants to know if you will be at the event?"

"Japser wants to know if you will be at the event."

"Japser wants to know if you will be at the event,"

Correct answer:

"Japser wants to know if you will be at the event,"

Explanation:

The use of a question mark is inappropriate in this sentence for two reasons: first, the message in the quotation marks is not a direct question, but an indirect question. Question marks should only be used after direct questions, so it would be appropriate if the message was, "Will you be attending the event?" The second issue is that the quotation does not end this sentence, so even though it functions as an independent clause, you would not use any sort of ending punctuation. When a quotation ends/begins in the middle of a sentence, a comma should be used to separate it from the rest of the sentence. The correct choice is, " "Japser wants to know if you will be at the event," "

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