SAT Writing : Identifying Semicolon Errors

Study concepts, example questions & explanations for SAT Writing

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Example Questions

Example Question #11 : Identifying Punctuation Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

The carousel, originally introduced to Europe during the Crusades, was derived from a jousting game; and later became a staple at fairs and amusement parksNo error

Possible Answers:

No error

carousel, originally

fairs and amusement parks

Crusades,

game;

Correct answer:

game;

Explanation:

A semicolon is used to connect two independent clauses. In this case, the phrase after the semicolon is not an independent clause but rather a compound predicate of the subject "The carousel." No punctuation is needed here.

Example Question #61 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

The ballerina's exceptional twirling and precise body control left the audience members in awe; her mastery, accomplished through years of intense training, was not lost on even the inexperienced spectators. No error

Possible Answers:

awe;

exceptional twirling and precise body control

mastery,

not lost on

No error

Correct answer:

No error

Explanation:

A semicolon is used to connect two independent clauses. The two clauses separated here by the semicolon are both independent, so the semicolon use is correct.

Example Question #12 : Identifying Punctuation Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Fire-breathing seems quite foolish and dangerous to an uninformed observer; but any experienced fire-breather knows how to properly minimize the potential risks. No error

Possible Answers:

properly minimize

observer; but

any experienced fire-breather knows

quite foolish and dangerous

No error

Correct answer:

observer; but

Explanation:

This is an incorrect use of a semicolon. A semicolon is used to separate two independent clauses, but the second clause starts with the conjunction "but." In this instance, either a comma should be used instead of a semicolon or the conjunction "but" should be deleted to make the semicolon appropriate.

Example Question #13 : Identifying Punctuation Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Milwaukee was chosen as the host site for the conference not because of any bias the board members held; but rather because of its central location. No error

Possible Answers:

No error

site

held; but

was chosen

its

Correct answer:

held; but

Explanation:

A semicolon is used to separate two independent clauses, but the second of the clauses here is dependent. The clause that follows the semicolon here could not stand alone as its own sentence, and thus is not an independent clause. The appropriate punctuation to use here would be a comma. 

Example Question #62 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined portion of the sentence below that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

He ran to and from the store; several times. No error

Possible Answers:

times. 

;

and

He ran

No error

Correct answer:

;

Explanation:

Semicolons are predominantly used to separate two independent clauses. In the sentence above, the semicolon is incorrect because it is not separating two such clauses. The best way to correct this sentence would be to simply remove the semicolon.

Example Question #63 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined portion of the sentence below that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

My dad likes to tell a lot of bad jokes; it's quite intolerable. No error

Possible Answers:

it's

tell

No error

;

My dad

Correct answer:

No error

Explanation:

Semicolons are predominantly used to separate two independent clauses. In the sentence above, the semicolon is used correctly. There are no other errors in the example sentence. The verb "tell" is in the correct tense; "it's" is the correct contraction.

Example Question #14 : Identifying Punctuation Errors

Select the underlined portion of the sentence below that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

I ran to the market; back again in a single afternoonNo error

Possible Answers:

;

single afternoon

in

ran

No error

Correct answer:

;

Explanation:

Semicolons are predominantly used to separate two independent clauses. In the sentence above, the semicolon is incorrect because it is not separating two such clauses. The best way to fix this sentence would be to replace the semicolon with the word "and." The correct version of this sentence would read: "I ran to the market and back again in a single afternoon."

Example Question #71 : Identifying Sentence Errors

Select the underlined portion of the sentence below that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

I really love cooking; and baking in the afternoon. No error

Possible Answers:

No error

really

afternoon.

baking

;

Correct answer:

;

Explanation:

Semicolons are predominantly used to separate two independent clauses. In the sentence above, the semicolon is incorrect because it is not separating two such clauses. Semicolons should never be placed in the middle of a clause.

Example Question #568 : Sat Writing

Select the underlined portion of the sentence that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

The milk wasn't past its listed expiration date; but we threw it out anyway because of a funky odor emanating from the box. No error

Possible Answers:

past

No error

its

threw

date; but

Correct answer:

date; but

Explanation:

A semicolon is used to separate two independent clauses (grammatically complete clauses that could stand on their own as sentences). The second half of this sentence, after the semicolon, is a subordinate and dependent clause (it could not be a legitimate sentence on its own), thus a semicolon is inappropriate here. A comma would be the appropriate choice. "Its" is the correct possessive. The sentence is in the correct tense.

Example Question #569 : Sat Writing

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Franklin; one of the strongest people I know, can lift extremely heavy weights. No error

Possible Answers:

know,

No error

Franklin;

strongest

extremely

Correct answer:

Franklin;

Explanation:

Semicolons are almost exclusively used to separate two indepenedent clauses, or clauses which may stand as a sentence on their own. As such, the best way to correct the sentence above is to delete the semicolon following the word "Franklin" and replace it with a comma. Note that semicolons are never used to punctuate interrupting phrases, which require a comma on either end.

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