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Example Question #11 : Identifying Colon Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
Learning to crochet is a difficult task: since there are many stitches and patterns to keep track of and the yarn often slips off the hook entirely. No error
No error
to keep track of
often slips off the hook entirely.
there
task: since
task: since
The colon that is used in this sentence is extraneous. While the part of the sentence that precedes the colon is an independent clause, the part of the sentence that follows the colon is not; it is a subordinating clause because it is introduced by "since," which is here acting as a subordinating conjunction. Colons are not used to separate independent and subordinating clauses.
Example Question #62 : Identifying Punctuation Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
Brody: needs to be kinder to his classmates, they are very disappointed in his demeanor. No error
Brody:
No error
classmates, they
disappointed
kinder
Brody:
You may use a colon before a list or an explanation, as long as the preceding clause is able to stand on its own. As such, the colon in the sentence above is incorrect and should be deleted. The colon in the example sentence comes in the middle of a clause, and thus is obviously incorrect.
Example Question #63 : Identifying Punctuation Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
It has been incredibly rainy in Chicago lately: I'm worried that there might be flooding. No error
No error
It has been incredibly
flooding.
Chicago
lately:
No error
You may use a colon before a list or an explanation, as long as the preceding clause is able to stand on its own (an independent clause, in other words). As such, the sentence above is correct as written. As a rule of thumb, you should not use a colon if you could not put a period in its place, delete everything after it, and still have a full sentence.
Example Question #64 : Identifying Punctuation Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
Nobody knows if Leon is going to make it to the show tonight: he bought a ticket but hasn't been picking up his phone all afternoon. No error
hasn't been
is going to
tonight:
No error
Nobody knows
tonight:
Punctuation is the issue here. A colon is used to introduce a list, which it does not do here. The appropriate punctuation to use here would be a semicolon, which is used to separate two independent clauses (such as these).
Example Question #65 : Identifying Punctuation Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
It’s getting late, and we still need to review the proposal if we want: the committee to understand it’s full potential. No error
it’s full potential
No error
late
want:
It’s getting
it’s full potential
In this sentence, the colon is placed after want, in the middle of a clause. Colons should come after an independent clause, never in the middle of a dependent or independent clause.
Example Question #66 : Identifying Punctuation Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
I’m wondering if: we should introduce the unit on photosynthesis, the chapter on cellular respiration, or the monocot experiment. No error
respiration,
the unit on photosynthesis
No error
if:
monocot
if:
Here, no colon is necessary. Although the sentence is presenting a list, the part preceding the list is not a complete sentence, so the colon should not be used.
Example Question #67 : Identifying Punctuation Errors
Select the underlined portion of the sentence below that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
When you behave this badly in class: it reflects poorly on the entire school. NO ERROR
reflects
NO ERROR
entire school.
When you
class:
class:
Colons may be used to separate clauses in sentences, but only where you would also be able to use a period. You cannot use a period in the place of the colon in the sentence above, so that colon is erroneous. The sentence should read, "When you behave this badly in class, it reflects poorly on the entire school."
Example Question #61 : Identifying Punctuation Errors
Select the underlined portion of the sentence below that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
To complete their final projects, all students must prepare the following; a presentation, a posterboard, and a paper. NO ERROR
a posterboard, and a paper.
following;
NO ERROR
projects,
complete
following;
Colons are used prior to lists of things in sentences, rather than semi-colons; therefore, the semi-colon in the sentence above is erroneous. The sentence should read, "To complete their final projects, all students must prepare the following: a presentation, a posterboard, and a paper."
Example Question #62 : Identifying Punctuation Errors
Select the underlined portion of the sentence below that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
I'd like to take you to: the movies or the park today. NO ERROR
to:
movies
today.
NO ERROR
I'd like
to:
Colons may be used prior to lists of things in sentences; however, this is only the case if there are three or more items in the list. As the list in the sentence above has only two items (the movies and the park), the colon above is erroneous. The sentence should read, "I'd like to take you to the movies or the park today."
Example Question #63 : Identifying Punctuation Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
Stop being to rude to: Tommy he is a very nice young man. No error
he is
No error
nice young man.
Stop being
to:
to:
Colons serve primarily two purposes. The first is to precede a list in a sentence, and the second is to join two independent clauses of a sentence, as long as the second clause explains or expands on the first clause. For the second purpose, however, you may only use a colon where a period might otherwise be used, after an independent clause, and before a second independent clause that explains, or directly expands on the first clause. The colon in the above sentence is incorrectly placed. The best way to correct the sentence above is:
"Stop being to rude to Tommy: he is a very nice young man."
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