SAT Writing : Correcting Pronoun Errors: Incorrect Usage
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Example Question #92 : Correcting Pronoun Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
The police searched for weeks for a mugger that fit the given description.
The police searched for weeks for a mugger that fit the given description.
The police searched for weeks for a mugger, one that fit the given description.
A mugger that fit the given description was searched for for weeks by the police.
The police, searching for weeks for a mugger, which fit the given description.
The police searched for weeks for a mugger who fit the given description.
The police searched for weeks for a mugger who fit the given description.
The error in the original sentence is that the word "that" cannot modify people. "Who" must be used to refer to the mugger.
Example Question #61 : Correcting Pronoun Errors: Incorrect Usage
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
The teacher had to repeat many questions to her students, which were very sleepy that day.
which
that
they
who
what
who
Because the word being chosen is referring to a group of people ("students"), you need to use "who."
Example Question #62 : Correcting Pronoun Errors: Incorrect Usage
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
The ability to distinguish faces is one that certain people lack, but itself is a skill that can be developed.
but itself is skillful
but itself are skills
but itself is a skill
but its is a skill
but it is a skill
but it is a skill
The use of "itself" in the sentence is incorrect. "Itself" is a referential pronoun, and as the word is used as the subject in a complete though, there is nothing to refer to therefore, the correct answer is "bit it is a skill."
Example Question #93 : Correcting Pronoun Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
Like the best apples at the grocery store, them at the farmer's market are bright red.
theirs
those
ones
that
them
those
Here, simply match your subject, "apples," with the correct pronoun. Because the subject is plural, the pronoun must be plural as well. We also need a demonstrative pronoun in this instance, because we are specifically indicating the best apples at the farmer's market as opposed to the best apples at the grocery store. So, the correct answer is "those."
Example Question #63 : Correcting Pronoun Errors: Incorrect Usage
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
One must not pay too much attention to Donald Trump during the debate; he will just try to ruffle your feathers.
You must not pay too much attention to Donald Trump during the debate;
He must not pay too much attention to Donald Trump during the debate;
One must not pay too much attention to Donald Trump during the debate,
One must not pay too much attention to Donald Trump during the debate;
They must not pay too much attention to Donald Trump during the debate;
You must not pay too much attention to Donald Trump during the debate;
The pronoun in the portion of the sentence above that is not underlined is "your," and to avoid any inconsistency errors, this construction should be used throughout the sentence. The best way to correct the underlined portion of the sentence above is, "You must not pay too much attention to Donald Trump during the debate;"
Example Question #101 : Correcting Pronoun Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
You should always try when playing games with friends, but one should not go so far as to cheat.
They should always try when playing games with friends,
You should always try when playing games with friends:
You guys should always try when playing games with friends,
You should always try when playing games with friends,
One should always try when playing games with friends,
One should always try when playing games with friends,
The pronoun in the portion of the sentence above that is not underlined is "one," and to avoid any inconsistency errors, this pronoun should be used throughout the sentence. The best way to correct the underlined portion of the sentence above is, "One should always try when playing games with friends,"
Example Question #102 : Correcting Pronoun Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
Robert always doted on herself, bringing her flowers and asking her out more than a dozen times over two weeks.
to her,
on herself
on her,
in herself,
on she,
on her,
The reflexive pronoun "herself" is incorrect in this sentence because there is no previous reference to a third-person female pronoun. Reflexive pronouns ("herself," "myself," "yourself," etc.) are generally used when the subject of the sentence is the same as its object. Here, Robert is the subject and the person he dotes on is the object. "Herself" should be altered to the third-person objective pronoun "her," and since one dotes on someone rather than to them, "on her," is the correct answer.
Example Question #63 : Correcting Pronoun Errors: Incorrect Usage
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
When you are done with your work, please show it to myself.
me.
myself.
itself.
we.
I.
me.
The sentence presented uses a reflexive pronoun, "myself," that does not refer back to anything previously mentioned. The proper form would be the standard pronoun "me," which is the correct answer.
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