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Example Question #71 : Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
The new players were much more athletic, and excelled at running, jumping, and their ability to kick.
and excelled at running, jumping, and kicking.
and excelled at running, jumping, and their ability to kick.
and excelling at running, jumping, and their ability to kick.
and excelled at running, jumping, and an ability to kick.
and excelled in running, jumping, and their ability to kick.
and excelled at running, jumping, and kicking.
The list that finishes this sentence inappropriately groups together unlike items. It features two gerunds, "running" and "jumping," and the noun phrase "their ability to kick." Any such list needs to feature similar items that feature the same construction. The only answer choice that features a correct parallel structure is "and excelled at running, jumping, and kicking."
Example Question #2361 : Sat Writing
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
Every new enrollee must choose to have either specific benefits or working a set shift.
to have neither specific benefits or working a set shift.
to have either specific benefits or a set work shift.
having either specific benefits or working a set shift.
to have either specific benefits or working a set shift.
to have either specific benefits, or working a set shift.
to have either specific benefits or a set work shift.
Any "either . . . or" phrase must feature similar items, so they can be properly grouped in the same phrase. However, the sentence is written so that its "either . . . or" phrase contains unlike elements, a noun ("specific benefits") and a gerund phrase ("working a set shift"). The only answer choice that features correct parallel structure in the phrase is "to have either specific benefits or a set work shift," which changes the gerund phrase to a noun so that the "either . . . or" phrase contains two nouns.
Example Question #51 : Correcting Parallel Structure Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
The executives scrapped the project because it had problems in design, expenses, and to fulfill its timetable.
it had problems for design, expenses, and to fulfill its timetable.
that had problems in design, expenses, and to fulfill its timetable.
it had problems in design, expenses, and timetable fulfillment.
it had problems in design, expenses, and to fulfill its timetable.
it having problems in design, expenses, and to fulfill its timetable.
it had problems in design, expenses, and timetable fulfillment.
A list like the one that finishes this sentence needs to include three similar items, so that they can be properly grouped together. The sentence in this question, though, features two nouns ("design" and "expenses") and an infinitive phrase ("to fulfill its timetable"), meaning that the list needs to be changed so that all of its elements match. The only answer choice with a correct parallel structure is "it had problems in design, expenses, and timetable fulfillment," which changes the infinitive phrase "to fulfill its timetable" to a noun, "timetable fulfillment," that matches the other two nouns in the list.
Example Question #391 : Improving Sentences
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
Neither antibiotics nor the use of disinfectants helped slow the spread of the disease.
Neither antibiotics nor the use of disinfectants helping slow
Neither antibiotics nor the use of disinfectants helped to slow
Neither antibiotics or the use of disinfectants helped slow
Neither the use of antibiotics nor disinfectants helped slow
Neither antibiotics nor the use of disinfectants helped slow
Neither the use of antibiotics nor disinfectants helped slow
In any "neither . . . nor" phrase, each item being compared has to be the same kind of item so a proper comparison can be made. The sentence is written with two different elements, the simple noun "antibiotics" and the verbal phrase "the use of disinfectants." The only answer choice that uses an appropriate parallel structure, by redeploying the verbal phrase to cover both items, is "Neither the use of antibiotics nor disinfectants helped slow."
Example Question #51 : Correcting Other Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
Can you tell me how to get to either the post office or the police station?
get to either the post office or the police station?
get to either the post office nor the police station?
get to either the post office and the police station?
get to; either the post office or the police station?
get to the post office or either the police station?
get to either the post office or the police station?
The initial sentence is correct. The use of "either" in this manner requires that it be accompanied by "or."
Example Question #111 : Correcting Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
Either chatting online or video games might appear more interesting to a teenager than talking with their parents.
Either chatting online or playing video games might appear
Either chatting online or video games might appear
Neither chatting online nor video games might appear
Either chatted online or video games might appear
Either chatting online or video games might appear,
Either chatting online or playing video games might appear
"Chatting online" is a gerund phrase, while "video games" is a noun. In an "either . . . or" phrase, however, both elements of the phrase need to be of the same kind of word. "Either chatting online or playing video games might appear" is the only answer choice that uses an appropriate parallel structure.
Example Question #61 : Correcting Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
The flowers she brought are fragrant, colorful, and they look fresh.
and fresh.
and they are fresh.
and they look fresh.
and fresh-looking.
and beautifully fresh.
and fresh.
Parallelism is the key here—all the descriptions should be in the same format, which is a single word adjective. The correct answer also makes the sentence more concise and more fluid, which is another benefit of having parallel sentence structure and another way to tell which answer choice is best.
Example Question #395 : Improving Sentences
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
The governor supported abolishing residential taxes and to create new state parks.
to create new state parks
created new parks for the state
to create new parks in the state
creating new state parks
created new state parks
creating new state parks
As it is written, the sentence uses parallelism incorrectly because the two things the governor supports are different word forms - "abolishing residential taxes" is a gerund phrase, and "to create new state parks" is an infinitive phrase. Changing the infinitive phrase to a gerund phrase makes the sentence sound more fluid.
Example Question #396 : Improving Sentences
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
At the supermarket, I decided to buy apples, oranges, grapefruit, and some lemons.
I decided to buy apples, oranges, grapefruit, and some lemons.
I decided to buy apples, oranges, lemons, and some grapefruit.
I decided on buying apples, oranges, grapefruit, and lemons.
I decided to buy some apples, oranges, grapefruit, and lemons.
I decided to buy apples, oranges, grapefruit, and lemons.
I decided to buy apples, oranges, grapefruit, and lemons.
The sentence must have parallel structure. The quantifier “some” should appear before each fruit, or it should be left out completely. The verb “to decide” must be followed by an infinitive verb (“to buy”).
Example Question #81 : Parallel Structure Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
John was an excellent sportsman because he performed his athletic pursuits with agility, grace, and he desired to win.
John was an excellent sportsman because he performed his athletic pursuits with agility, grace, and he desired to win.
John was an excellent sportsman because he had agility, grace, and a desire to win and he performed all of his athletic pursuits accordingly.
John was an excellent sportsman because of his agility, grace, and desire to win. He performed his athletic pursuits with these abilities.
John was an excellent sportsman because he performed all of his athletic pursuits with agility, grace, and because he desired to win.
John was an excellent sportsman because he performed his athletic pursuits with agility, grace, and desire to win.
John was an excellent sportsman because he performed his athletic pursuits with agility, grace, and desire to win.
The sentence suffers from a form of faulty parallelism, in which the third item in a parallel series doesn't share the same grammatical form as the other items in the series. The third item, "he desired to win," is stated as a clause, while the other two items, "agility" and "grace," are nouns. The easiest way to fix this problem is simply to change "he desired" to "a desire."
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