GMAT Verbal : Sentence Correction

Study concepts, example questions & explanations for GMAT Verbal

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Example Questions

Example Question #21 : Sentence Correction

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

The rivalry of Stanford and Harvard is legendary, not just because the academics, but because of sports as well.

Possible Answers:

The Stanford and Harvard rivalry is legendary, not just because they have academics, but because of sports as well.

The rivalry between Stanford and Harvard is legendary, not just because of academics, but because of sports as well.

The rivalry that Stanford and Harvard have is legendary, not just because the academics, but because of sports as well.

Stanford and Harvard, which have a rivalry, is legendary, not just because of academics, but because of sports as well.

The rivalry of Stanford and Harvard is legendary, not just because of academics, but because of sports as well.

Correct answer:

The rivalry between Stanford and Harvard is legendary, not just because of academics, but because of sports as well.

Explanation:

This sentence is all about correctly using idioms. The two idioms in this sentence are “the rivalry between x and y” and “not just because of x, but because of y as well.” The only answer choice that correctly employs both of these idioms is "The rivalry between Stanford and Harvard is legendary, not just because of academics, but because of sports as well."

Example Question #22 : Sentence Correction

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Due to modern medicine and advances in nutrition and hygiene, less people die every year from infectious diseases then ever before.

Possible Answers:

every year, fewer people die, from infectious diseases, than have ever before.

less people die every year from infectious diseases then ever before.

fewer people die every year from infectious diseases than ever before.

fewer people die every year from infectious diseases then ever before.

less people die every year from infectious diseases than ever before.

Correct answer:

fewer people die every year from infectious diseases than ever before.

Explanation:

To get this question right, you have to know the difference between "fewer" and "less," as well as the difference between "then" and "than." "Fewer" is used in measuring things that are countable, or have a distinct quantity, such as people, footballs, or days. Less is used to describe something that are not countable, or can’t be measured with a whole number, such as soda, dirt, or sand. "Then" is used to convey the idea of “after” (i.e. "I ate and then went to the movie.") while than is used to compare ideas. Therefore, the only sentence that correctly uses both "fewer" and "less" as well as "then" and "than" is "fewer people die every year from infectious diseases than ever before."

Example Question #23 : Sentence Correction

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

In real estate, there is not a shortage of neither loan officers nor newcomers aspiring to be realtors. 

Possible Answers:

a shortage of loan officers nor newcomers.

a shortage of neither loan officers nor newcomers.

not a shortage of neither loan officers nor newcomers.

not a shortage of neither loan officers and newcomers.

a shortage of either loan officers or newcomers.

Correct answer:

a shortage of neither loan officers nor newcomers.

Explanation:

Use of the word "not" in the sentence creates a double negative, and double negatives are grammatically incorrect in standard written English. However, the use of "neither . . . nor" is correct. The correct answer both avoids the use of the word "not" whle also utilizing "neither . . . nor."

Example Question #24 : Sentence Correction

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

My friend tends to be very dilatory, as she never works on projects in advance; but saves them for the last minute instead.

Possible Answers:

in advance; saving them for the last minute instead.

in advance; saves them for the last minute instead.

in advance, but saves them for the last minute instead.

in advance; but saves them for the last minute instead.

in advance—but saves them for the last minute instead.

Correct answer:

in advance, but saves them for the last minute instead.

Explanation:

The use of a semicolon along with the conjunction "but" is incorrect; two independent clauses can be combined either with a comma followed by a conjunction, or by a semicolon, and the sentence as it is written is mixing these options together in an incorrect manner. The best answer choice adheres to one option, the use of a comma followed by a conjunction. The incorrect answer choices either combine these options incorrectly, or use a semicolon to connect an independent clause to a dependent clause that has no subject.

Example Question #25 : Sentence Correction

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

While George is usually very gregarious, with a bubbly personality and excellent conversational skills, he instead seemed rather quiet last night.

 

Possible Answers:

he seemed rather quiet last night.

he instead seemed rather quieter last night.

he seemed quieter last night. 

he was seemingly rather quiet last night. 

he instead seemed rather quiet last night. 

Correct answer:

he seemed rather quiet last night.

Explanation:

The use of the word “instead” in the last part of the sentence, given that the beginning part of the sentence begins with the word, “while.” The use of the “while” signals to the reader that there will be a change later in the sentence, and so using the word, “instead” is not necessary. Therefore, the correct answer eliminates use of the word instead, and does not contain any other errors.

 

Example Question #26 : Sentence Correction

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

If you are going to travel abroad, it is important to always have your passport close at hand because one never knows when it will be needed

Possible Answers:

close at hand because you never know when it will be needed

close at hand because one never knows when it will be needed

close at hand because one never can know when it will be needed

close at hand because you never can know when it will be needed

close at hand because one never is knowing when it will be needed

Correct answer:

close at hand because you never know when it will be needed

Explanation:

If a sentence is describing how “you” should behave, it creates discontinuity to then begin using the word “one” as a pronoun in place of "you." Therefore, “one" should be replaced by the word “you" in the sentence.

Example Question #27 : Sentence Correction

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

No one quite understands why the model is attracted towards the gentleman that she is dating, as he doesn’t appear to be physically or personally attractive. 

Possible Answers:

attracted towards the gentleman that she is dating, as he doesn’t appear

attracted to the gentleman that she is dating, as he didn't appear

attracted because the gentleman that she is dating, as he doesn’t appear

attracted to the gentleman that she is dating, as he doesn’t appear

attracted towards the gentleman that she is dating, because he doesn’t appear

Correct answer:

attracted to the gentleman that she is dating, as he doesn’t appear

Explanation:

This sentence does not comply with the idioms that govern when prepositions should follow verbs. “Attracted” is typically followed by the preposition “to,” or is not followed by a preposition at all. Therefore, the use of the preposition “towards” after the word “attracted” is incorrect, and to correct the sentence, one should change "towards" to "to" or omit "towards" altogether. 

Example Question #28 : Sentence Correction

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

The web designer entered in the code methodically and careful, striving to complete the project without making a single mistake.

Possible Answers:

carefully, striving to completing the project without making a single mistake.

carefully, striving to complete the project without making a single mistake?

carefully, striving to complete the project without making a single mistake.

careful, striving to complete the project without making a single mistake.

careful, striving to completing the project without making a single mistake.

Correct answer:

carefully, striving to complete the project without making a single mistake.

Explanation:

In this sentence, the adjective “careful” modifies the verb “entered.” Given that adverbs can only modify verbs, the proper word would instead be “carefully,” which is an adverb.

Example Question #29 : Sentence Correction

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

The restaurant owner was frustrated that a fast-food establishment had taken up residence next door, that was taking away business.

Possible Answers:

establishment had taken up residence next door, which was taking away business

establishment had taken up residence next door, which was taking business

establishment had taken up residence next door, that was taking away business

establishment had taken up residence next door, which was takes away business

establishment had took up residence next door, that was taking away business

Correct answer:

establishment had taken up residence next door, which was taking away business

Explanation:

“Which” is used to show that there is modification to a phrase when the modification comes after a comma. “That” is used to show that there is a modification to a phrase in which there is not a comma after the subject being modified. Here, the part of the sentence before the comma is being modified by the part of the sentence after the comma. Therefore, “which” is appropriate, not “that.”

Example Question #30 : Sentence Correction

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Even though its going to be very rainy this weekend, I don’t think that should deter us from going hiking. 

Possible Answers:

its going to be very rainy this weekend, I do not think

its going to be very rainy this weekend, I don’t think

it was going to be very rainy this weekend, I don’t think

its to be very rainy this weekend, I don’t think

it's going to be very rainy this weekend, I don’t think

Correct answer:

it's going to be very rainy this weekend, I don’t think

Explanation:

“Its” is used to show possession. However, the context of this sentence does not call for a showing of possession. Rather, “it’s,” the abbreviated version of “it is,” is the appropriate word that should be used. 

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