GMAT Verbal : Correcting Punctuation Errors

Study concepts, example questions & explanations for GMAT Verbal

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Example Questions

Example Question #56 : Correcting Colon Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

He liked to shop during the weekdays: when less people were in the stores.

Possible Answers:

the weekdays: when less people were in the stores.

the weekdays: when: less people were in the stores.

the weekdays when: less people were in the stores.

the weekdays when less people were in the stores.

the weekdays, when less people were in the stores.

Correct answer:

the weekdays when less people were in the stores.

Explanation:

This sentence uses a colon where one is not necessary. Colons are used to join clauses when the second clause explains something about the first one. In this sentence, however, the colon appears in the midst of the clause, before a preposition. Colons should never be used in this way (never in conjunction with a preposition). The correct choice is, "the weekdays when less people were in the stores."

Example Question #57 : Correcting Colon Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

She concluded that: the students were eager to learn; the curriculum was appropriate; the facilities met the minimum conditions.

Possible Answers:

She concluded that—

She concluded that;

She concluded that (

She concluded—that

She concluded that:

Correct answer:

She concluded that:

Explanation:

Colons can be used to set off a list. In this case the list is composed of three clauses. The sentence is correct as is. All of the other answer choices contain punctuation errors.

Example Question #58 : Correcting Colon Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

The dictionary provided us with a far more precise definition then we could come up with- "expressing desire."

Possible Answers:

than, we could come up with, "expressing desire".

than we could come up with: "expressing desire."

then we could come up with, "expressing desire".

than we could come up with; "expressing desire".

then, we could come up with, "expressing desire".

Correct answer:

than we could come up with: "expressing desire."

Explanation:

A colon can be correctly used to set up a definition. In this case, we are defining the definition which the subjects of the sentence pulled from the dictionary. Using an em dash is inappropriate. Em dashes are typically used to set up an interrupting clause that is not entirely relevant to the sentence. Using a semi-colon would also be inappropriate. The best answer choice simply uses a colon, rather than commas which result in punctuation errors. "Then" and "than" are commonly confused but "then," in this case, would be incorrect.

Example Question #59 : Correcting Colon Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

He bought new things for his car; mats, oil, tools, and more.

Possible Answers:

his car; mats, oil, tools, and more.

his car, mats, oil, tools, and more.

his car mats, oil, tools, and more.

his car: mats, oil, tools, and more.

his car: mats oil tools and more.

Correct answer:

his car: mats, oil, tools, and more.

Explanation:

This sentence contains a semicolon where a colon should be. Note that semicolons only join independent clauses. The words "mats, oil, tools, and more" is  not an independent clause. Furthermore, these words describe a part of the preceding clause: what the subject bought. Colons combine two clauses when the second clause explains something about the first one. Additionally, the words "mats, oil, tools, and more" are in a list, so each item in the list should be separated by commas. The correct choice is, "his car: mats, oil, tools, and more."

Example Question #60 : Correcting Colon Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

They liked to sing: the songs at all times.

Possible Answers:

They liked to sing: the songs

They liked to sing the songs,

They liked to sing, the songs

They liked to sing, the songs,

They liked to sing the songs

Correct answer:

They liked to sing the songs

Explanation:

This sentence contains a colon where one is not necessary. Colons are used to combine two related clauses when the second clause explains something about the first one. The colon used here, however, appears in the middle of a clause, which never happens with colons. The colon should be omitted and no additional punctuation is necessary. The answer is, "They liked to sing the songs."

Example Question #61 : Correcting Colon Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

She wrote many books: her most popular book was published the previous year.

Possible Answers:

She wrote many books her most popular book

She wrote many books; her most popular book

She wrote many books: her most popular book

She wrote many books: her most, popular book

She wrote many books, her most popular book

Correct answer:

She wrote many books; her most popular book

Explanation:

This sentence misuses the colon. Colons are used to join two related clauses when the second clause explains something about the first clause. While clauses here are related, the second clause does not explain anything about the author writing many books. A semicolon would be more appropriate. The correct choice is, "She wrote many books; her most popular book."

Example Question #62 : Correcting Colon Errors

Choose the best version of the underlined sentence.  One option will remain unchanged.

Jonathon crammed all night for his final, he overslept his alarm clock and missed the exam.

Possible Answers:

Jonathon crammed all night for his final; he overslept his alarm clock and missed the exam.

Jonathon crammed all night for his final, he overslept his alarm clock and missed the exam.

Jonathon crammed all night for his final, he overslept his alarm clock, and missed the exam.

Jonathon crammed all night for his final: he overslept his alarm clock and missed the exam.

Jonathon crammed all night for his final.  He overslept his alarm clock, and missed the exam.

Correct answer:

Jonathon crammed all night for his final: he overslept his alarm clock and missed the exam.

Explanation:

The sentence has a cause and effect structure. The cramming all night led to him missing his alarm clock and oversleeping.  Because of the interconnected nature of the two parts, the best connector is a colon. 

Example Question #63 : Correcting Colon Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

These four are my favorite animals, cats, dogs, and bears

Possible Answers:

animals, cats, dogs, and bears. 

animals; cats, dogs, and bears. 

animals. Cats, dogs, and bears. 

animals: cats, dogs, and bears.

animals-cats, dogs, and bears. 

Correct answer:

animals: cats, dogs, and bears.

Explanation:

In this case, the colon is the best option. The first part of the sentence introduces the following list of animals. Therefore, the colon is the best punctuation to separate the related parts of the sentence. Note that a colon can only follow an independent clause, which "These four are my favorite animals" is. Putting a period at the end of that independent clause, however, creates a fragment with the second clause.

Example Question #1 : Correcting Comma Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

For the first nineteen years of his life the young man had never traveled more than twenty miles from his hometown, but he was now preparing for a trip around the world.

Possible Answers:

For the first, nineteen years of his life, the young man

The first nineteen years of his life the young man

For first nineteen years of his life the young man

For the first nineteen years of his life, the young man 

For the first nineteen years of his life the young man

Correct answer:

For the first nineteen years of his life, the young man 

Explanation:

The phrase "For the first nineteen years of his life" is an introductory phrase, explaining information necessary to the meaning of the sentence, but sitting outside the main construction of the sentence. Any such phrase needs to be set off from the rest of the sentence by a comma. Therefore, the only possible correct answer choice is "For the first nineteen years of his life, the young man."

Example Question #2 : Correcting Comma Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Like his father, the boy was extremely serious and hated any school subjects which he found frivolous like art and gym.

Possible Answers:

which he found frivolous, like art and gym.

which he found, frivolous like art and gym.

which he found frivolous like art and gym.

which he found frivolous like art, and gym.

which he found, frivolous, like art and gym.

Correct answer:

which he found frivolous, like art and gym.

Explanation:

In the sentence, the phrase "like art and gym" is an explanatory phrase, one that conditions the meaning of the sentence, but is not a part of the sentence's core structure. Any such phrase must be set apart from the main portion of the sentence with a comma. The only answer choice that correctly places in a comma is "which he found frivolous, like art and gym."

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