SAT Writing : Correcting Word Usage Errors

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Example Question #31 : Correcting Pronoun Errors: Ambiguity

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Neither the rats nor the bats around the house are much fun to have around, but they are the absolute worst.

Possible Answers:

and they are the absolute worst.

but the bats are the absolute worst.

but they are the absolutely worst.

but they are the absolute worst.

but they're the absolute worst.

Correct answer:

but the bats are the absolute worst.

Explanation:

Whenever you have multiple antecedents in a sentence, you must be extremely clear with pronoun usage in order to avoid any ambiguity. In the sentence above, "they" could refer to either "the rats" or "the bats." The best way to correct the underlined portion of the sentence above is: "but the bats are the absolute worst."

Example Question #32 : Correcting Pronoun Errors: Ambiguity

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

The apples and the oranges were both rapidly becoming rotten, but they were in worse shape.

Possible Answers:

but they were in worse shape.

but they're in worse shape.

but they were in worser shape.

but the apples were in worse shape.

but they were of worse shape.

Correct answer:

but the apples were in worse shape.

Explanation:

Whenever you have multiple antecedents in a sentence, you must be extremely clear with pronoun usage in order to avoid any ambiguity. In the sentence above, "they" could refer to either "the apples" or "the oranges." The best way to correct the underlined portion of the sentence above is: "but the apples were in worse shape."

Note that a comma with a coordinating conjunction correctly connects these two independent clauses into one compound sentence.

Example Question #32 : Correcting Pronoun Errors: Ambiguity

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Please take the pencil and the notebook off of my desk, then put it in your backpack.

Possible Answers:

Please take the pencil and the notebook off of my desk, then put its in your backpack.

Please take the pencil and the notebook off of my desk, then put us in your backpack.

Please take the pencil and the notebook off of my desk, then put it in your backpack.

Please take the pencil and the notebook off of my desk, then put the pencil in your backpack.

Please take the pencil and the notebook off of my desk, then put they in your backpack.

Correct answer:

Please take the pencil and the notebook off of my desk, then put the pencil in your backpack.

Explanation:

Whenever you have multiple antecedents in a sentence, you must be extremely clear with pronoun usage in order to avoid any ambiguity. In the sentence above, "it" could refer to either "the pencil" or "the notebook." The best way to correct the underlined portion of the sentence above is, "Please take the pencil and the notebook off of my desk, then put the pencil in your backpack."

Example Question #33 : Correcting Pronoun Errors: Ambiguity

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

I love pork chops and I love steaks, but I prefer to eat them whenever I have a choice between the two.

Possible Answers:

I love pork chops and I love steaks, but I prefer to eat him whenever I have a choice between the two.

I love pork chops and I love steaks, but I prefer to eat them whenever I have a choice between the two.

I love pork chops and I love steaks, but I prefer to eat those whenever I have a choice between the two.

I love pork chops and I love steaks, but I prefer to eat it whenever I have a choice between the two.

I love pork chops and I love steaks, but I prefer to eat pork chops whenever I have a choice between the two.

Correct answer:

I love pork chops and I love steaks, but I prefer to eat pork chops whenever I have a choice between the two.

Explanation:

Whenever you have multiple antecedents in a sentence, you must be extremely clear with pronoun usage in order to avoid any ambiguity. In the sentence above, "them" could refer to either "pork chops" or "steaks." The best way to correct the underlined portion of the sentence above is, "I love pork chops and I love steaks, but I prefer to eat pork chops whenever I have a choice between the two."

Example Question #31 : Correcting Pronoun Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

I love the Beetles and I love the Rolling Stones, but I much prefer their music.

Possible Answers:

I love the Beetles and I love the Rolling Stones, but I greatly prefer those music.

I love the Beetles and I love the Rolling Stones, but I greatly prefer their music.

I love the Beetles and I love the Rolling Stones, but I much prefer their music.

I love the Beetles and I love the Rolling Stones, but I much prefer The Beetles' music.

I love the Beetles, and I love the Rolling Stones, but I much prefer the Beetles music.

Correct answer:

I love the Beetles and I love the Rolling Stones, but I much prefer The Beetles' music.

Explanation:

Whenever you have multiple antecedents in a sentence, you must be extremely clear with pronoun usage in order to avoid any ambiguity. In the sentence above, "their" could refer to either "The Beetles" or "The Rolling Stones." The best way to correct the underlined portion of the sentence above is, "I love the Beetles and I love the Rolling Stones, but I much prefer The Beetles' music."

Example Question #1 : Correcting Pronoun Errors: Incorrect Usage

She was always hard on her, battling with low self-esteem since she was a child.

Possible Answers:

hard to her

hard on her

hard on herself

hard in herself

hard with her

Correct answer:

hard on herself

Explanation:

The use of the pronoun "her" in the underlined phrase is confusing, as it is not clear whether this is a new person in the sentence or refers back to the subject. To be more clear, a reflexive pronoun must be used. The correct answer is "hard on herself."

Example Question #32 : Correcting Word Usage Errors

The materials must be brought back to myself as soon as you are done with them.

Possible Answers:

back to me

back to myself

back from me

back from myself

back toward myself

Correct answer:

back to me

Explanation:

The only issue in the sentence as it is written is the use of "myself," a reflexive pronoun, when there is no other first person pronoun to which it can refer back. The only answer choice which both appropriately uses "me," and keeps the same meaning is "back to me."

Example Question #1 : Correcting Pronoun Errors: Incorrect Usage

The information was only given to myself after the rest of the students had seen it all.

Possible Answers:

giving to myself 

given to me

gave to myself

giving to me

given to myself

Correct answer:

given to me

Explanation:

The only issue with the sentence is its use of the reflexive pronoun "myself," despite not previously using a first person pronoun. All reflexive pronouns need an antecedent, or previous pronoun in the same person, to be used correctly, or it should be changed to the simple pronoun. As this is the only problem with the sentence, "given to me" is the correct answer choice.

Example Question #1 : Correcting Pronoun Errors: Incorrect Usage

Those supplies all need to be brought directly to myself.

Possible Answers:

directly to myself.

directly from myself.

directly for myself.

directly to me.

direct to myself.

Correct answer:

directly to me.

Explanation:

The only issue with the sentence is the use of the reflexive pronoun "myself" without a previous use of the first person pronoun. All reflexive pronouns need to refer back to an earlier use of the pronoun in the sentence. The solution to this issue is to change "myself" to the simple "me," making "directly to me" the correct answer choice.

Example Question #1 : Correcting Pronoun Errors: Incorrect Usage

The information needs to be reviewed by yourself before it is sent out.

Possible Answers:

reviews by yourself

reviewing by your

reviewing by yourself

reviewed by yourself

reviewed by you

Correct answer:

reviewed by you

Explanation:

The use of the reflexive pronoun "yourself" is incorrect in this sentence, as it has no previous "you" to refer back to. "Yourself" needs to simply be replaced by "you," making "reviewed by you" the correct answer choice.

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