PSAT Writing : Identifying Other Usage Errors

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Example Questions

Example Question #1 : Identifying Preposition Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

During the interview, the applicant was grateful that he had managed to avoid from talking about his grades, which were not very impressive. No error

Possible Answers:

which

During

was

No error

avoid from 

Correct answer:

avoid from 

Explanation:

This sentence does not comply with the idioms that govern when prepositions should follow verbs. “Avoid,” is not typically followed by a preposition. Therefore, the use of the preposition “from” after the word “avoid” is unnecessary and incorrect.

Example Question #1 : Identifying Preposition Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Macbeth is often described for being Shakespeare’s most accomplished play, as it delivers an incredibly high amount of drama. No error

Possible Answers:

amount of

No error

as it

most

described for

Correct answer:

described for

Explanation:

This sentence does not comply with the idioms that govern which prepositions should follow verbs. “Described" is typically followed by the preposition “as,” not “for.” Therefore, the correct version of this sentence would read, "Macbeth is often described as being Shakespeare’s most accomplished play, as it delivers an incredible amount of drama."

 

Example Question #11 : Identifying Preposition Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

The teacher was very proud of the student for pursuing towards her dream. No error

Possible Answers:

proud of

towards

was

No error

for 

Correct answer:

towards

Explanation:

This sentence does not comply with the idioms that govern which prepositions should follow verbs. “Pursuing” is not typically followed by a preposition. Therefore, “towards” should not come after “pursuing” in the sentence, and can be omitted.

Example Question #211 : Identifying Usage Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

The young attorney was frustrated that despite being a lawyer, she was being treated for an intern. No error

Possible Answers:

despite

was

for

No error

being

Correct answer:

for

Explanation:

This sentence does not comply with the idioms that govern which prepositions should follow certain verbs. “Treated” is typically followed either by “as” or not followed by a preposition at all. Therefore, the use of the preposition “for” after the word “treated” is inappropriate.

Example Question #212 : Identifying Usage Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

The athlete knew that in order for win the tournament, she would have to practice much more than she already did. No error

Possible Answers:

in order for win the tournament

than she already did

would have to practice

No error

more

Correct answer:

in order for win the tournament

Explanation:

In standard English, the phrase "in order to (verb)" means to make it such that (verb)ing can occur. When used in this manner, the phrase is always "in order to (verb)," never "in order for (verb)." One might write "In order for the athlete to win the tournament" or "In order to win the tournament," but never "In order for win the tournament."

Example Question #213 : Identifying Usage Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

While the cake was baking, she ate half from the icing and ran to the store to buy moreNo error

Possible Answers:

While the cake was baking,

ran

half from the icing

No error

to buy more

Correct answer:

half from the icing

Explanation:

In standard English, "half from the icing" is incorrect; one should say "half of the icing" instead to convey that the subject ate half of the amount of icing that was available. 

Example Question #214 : Identifying Usage Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Nearly all of the city council members voted in favor of the proposal to increase the number of lanes on several notoriously busy streets in an effort at reducing heavy traffic.

Possible Answers:

notoriously

No error

proposal to

in favor of

in an effort at

Correct answer:

in an effort at

Explanation:

This sentence contains an erroneous idiomatic expression. The correct idiom is "in an effort to" rather than "in an effort at." The idioms "in favor of" and "proposal to" are correct, and the adverb "notoriously" correctly modifies the adjective "busy."

Example Question #215 : Identifying Usage Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

The smell of roasting onions permeated in the courtyard by the kitchenNo error

Possible Answers:

roasting onions

No error

by the kitchen

permeated in

The smell of

Correct answer:

permeated in

Explanation:

The verb "permeated" is not typically followed by the preposition "in." The corrected sentence reads, "The smell of roasting onions permeated the courtyard by the kitchen."

Example Question #216 : Identifying Usage Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Public transportation strikes can have serious harmful effects for the local economy. No error

Possible Answers:

local

can have

for

serious harmful

No error

Correct answer:

for

Explanation:

The wrong preposition is used here. Usually we say that something has an effect "on" another thing, not "for." The corrected sentence reads, "Public transportation strikes can have serious harmful effects on the local economy."

Example Question #12 : Identifying Preposition Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

What is the reason of the giant, empty box that has been sitting in the living room for the past week? No error

Possible Answers:

has been sitting

reason of

for

No error

past

Correct answer:

reason of

Explanation:

This sentence does not follow the conventions of noun and preposition use. The correct preposition to use after “reason” is “for,” not “of.” The corrected sentence reads: "What is the reason for the giant, empty box that has been sitting in the living room for the past week?"

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