GMAT Verbal : Sentence Correction

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Example Questions

Example Question #41 : Correcting Colon Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

The teacher's rates were high: because his students were considered to be the best in their field after graduation. 

Possible Answers:

The teacher's rates were high, because his students

The teacher's rates were high; because his students

The teacher's rates were high because his students

The teacher's rates were high - because his students

The teacher's rates were high: because his students

Correct answer:

The teacher's rates were high because his students

Explanation:

This sentence contains a colon where one is not necessary. Colons are used to join two clauses when the second clause explains something about the first clause. Colons are not used with conjunctions like "because," though. Furthermore, the word "because" does not need a comma before it (only coordinating conjunctions need a comma before it when joining an independent clause to another. The correct choice is, "The teacher's rates were high because his students."

Example Question #42 : Correcting Colon Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

He practiced everyday in order to achieve: his goal of becoming a pro skater.

Possible Answers:

 in order to achieve his goal of: becoming a pro skater.

 in order: to achieve his goal of becoming a pro skater.

 in order to achieve his goal of becoming a pro skater.

 in order to achieve: his goal of becoming a pro skater.

 in order to achieve his goal: of becoming a pro skater.

Correct answer:

 in order to achieve his goal of becoming a pro skater.

Explanation:

This sentence contains an error in the usage of the colon. Colons are used to join two clauses when the second clause explains something in the first clause. The colons in the choices above, however, only split up the existing clauses (Colons never are used in the middle of clauses and absolutely never after a preposition like "of"). The best choice is to omit the colon. The correct answer is, " in order to achieve his goal of becoming a pro skater."

Example Question #43 : Correcting Colon Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

He always appreciated: a pen that wrote well, a rarity in his opinion.

Possible Answers:

He always appreciated, a pen that wrote well

He always appreciated a pen, that wrote well

He always appreciated a pen that wrote well

He always appreciated a pen: that wrote well

He always appreciated: a pen that wrote well

Correct answer:

He always appreciated a pen that wrote well

Explanation:

This sentence misuses the colon. Colons are used to join two clauses (the first one has to be independent) when the second clause explains/describes something about the first clause. In the above choices, the colon does not appear in any place between clauses. The correct choice is, "He always appreciated a pen that wrote well."

Example Question #50 : Correcting Colon Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

He planned to read a few books during his vacation. The Grapes of Wrath, Animal Farm, and To Kill A Mockingbird.

Possible Answers:

books during his vacation: The Grapes of Wrath, Animal Farm, and To Kill A Mockingbird.

books during his vacation; The Grapes of Wrath, Animal Farm, and To Kill A Mockingbird.

books during his vacation The Grapes of Wrath, Animal Farm, and To Kill A Mockingbird.

books during his vacation - The Grapes of Wrath, Animal Farm, and To Kill A Mockingbird.

books during his vacation. The Grapes of Wrath, Animal Farm, and To Kill A Mockingbird.

Correct answer:

books during his vacation: The Grapes of Wrath, Animal Farm, and To Kill A Mockingbird.

Explanation:

This sentence does not contain a colon where necessary. The phrase "The Grapes of Wrath, Animal Farm, and To Kill A Mockingbird" describe exactly what books the subject plans to read. Colons should be used when combining two related clauses when the second clause explains something about the first one; therefore, a colon should appear after the word "vacation." The correct choice is, "books during his vacation: The Grapes of Wrath, Animal Farm, and To Kill A Mockingbird."

Example Question #51 : Correcting Colon Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

The list of companies with the largest market caps on the stock market: include Roundree, Gargle, and Mousecow.

Possible Answers:

market caps on: the stock market include Roundree, Gargle, and Mousecow.

market caps on the stock market: include Roundree, Gargle, and Mousecow.

market caps on the stock: market include Roundree, Gargle, and Mousecow.

market caps: on the stock market include Roundree, Gargle, and Mousecow.

market caps on the stock market include: Roundree, Gargle, and Mousecow.

Correct answer:

market caps on the stock market include: Roundree, Gargle, and Mousecow.

Explanation:

This sentence has misplaced the colon. The colon should come after the word "include" since that word marks the end of the first clause. Note that colons combine two clauses when the second one explains or describes something about the first clause. The correct choice is, "market caps on the stock market include: Roundree, Gargle, and Mousecow."

Example Question #52 : Correcting Colon Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Mike did not realize that he was going in: the wrong direction.

Possible Answers:

that, he was going in the wrong direction.

that he was going in; the wrong direction.

that, he was going in: the wrong direction.

that he was going in: the wrong direction.

that he was going in the wrong direction.

Correct answer:

that he was going in the wrong direction.

Explanation:

This sentence uses a colon where one is not necessary. Colons are used to join two clauses when the second clause describes something about the first clause. In this sentence, however, there is only one clause (the word "that" does not begin a new clause, but an indirect statement phrase). The correct choice is, "that he was going in the wrong direction."

Example Question #53 : Correcting Colon Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

The company's newest creation was incredibly: delicious.

Possible Answers:

newest creation was incredibly delicious.

newest creation was, incredibly, delicious.

newest creation was, incredibly delicious.

newest creation was incredibly, delicious.

newest creation was incredibly: delicious.

Correct answer:

newest creation was incredibly delicious.

Explanation:

This sentence contains an error in the placement of the colon. Colons are used to join two clauses when the second clause explains something about the first clause. In this sentence, however, there is only one clause (colons never split clauses). It is best to omit the colon. The correct choice is, "newest creation was incredibly delicious."

Example Question #54 : Correcting Colon Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Each day, he tried to improve his running time: so far, he had shaved one minute off of his time per mile.

Possible Answers:

improve his running time: so far, he had shaved

improve his running time, so far, he had shaved

improve his running time: so far he had shaved

improve his running time; so far, he had shaved

improve his running time; so far; he had shaved

Correct answer:

improve his running time; so far, he had shaved

Explanation:

This sentence contains a colon where a semicolon is necessary. Colons join two related clauses when the second one explains something about the preceding clause. In this sentence, however, the phrase "so far, he had shaved one minute off of his time per mile" does not explain why the subject tries to improve his timing or how he goes about doing that; it simply tells us his progress in this endeavor. Semicolons join two related independent clauses without the use of a conjunction. This is the appropriate choice. The correct answer is, "improve his running time; so far, he had shaved."

Example Question #55 : Correcting Colon Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

In the past: many civilizations have looked to the stars for guidance.

Possible Answers:

In the past: many civilizations have looked

In the past, many, civilizations have looked

In the past many civilizations have looked

In the past, many civilizations have looked

In the past; many civilizations have looked

Correct answer:

In the past, many civilizations have looked

Explanation:

This sentence contains a colon where a comma is necessary. The phrase "In the past" is an example of an introductory phrase, explaining information necessary to the context of the sentence, but outside of the main sentence, grammatically. These types of phrases must be followed by a comma in order to separate them from the rest of the sentence. The correct answer choice is, "In the past, many civilizations have looked."

Example Question #56 : Correcting Colon Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

He liked to shop during the weekdays: when less people were in the stores.

Possible Answers:

the weekdays: when less people were in the stores.

the weekdays: when: less people were in the stores.

the weekdays when: less people were in the stores.

the weekdays when less people were in the stores.

the weekdays, when less people were in the stores.

Correct answer:

the weekdays when less people were in the stores.

Explanation:

This sentence uses a colon where one is not necessary. Colons are used to join clauses when the second clause explains something about the first one. In this sentence, however, the colon appears in the midst of the clause, before a preposition. Colons should never be used in this way (never in conjunction with a preposition). The correct choice is, "the weekdays when less people were in the stores."

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