GMAT Verbal : Sentence Correction
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Example Question #3 : Correcting Correlative Conjunction Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
The remarkable thing about the new service was that it not only shortened wait times but also provides better service for customers.
not only shortened wait times but also provides better service for customers.
not only shortened wait times for customers but also provides better service.
not only for customers shortened wait times but also provides better service.
not only shortened wait times but it also provides better service for customers.
not only shortens wait times but also provides better service for customers.
not only shortens wait times but also provides better service for customers.
The correlative conjunction phrase that is underlined in the sentence does not feature parallel verb forms, using the past tense "shortened" and the present tense "provides." Any correlative conjunction phrase needs to feature a parallel structure with each verb being in the same tense. The only answer choice which has the correct parallel structure is "not only shortens wait times but also provides better service for customers."
Example Question #3 : Correcting Correlative Conjunction Errors
Neither the ringing alarm clock or the crowing rooster were enough to rouse Old MacDonald from his slumber.
Which option best replaces the underlined portion of the sentence?
Neither the ringing alarm clock or the crowing rooster
Either the ringing alarm clock nor the crowing rooster
Either the ringing alarm clock or the crowing rooster
Neither the ringing alarm clock and the crowing rooster
Neither the ringing alarm clock nor the crowing rooster
Neither the ringing alarm clock nor the crowing rooster
Neither always goes with nor, and either always goes with or. Neither neither nor either go with "and."
Example Question #5 : Correcting Correlative Conjunction Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
Just as "he who sings, prays twice" cannot be properly attributed to Augustine, even if similar statements can be found in his sermons, so too is there no evidence that his mentor Ambrose is responsible for the saying "when in Rome, do as the Romans do."
While "he who sings, prays twice" cannot be properly attributed to Augustine, even if similar statements can be found in his sermons, so too is there no evidence
Just as "he who sings, prays twice" cannot be properly attributed to Augustine, even if similar statements can be found in his sermons, so too is there no evidence
While "he who sings, prays twice" cannot be properly attributed to Augustine, even if similar statements can be found in his sermons, and there is no evidence
While "he who sings, prays twice" cannot be properly attributed to Augustine, even if similar statements can be found in his sermons, but there is no evidence
Just as "he who sings, prays twice" cannot be properly attributed to Augustine, even if similar statements can be found in his sermons, and there is no evidence
Just as "he who sings, prays twice" cannot be properly attributed to Augustine, even if similar statements can be found in his sermons, so too is there no evidence
"Just as . . . so too" is the proper form of the correlative conjunction in this instance, establishing the relationship (one of similarity) between the two examples mentioned in the passage.
Example Question #4 : Correcting Correlative Conjunction Errors
The two hour delay caused problems not only for Buckley, and Ronnie as well.
What option best replaces the underlined portion of the sentence?
not only for Buckley and Ronnie.
not for Buckley, but also for Ronnie.
not only for Buckley, but also for Ronnie.
not only for Buckley, but also for Ronnie as well.
not only for Buckley, also Ronnie.
not only for Buckley, but also for Ronnie.
"Not only" is a conjunction that always correlates with "but also;" furthermore, "but also" is sufficient, adding "as well" on top of that is needlessly repetitive.
Example Question #1 : Correcting Correlative Conjunction Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.
In Emily Brontë's novel Wuthering Heights, the heroine, Catherine, must choose between true love or social preeminence.
the heroine, Catherine, must make a choice between true love or social preeminence.
the heroine, Catherine, must choose between true love and social preeminence.
the heroine, Catherine, must choose between true love or social preeminence.
the heroine, Catherine, must have to be choosing between true love either or social preeminence.
the heroine, Catherine, must have chosen between true love or social preeminence.
the heroine, Catherine, must choose between true love and social preeminence.
Only answer choice "the heroine, Catherine, must choose between true love and social preeminence" correctly uses "and" with the preposition "between."
The other answer choices, including the original text "the heroine, Catherine, must choose between true love or social preeminence," contain an incorrect idiomatic expression. When we have "between," we typically need the word "and"—rather than "or"—to separate the entities that follow.
Example Question #4 : Correcting Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices repeats the underlined portion as it is written.
When she went to the zoo, Lyndsey got to see not only tigers, but polar bears, iguanas, and toucans.
When she went to the zoo, Lyndsey got to see not only tigers, and polar bears, iguanas, and toucans.
When she went to the zoo, Lyndsey got to see not only tigers, but also polar bears, iguanas, and toucans.
When she went to the zoo, Lyndsey got to see not only tigers, also polar bears, iguanas, and toucans.
When she went to the zoo, Lyndsey got to see not only tigers, although polar bears, iguanas, and toucans too.
When she went to the zoo, Lyndsey got to see not only tigers, but polar bears, iguanas, and toucans.
When she went to the zoo, Lyndsey got to see not only tigers, but also polar bears, iguanas, and toucans.
In standard English, when you use the phrase "not only" in a sentence, it should be followed by the phrase "but also." So, the correct answer is "When she went to the zoo, Lyndsey got to see not only tigers, but also polar bears, iguanas, and toucans."
Example Question #2 : Correcting Correlative Conjunction Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
The remake of the film was neither enjoyable and definitely not faithful to the original film.
nor faithful to the original film
nor were it faithful to the original film
and it wasn't even faithful to the original film
and definitely not faithful to the original film
nor was it faithful to the original film
nor faithful to the original film
When "neither" is used in a sentence, "nor" should follow it, creating the structure "neither X nor Y," where X and Y are items formatted in the same manner. To correct the sentence, we need to change "and definitely not" to "nor." Several answer choices do this: "nor faithful to the original film," "nor were it faithful to the original film," and "nor was it faithful to the original film." "Nor were it faithful to the original film" and "nor was it faithful to the original film" might each look like potentially correct answers, but each introduces a verb that disrupts the parallel structure of "neither X nor Y," in which "nor" should be immediately followed by "faithful to the original film." The correct answer is thus "nor faithful to the original film," making the corrected sentence, "The remake of the film was neither enjoyable nor faithful to the original film."
Example Question #1 : Correcting Conjunction Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
After Jonas graduates from high school, his father hopes that Jonas will either attend college nor join the army to learn a skill.
Jonas will either attend college and join the army to learn a skill
Jonas will neither attend college or join the army to learn a skill
Jonas will either attend college nor join the army to learn a skill
Jonas will either attend college or joining the army to learn a skill
Jonas will either attend college or join the army to learn a skill
Jonas will either attend college or join the army to learn a skill
Correlative conjunctions are used in specific pairs: "either" must be paired with "or" and "neither" must be paired with "nor" when you want to use them as correlative conjunctions. When using these correlative conjunctions, it is also important to remember to use parallel phrasing with each element that is being associated through the use of the conjunction.
Example Question #1 : Correcting Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
The teacher reprimanded his class, saying that he was neither pleased with their poor work nor was he willing to accept their rowdy behavior.
saying that neither was he pleased with their poor work nor was willing to accept their rowdy behavior.
saying that he was neither pleased with their poor work nor willing to accept their rowdy behavior.
saying that he was neither pleased with their poor work or willing to accept their rowdy behavior.
saying that he was neither pleased with their poor work nor was he willing to accept their rowdy behavior.
saying that he was pleased neither with their poor work nor willing to accept their rowdy behavior.
saying that he was neither pleased with their poor work nor willing to accept their rowdy behavior.
The correlative conjunctions “neither” and “nor” belong together. In "neither . . . nor" sentences, the two options (“pleased with their poor work” and “willing to accept their rowdy behavior”) must be presented in a grammatically parallel way so that the words following “neither” and the words following “nor” are parallel phrases.
Example Question #1211 : Sentence Correction
Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.
She told her children that she would take them to either the toy store or to the ice cream parlor if they finished all their chores on time.
she would either take them to the toy store or the ice cream parlor
she would take them to either the toy store or to the ice cream parlor
she would either take them to the toy store or to the ice cream parlor
she would take them to either the toy store and the ice cream parlor
she would take them either to the toy store or to the ice cream parlor
she would take them either to the toy store or to the ice cream parlor
The correlative conjunctions “either” and “or” get paired together here. In "either . . . or" sentences, the two options being discussed (in this case, going to the toy store and going to the ice cream parlor) must be presented in a grammatically parallel way so that the words following “either” and the words following “or” are parallel phrases. In this case, “to the toy store” and “to the ice cream parlor” are the only options that are parallel; otherwise, you’re comparing apples and oranges.
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