GMAT Verbal : Correcting Phrase, Clause, and Sentence Errors

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Example Questions

Example Question #81 : Modifier Placement Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence. 

Oozing with four kinds of melty cheese, I relished each bite of my wife's homemade mac and cheese with bacon.

Possible Answers:

I relished, oozing with four kinds of melty cheese, each bite of my wife's homemade bacon mac and cheese.

Oozing with four kinds of melty cheese, I relished each bite of my wife's homemade bacon mac and cheese. 

I relished each bite of my wife's homemade bacon mac and cheese, which oozed with four kinds of melty cheese. 

I relished each bite, oozing with four kinds of melty cheese, of my wife's homemade bacon mac and cheese.

I relished each oozing with four kinds of melty cheese bite of my wife's homemade bacon mac and cheese.

Correct answer:

I relished each bite of my wife's homemade bacon mac and cheese, which oozed with four kinds of melty cheese. 

Explanation:

The phrase "oozing with four kinds of melty cheese" is intended to modify "[the writer's] wife's homemade bacon mac & cheese."; therefore, it should be placed at the end of the sentence to be as close as possible to the noun phrase it is describing. The participle "oozing" could still be easily attributed to either the subject "I" or the "mac and cheese," but changing the phrase "oozing with four kinds of melty cheese" to "which oozed with four kinds of melty cheese" removes the possibility of the phrase referring to the subject "I," making the sentence less ambiguous.

Example Question #82 : Modifier Placement Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

Invented in China over three centuries ago, explorers and trade merchants alike have used the compass as a navigational tool.

Possible Answers:

Invented in China over three centuries ago, both explorers and trade merchants alike have used the compass as a navigational tool. 

Invented in China over three centuries ago, explorers and trade merchants alike used the compass as a navigational tool. 

Invented in China over three centuries ago, explorers and trade merchants alike have used the compass as a navigational tool. 

Invented in China over three centuries ago, explorers and trade merchants alike use the compass as a navigational tool. 

Invented in China over three centuries ago, the compass has served as a navigational tool for explorers and trade merchants alike.

Correct answer:

Invented in China over three centuries ago, the compass has served as a navigational tool for explorers and trade merchants alike.

Explanation:

The original text contains a misplaced modifier. When we have a modifying phrase at the beginning of a sentence, such as "Invented in China over three centuries ago," we know that the noun that appears right after that phrase must be the thing that the modifying phrase describes. In this case, this means the thing that was invented in China over three centuries ago. 

All of the answer choices except "Invented in China over three centuries ago, the compass has served as a navigational tool for explorers and trade merchants alike" make is sound as though explorers and trade merchants were invented in China over three centuries ago, which is not correct.

Example Question #282 : Correcting Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices reproduces the underlined portion as it is written in the sentence.

A popular tourist destination, Edward Hooper used Central Park as the subject of many of his paintings.

Possible Answers:

Edward Hooper used Central Park as the subject of many of his paintings. 

Edward Hooper used Central Park to be the subject of many of his paintings. 

Central Park was the subject of many of Edward Hooper's paintings. 

Edward Hooper has used Central Park as the subject of many of his paintings. 

Edward Hooper has used Central Park to be the subject of many of his paintings. 

Correct answer:

Central Park was the subject of many of Edward Hooper's paintings. 

Explanation:

When a sentence begins with an introductory modifying clause, such as "A popular tourist destination," the noun right after that clause must be the entity that the clause describes—in this case, Central Park. Otherwise, an error known as a "dangling modifier" is created and the sentence becomes confusing and ambiguous.

Only the answer choice "Central Park was the subject of many of Edward Hooper's paintings" places the subject "Central Park" immediately after the modifying introductory clause and avoids confusion and ambiguity.

All of the other answer choices make it sound as though Edward Hooper is a popular tourist destination, which is somewhat silly and definitely incorrect.

Example Question #1511 : Sentence Correction

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices repeats the underlined portion as it is written.

After completing the circuitous trek and reaching the summit, the view was completely obstructed by an immense bank of fog.

Possible Answers:

and the summit reached, I could not enjoy the view because it was completely obstructed by an immense bank of fog

and having reached the summit, the view was completely obstructed by an immense bank of fog

and reaching the summit, obstructed completely by an immense bank of fog, I could not enjoy the view

and reaching the summit, I could not enjoy the view because it was completely obstructed by an immense bank of fog.

and reaching the summit, the view was completely obstructed by an immense bank of fog

Correct answer:

and reaching the summit, I could not enjoy the view because it was completely obstructed by an immense bank of fog.

Explanation:

The question is an example of a dangling modifier. The dependent clause must modify the subject of the independent clause. In this case, the subject that it modifies (ostensibly, a hiker of some sort) is absent from the sentence. The correct version includes a subject that agrees with the modifying dependent clause.

Example Question #283 : Correcting Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Caring for a pet, responsibility is something children can learn.

Possible Answers:

Caring for a pet, responsibility is something children can learn.

Caring for a pet, responsibility is something children learn.

Caring for a pet responsibility is something children can learn.

Caring for a pet, responsibility is learned by children.

Responsibility is something children can learn by caring for a pet.

Correct answer:

Responsibility is something children can learn by caring for a pet.

Explanation:

With the sentence phrased the way it is, the thing that is "caring for a pet" appears to be "responsibility." This dangling modifier needs to be changed to make it clear that "children" are "caring for a pet." The correct answer choice is "Responsibility is something children can learn by caring for a pet."

Example Question #71 : Correcting Dangling Modifier Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Having tallied all of the votes in the municipal election, the candidates hoped for the best as the election officials meticulously reviewed the final results.

Possible Answers:

the candidates hoped for the best, and the election officials meticulously reviewed the final results

the candidates hoped for the best as the election officials meticulously reviewed the final results

the election officials meticulously reviewed the final results as the candidates hoped for the best

the candidates, hoping for the best, as the election officials meticulously reviewed the final results

the election officials meticulously reviewed the final results with the candidates hoping for the best

Correct answer:

the election officials meticulously reviewed the final results as the candidates hoped for the best

Explanation:

The modifier "Having tallied . . ." must modify "the election officials," so "the election officials" must be the subject of the sentence. Otherwise, the opening clause of the sentence would be considered a dangling modifier.

Example Question #74 : Correcting Modifier Placement Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Feared throughout the company for his fiery temper, the VP's reputation preceded him.

Possible Answers:

Feared throughout the company for his fiery temper, the VP's reputation preceded him.

Feared throughout the company for his fiery temper, the VP had a reputation that preceded him.

Feared throughout the company for a fiery temper, the VP's reputation preceded him.

Feared throughout the company for his fiery temper, the VP's reputation is one that preceded him.

Feared throughout the company for his fiery temper is the VP, whose reputation preceded him.

Correct answer:

Feared throughout the company for his fiery temper, the VP had a reputation that preceded him.

Explanation:

The modifier "Feared throughout the company..." modifies "the VP" as a person, not the "VP's reputation," which is the subject of the main clause. The subject that a modifier modifies must correspond. In other words, "the VP" has to be the subject of the following clause, not "the VP's reputation." When a dependent introductory clause modifies a subject that is not the subject of the main clause it creates what is called a dangling modifier.

Example Question #81 : Correcting Modifier Placement Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Trying to keep her balance on the tightrope, the trapeze artist’s toe caught the rope and somersaulted onto the net below.

Possible Answers:

the trapeze artist caught the rope with her toes and somersaulted onto the net below.

the trapeze artist somersaulted onto the net below when her toes were caught in the rope.

the trapeze artist caught the rope with her toes, which made her somersault onto the net below.

the trapeze artist’s toes caught the rope and somersaulted onto the net below.

the toes of the trapeze artist caught the rope and somersaulted onto the net below.

Correct answer:

the trapeze artist caught the rope with her toes and somersaulted onto the net below.

Explanation:

After the comma we need the name of the person. In this sentence the dependent introductory clause (which is not underlined) is "her" which cannot describe a "toe." In order to fix this dangling modifier, the subject of the main clause needs to be changed to "the trapeze artist."

Example Question #82 : Correcting Modifier Placement Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Although not nearly as well-known a monarch as his son Charlemagne, historians consider Pepin the Short almost as important to the success of the Carolingian dynasty.

Possible Answers:

Although not nearly as well known a monarch as

Although he is not nearly as well-known a monarch as

While he is not as nearly a monarch as well-known as

Although not nearly as well-known a monarch as

While not a monarch as nearly well-known as

Correct answer:

Although he is not nearly as well-known a monarch as

Explanation:

There are two major errors here: a modification error; and an idiomatic expression that must be in the correct form, "the idiom X is not nearly as well-known a Y as Z[is]."

As the phrase Although not… Charlemagne would be nonsensical as a description of the historians instead of Pepin the Short, the first clause must become an independent clause by inserting "he is." Moreover, the idiom must be corrected to "he is not nearly as well-known a monarch as … Charlemagne [is]."

Example Question #83 : Correcting Modifier Placement Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Striving all night to complete the level, the game transported Richard through various water worlds filled with otherworldly creatures.

Possible Answers:

Striving all night to complete the level, the game carried Richard

Striving all night to complete the level, the game took Richard

Striving all night to complete the level, the game's transport of Richard

Striving all night through the beautifully designed levels, Richard was transported

Striving all night to complete the level, the game transported Richard

Correct answer:

Striving all night through the beautifully designed levels, Richard was transported

Explanation:

This is a classic dangling modifier error. The dangling modifier should always be followed by the noun it modifies. In this case, the only answer choice which correctly resolves this issue also implements the passive voice. Although this might dissuade you, it is important to weigh your options and ask yourself what the nature of the problem is and which answer choice resolves that issue.

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