GMAT Verbal : Correcting Phrase, Clause, and Sentence Errors

Study concepts, example questions & explanations for GMAT Verbal

varsity tutors app store varsity tutors android store

Example Questions

Example Question #3 : Correcting Dangling Modifier Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Exhausted by the months he had spent working on the project, the executive's relief was clear to everyone who attended the final meeting.

Possible Answers:

the executive was clearly relieved, according to everyone who attended the final meeting.

the executive's relief was clear to anyone who attended the final meeting.

the executive's relief was clear, according to everyone who attended the final meeting.

the relief of the executive was clear according to everyone who attended the final meeting.

the executive's relief was clear to everyone who attended the final meeting.

Correct answer:

the executive was clearly relieved, according to everyone who attended the final meeting.

Explanation:

This sentence is an example of a dangling modifier, as the sentence reads as though it is the "relief," rather than the "executive," who is "exhausted by the months spent working on the project." This confusion needs to be cleared up to show that the executive is the one who is exhausted. The only answer choice that properly corrects the dangling modifier is "the executive was clearly relieved, according to everyone who attended the final meeting."

Example Question #2 : Correcting Dangling Modifier Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Unable to play safely with other children, Jenny's mother pulled her out of summer camp early.

Possible Answers:

Jenny's mother pulled her out summer camp earlier.

Jenny's mother early pulled her out of summer camp.

Jenny was pulled out of summer camp early.

early Jenny's mother pulled her out of summer camp.

Jenny earlier was pulled out of summer camp.

Correct answer:

Jenny was pulled out of summer camp early.

Explanation:

The example sentence includes an unclear modifier. The antecedent phrase "Unable to play safely with other children" describes Jenny, but the highlighted section makes this unclear by referring to Jenny's mother immediately after the phrase. It could be understood from the example sentence that Jenny's mother was pulled out of summer camp early. The correct version of the sentence reads, "Unable to play safely with other children, Jenny was pulled out of summer camp early."

Example Question #3 : Correcting Dangling Modifier Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Coming back to the farm, the gruesome scene was seen by everyone in the car.

Possible Answers:

the gruesome scene being seen by everyone in the car.

the gruesome scene was seen by everyone in the car.

the gruesome scene saw by everyone in the car.

the gruesome scene was seen by everyone at the car.

everyone in the car saw the gruesome scene.

Correct answer:

everyone in the car saw the gruesome scene.

Explanation:

The sentence is written with a dangling modifier, which makes the sentence read as though the "gruesome scene" was what was "coming back to the farm." The sentence needs to be restructured to clarify this problem. The only answer choice that does this is "everyone in the car saw the gruesome scene."

Example Question #5 : Dangling Modifier Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Waiting for the crucial trial to begin, the anxiety Neil felt was almost overwhelming.

Possible Answers:

the anxiety almost overwhelmed Neil.

Neil's anxiety felt almost overwhelming.

Neil felt almost overwhelmed with anxiety.

the anxiety being felt by Neil was almost overwhelming.

the anxiety Neil felt was almost overwhelming.

Correct answer:

Neil felt almost overwhelmed with anxiety.

Explanation:

When a sentence begins with a dangling participle or descriptive phrase, the person or thing described in that phrase (in this case, "Neil") must immediately follow it. Only one answer choice does this correctly. The answer choice that begins "Neil's anxiety" may appear to do so, but it does not, because the possessive "Neil's" is no longer the subject, but is describing the anxiety.

Example Question #1841 : Correcting Grammatical Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Coming around the corner, the skyscrapers came clearly into view across the river.

Possible Answers:

Coming around the corner, the skyscrapers came clearly into view across the river.

Coming around the corner, the skyscrapers are viewed clearly across the river.

Comes around the corner, the skyscrapers came clearly into view across the river.

Coming around the corner, the skyscrapers come clearly into view across the river.

Coming around the corner, the people got a view of the skyscrapers across the river.

Correct answer:

Coming around the corner, the people got a view of the skyscrapers across the river.

Explanation:

The sentence as written contains a dangling modifier, as the construction of the sentence implies the skyscrapers are what is "coming around the corner." The word order can be changed to make this much more clear. The correct answer is "Coming around the corner, the people got a view of the skyscrapers across the river." 

Example Question #6 : Correcting Modifier Placement Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices repeats the underlined portion as it is written.

Coming upon the hills, the sun began setting behind the travelers.

Possible Answers:

As the travelers came upon the hill, the sun began setting behind them.

As the sun began setting, travelers coming upon the hills.

Coming upon the hills, the sun began setting behind the travelers.

Coming upon the hills as the sun began setting begind the travelers.

Coming upon the hills, the sun set behind the travelers.

Correct answer:

As the travelers came upon the hill, the sun began setting behind them.

Explanation:

The sentence as written contains a dangling modifier, in that "the sun" is not what is "coming upon the hills." The sentence needs to be rewritten to show that the travelers were the ones "coming upon the hills." "As the travelers came upon the hill, the sun began setting behind them," is the correct answer choice.

Example Question #3 : Correcting Dangling Modifier Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices repeats the underlined portion as it is written.

Passing by the waterfront, the ducks and geese floated around as spectators strolled.

Possible Answers:

the ducks and geese were floating around as spectators strolled.

the ducks and geese floated around as spectators strolled.

spectators strolled as the ducks and geese floated around.

the ducks and geese and spectators floated around and strolled.

spectators strolled but the ducks and geese floated around.

Correct answer:

spectators strolled as the ducks and geese floated around.

Explanation:

The best answer fixes the dangling participle that starts the sentence (the subject of the main clause should be the one doing the action described in the opening phrase), and uses a logical coordinator.

Example Question #1 : Correcting Dangling Modifier Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices repeats the underlined portion as it is written.

A power-hungry dictator who killed millions of people, I wrote my term paper on the infamous Joseph Stalin.

Possible Answers:

I wrote my term paper on the infamous Joseph Stalin, a power-hungry dictator who killed millions of people.

A power-hungry dictator who killed millions of people, my term paper was about the infamous Joseph Stalin.

I wrote my term paper on the power-hungry dictator and he was the infamous Joseph Stalin.

A power-hungry dictator, I wrote my term paper on the infamous Joseph Stalin, who killed millions of people.

A power-hungry dictator who killed millions of people, I wrote my term paper on the infamous Joseph Stalin.

Correct answer:

I wrote my term paper on the infamous Joseph Stalin, a power-hungry dictator who killed millions of people.

Explanation:

As it is written, the initial sentence suggests that the speaker and author of the term paper is a murderous dictator, which is almost certainly not the speaker's intended claim. To fix this, we need to bring the modifying clause closer to the person to whom it is referring. One way that we can do that is by reversing the order of the two clauses.

Example Question #1841 : Correcting Grammatical Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English. One of the answer choices repeats the underlined portion as it is written.

Forced to draw a freehand map of the United States, all of her knowledge of geography suddenly left her.

Possible Answers:

all of her knowledge of geography was suddenly leaving.

all of her knowledge of geography suddenly left her.

she suddenly forgot all of her knowledge of geography.

she forgot all of her knowledge of geography suddenly.

all of her knowledge of geography suddenly forgotten.

Correct answer:

she suddenly forgot all of her knowledge of geography.

Explanation:

This sentence has a dangling participle; its word order separates "forced to draw a freehand map of the United States" from its object, "her," by a significant amount. The sentence can be made clearer by making sure that the object described by its introductory phrase immediately follows that phrase. The best answer choice, "she suddenly forgot all of her knowledge of geography," fixes this and keeps the adverb “suddenly” close to its verb, resulting in the sentence, "Forced to draw a freehand map of the United States, she suddenly forgot all of her knowledge of geography."

Example Question #1842 : Correcting Grammatical Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Although she studied traditional French cuisine, food critics praised the master chef for her culinary innovations.

Possible Answers:

food critics praised the master chef for her culinary innovations.

food critics praising the master chef for her culinary innovations.

food critics praised the master chef because of her culinary innovations.

the master chef received praise from critics for her culinary innovations.

food critics have praised the master chef for her culinary innovations.

Correct answer:

the master chef received praise from critics for her culinary innovations.

Explanation:

The original text contains a misplaced modifier, making it sound as though the food critics were the ones who studied traditional French cuisine.

Only the answer choice "the master chef received praise from critics for her culinary innovations" avoids the misplaced modifier error because it places the person who did actually study traditional French cuisine—the master chef—immediately after the introductory modifying phrase.

Tired of practice problems?

Try live online GMAT prep today.

1-on-1 Tutoring
Live Online Class
1-on-1 + Class
Learning Tools by Varsity Tutors