GMAT Verbal : GMAT Verbal

Study concepts, example questions & explanations for GMAT Verbal

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Example Questions

Example Question #41 : Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors

The boys all enjoyed swimming, hiking, and to run on the camp's property.

Possible Answers:

swimming, hiking, and to run on the camp's property.

to swim, to hike, and to run on the camp's property.

swimming, to hike, and to run on the camp's property.

to swimming, to hiking, and to running on the camp's property.

to swim, hiking, and to run on the camp's property.

Correct answer:

to swim, to hike, and to run on the camp's property.

Explanation:

The three activities in the list all need to have a parallel structure, and be grammatically correct, ruling out the answer choice featuring the construction "to running . . ." The best answer choice, therefore, is "to swim, to hike, and to run on the camp's property."

Example Question #11 : Correcting Parallel Structure Errors

The actor's moods would swing wildly, and in the span of five minutes he could want to fight, to sing, and discussing important topics.

Possible Answers:

to fight, to sing and discussing important topics.

to fight, to sing, and discussing important topics.

to fight to sing and discussing important topics.

to fight, singing, and discussing important topics.

to fight, to sing, and to discuss important topics.

Correct answer:

to fight, to sing, and to discuss important topics.

Explanation:

Any list like the one underlined in the sentence must feature a parallel structure in word form. Otherwise, as in the sentence, it compares unlike things such as a "want to fight" and "discussing important topics." The sentence needs to be improved to feature a parallel structure, something only done by the answer choice "to fight, to sing, and to discuss important topics."

Example Question #11 : Correcting Parallel Structure Errors

The overbearing woman relentlessly criticized the girls for wearing makeup, having parties, and their inappropriate dress.

Possible Answers:

for wearing makeup, in having parties, and their inappropriate dress.

for wearing makeup, having parties, and their inappropriate dress.

for wearing makeup, having parties, and dressing inappropriately.

for wearing makeup, having parties, and there inappropriate dress.

for wearing makeup, having parties, and their inappropriately dressed.

Correct answer:

for wearing makeup, having parties, and dressing inappropriately.

Explanation:

The list that forms the underlined portion of the sentence has three items, but one is in a different format to the others, meaning unlike things are grouped together. Any such list needs to feature a parallel structure, where all the forms match each other. The only answer choice that appropriately does this is "for wearing makeup, having parties, and dressing inappropriately."

Example Question #21 : Correcting Parallel Structure Errors

To fish, hunting, and forage are necessary survival skills the group wanted to teach children.

Possible Answers:

To fish, hunting, and foraging 

Fishing, hunting, and forage 

Fishing, hunting, and foraging

To fish, hunting, and forage 

To fish, hunt, and foraging

Correct answer:

Fishing, hunting, and foraging

Explanation:

The list underlined in the sentence contains three unlike things, as the forms of the words are all quite different. All such lists need to feature a parallel structure to show it is a list of similar things. The correct answer choice, therefore, is "Fishing, hunting, and foraging." 

Example Question #11 : Correcting Parallel Structure Errors

The father was concerned about his children reading too little and to watch too much TV.

Possible Answers:

reading too little and watch too much TV.

reading little and to watch much TV.

reading too little and watching too much TV.

reading very little and to watch very much TV.

reading too little and to watch too much TV.

Correct answer:

reading too little and watching too much TV.

Explanation:

The two elements in the underlined portion of the sentence describe two different kinds of action, "reading" and "to watch." They need to be changed to have a similar structure to be described in the same clause; therefore, the correct answer choice is "reading too little and watching too much TV."

Example Question #41 : Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors

The rejection of classical art was disturbing to neither pundits and laymen.

Which option best improves the underlined section of this sentence?

Possible Answers:

both pundits and laymen. 

pundits nor laymen. 

pundits or laymen. 

either pundits and laymen. 

neither pundits nor laymen. 

Correct answer:

both pundits and laymen. 

Explanation:

Logically, the rejection of art would be disturbing to pundits (a noun defined as learned individuals) and laymen. Using this knowledge, students could eliminate any answer choice that would say that this would not be disturbing. Even without this knowledge, based on the rule of concordance, students would know that the only plausible options are "both pundits and laymen" or "neither pundits nor laymen," because "neither" always goes with "nor" and "either" always goes with "or." So, the correct answer is "both pundits and laymen."

Example Question #11 : Correcting Parallel Structure Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

My mother has always been amazing at cutting, sewing, and the design of clothing.

Possible Answers:

cutting, sewing, and the designing of clothing.

cutting, sewing, and designing clothings.

cutting, sewing, and designing clothing.

to cut, to sew, and to design clothing.

cutting, sewing, and the design of clothing.

Correct answer:

cutting, sewing, and designing clothing.

Explanation:

The verb structure in a sentence involving parallel structure, such as this one, should remain constant. In the original sentence, there are two progressive verbs followed by a noun that would be better written as a verb. Changing "design of clothing" to "designing clothing" results in a more consistent parallel structure that involves three progressive verbs.

Example Question #81 : Correcting Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Dan loves to play tennis and riding his bicycle.

Possible Answers:

ridden his bicycle

having ridden his bicycle

to ride his bicycle

rode his bicycle

rides his bicycle

Correct answer:

to ride his bicycle

Explanation:

This sentence uses parallel structure, so we need to make sure both of its verbs match in terms of tense and verb form. We cannot change "to play tennis," so we need to make "riding his bicycle" match the tense and verb form of "to play tennis." "To play" is an infinitive, so we need to change "riding" to "to ride," another infinitive, yielding "to ride his bicycle," the correct answer.

Example Question #21 : Correcting Other Phrase, Clause, And Sentence Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

Singing, dancing, and the ability to act at the highest level are all required of Broadway performers.

Possible Answers:

Singing, to dance, and the ability to act

Singing, dancing, and the ability to act

Singing, dancing, and acting

Singing dancing and the ability to act

Singing, dancing, and the ability of acting

Correct answer:

Singing, dancing, and acting

Explanation:

The list that is underlined in the sentence has an issue with containing unlike forms. Therefore, they should be changed to have a consistent parallel structure. "Singing, dancing, and acting" is the only answer choice that uses the appropriate structure.

Example Question #21 : Correcting Parallel Structure Errors

Replace the underlined portion with the answer choice that results in a sentence that is clear, precise, and meets the requirements of standard written English.

The soccer players were required to be skilled at kicking, running, and defensive skills.

Possible Answers:

at the kicking, the running, and the defensive skills.

at kicking, running, and their defensive skills.

at kicking, running, and defensive skills.

at kicking, running, and defending.

at kicking, running, and defensive.

Correct answer:

at kicking, running, and defending.

Explanation:

The list featured in the underlined section is united by the same verb, but it does not have the same structure in all of its elements, two of which are gerunds ("kicking" and "running") and one of which is a noun phrase ("defensive skills"). The sentence needs to have its elements changed so that they match each other. Only "at kicking, running, and defending" features the appropriate parallel structure.

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