In this part of the story, compare the two choices for one sentence: "Riley put on her sneakers. , she tied the laces tightly so she wouldn't trip." Which transition better shows the sequence of events?
- After that (correct answer)
- On the other hand
- Similarly
- However
Explanation: This question tests CCSS.W.4.3.c (Use a variety of transitional words and phrases to manage the sequence of events). Transitional words and phrases MANAGE SEQUENCE by: (1) Showing TIME relationships (when events happen—then, later, soon, suddenly, meanwhile), (2) Clarifying ORDER (what happens first/next/last—first, next, after that, finally), (3) Showing RELATIONSHIPS between events (simultaneous, cause-effect, contrast). In this context, Riley performs two sequential actions: putting on sneakers, then tying the laces—one action naturally follows the other. Choice A "After that" is correct because it shows the appropriate sequential relationship between putting on shoes and tying them. Choices B, C, and D represent transition type confusion which happens when students don't understand that contrast transitions ("On the other hand," "However") or comparison transitions ("Similarly") don't show sequence—they show different types of relationships. Teaching strategy: Relationship check: Is transition appropriate? Use sequence transitions (After that, Next, Then) for actions that follow in time. Avoid contrast transitions (However, On the other hand) unless showing opposition, or comparison transitions (Similarly) unless showing likeness.